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kaze Registered User
Joined: 21 Sep 2001 Posts: 17 Location: San Marcos, Texas
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Posted: Mon Oct 01, 2001 3:48 pm Post subject: Chapter 9 |
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Anyone know when Chapter Nine will be released? I'm still waiting at the edge of my seat to see where it goes... |
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Sslaxx Registered User
Joined: 20 Nov 2000 Posts: 71 Location: Malvern, Worcs., UK
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Posted: Fri Oct 05, 2001 3:08 pm Post subject: Chapter 9 |
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quote: Originally posted by Kaze Okami:
Anyone know when Chapter Nine will be released? I'm still waiting at the edge of my seat to see where it goes...
When it's done, I suppose. |
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ChrisFoxx Site Owner
Joined: 19 Mar 2001 Posts: 1056 Location: Eau Claire, PA USA
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Posted: Sun Oct 07, 2001 2:35 pm Post subject: Chapter 9 |
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quote: Originally posted by Kaze Okami:
Anyone know when Chapter Nine will be released? I'm still waiting at the edge of my seat to see where it goes...
That's largely my fault, and I do apologize.
"Tabitha" Chapter 9 is somewhere between 1/2 and 2/3 done, then it's off to Eric for his Stamp-o-Approval.
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Nahima Site Owner
Joined: 12 May 2001 Posts: 125 Location: USA
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Posted: Wed Jan 09, 2002 12:22 am Post subject: Chapter 9 |
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ITS UP FINALLY UP!!!!! OH MY GOD!!!!! IT WAS AWESOME!
Chris, you have kept us in suspense for so long, now once again after you finish reading the chapter you are again in suspense.
I truly liked how you made Tabitha let her emotions flow threw. If I figure correctly we are up to the area in which Sabrina had just lost her job? So she doesn't work for Zig Zag jusy yet, but she is with Chris. Is that about right with the time area? If not lets see what we can do about it and get it right.
Once again great story, I can't wait for chapter 10! Once again a CLIFF HANGER!!!
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anthony Site Owner
Joined: 12 Nov 2001 Posts: 1304 Location: Norway
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Posted: Wed Jan 09, 2002 7:11 am Post subject: Chapter 9 |
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Yeah...
And what a cliffhanger!
Don't you dare let the next chapter take as long as this....
The suspense when Tabitha walked up those stair... I got that sinking feeling of dread.
Or is that beause it's nearly lunch?
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Shirh Khan Site Owner
Joined: 04 Jul 2001 Posts: 332 Location: In transition/between states
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Posted: Wed Jan 09, 2002 2:08 pm Post subject: Chapter 9 |
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quote: Originally posted by Nahima:
ITS UP FINALLY UP!!!!! OH MY GOD!!!!! IT WAS AWESOME!
...If I figure correctly we are up to the area in which Sabrina had just lost her job? So she doesn't work for Zig Zag jusy yet, but she is with Chris....
Oh, my- Tabitha went back even further than I'd thought! *grin* But, if Nah is right, and this is just after Sabby lost her job w/ that "other" company, and before she worked w/ Zig Zag, then Chris isn't in the picture right now, either- she met him after she'd been working for Zig Zag a little bit. That being the case, there is the potential to royally screw things up! Oh, what a tangled web we weave, when at first we intend to deceive-- Tabitha has been deceitful, and now it *could* very well come back to hurt her.
I do agree w/ Nahima: this was a cliffhanger, and our respectable author should do his best not to allow so much time between chapters again!
Good chapter, Foxx!
-Shirh Khan
[ January 09, 2002: Message edited by: Shirh Khan ] |
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Nahima Site Owner
Joined: 12 May 2001 Posts: 125 Location: USA
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Posted: Wed Jan 09, 2002 6:34 pm Post subject: Chapter 9 |
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Actually she is with Chris right now. She had already met Chris when the "other" job fired her. Remember the Chapter where Debbye dropped Sabrina off at her work and Sabrina discovered the siganure boquet of roses with one carnation? Remember her comment to Debbye on had she fallen in love with Chris? "I've fallen and I can't get up."?
SEE! with all that time difference from chapter 9 to all the other chapters we FORGET! See we shouldn't be put on such a Cliff Hanger again!!
Great work again!
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Cateagle Site Owner
Joined: 20 Nov 2000 Posts: 1004 Location: Ft. Worth, TX
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Posted: Wed Jan 09, 2002 9:00 pm Post subject: Chapter 9 |
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quote: Originally posted by Mike Regan:
Actually she is with Chris right now. She had already met Chris when the "other" job fired her. Remember the Chapter where Debbye dropped Sabrina off at her work and Sabrina discovered the siganure boquet of roses with one carnation? Remember her comment to Debbye on had she fallen in love with Chris? "I've fallen and I can't get up."?
Being let go from her other job - the one where she was replaced by "clip art" - happens in Chapter 11 of the Sabrina story. So Chris is very definitely in the picture at this point in time.
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kaze Registered User
Joined: 21 Sep 2001 Posts: 17 Location: San Marcos, Texas
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Posted: Fri Jan 11, 2002 6:32 am Post subject: Chapter 9 |
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Nice one, Chris and James! Now, I'm going to wait in agony for the next chapter... :P
And yes, this is right 'round chapter 11. And it may get more interesting from there...
Peace! |
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rphillips Registered User
Joined: 25 Oct 2001 Posts: 1 Location: Staffordshire
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Posted: Sat Jan 12, 2002 11:36 am Post subject: Chapter 9 |
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i already posted to chris about this but oh well....
DAMN YOU! DAMN YOU FOR LEAVING US ON SUCH A CLIFFHANGER!?!?!?!?DAMN YOOOUUU.....?!?!?!
[shakes fist dramatically at chris'direction]
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Nahima Site Owner
Joined: 12 May 2001 Posts: 125 Location: USA
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Posted: Sat Jan 12, 2002 8:42 pm Post subject: Chapter 9 |
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Yes, Shame on you! Naughty little Chris! But hey, now we are just going to have to sit and wait for more!!! I am sorry I left you out JAMES GREAT JOB AS WELL! (James Try to get Chris to write Faster!!!!)
Good Luck Chris, hope everything works out for you!!! |
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Tygon Site Owner
Joined: 03 Apr 2001 Posts: 2497 Location: Isernhagen, Lowersaxony, Germany
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Posted: Sun Jan 13, 2002 4:06 pm Post subject: Chapter 9 |
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Let me second that.
I made the same promise as Mike but now that it's official, Chris, I want to say that my best wishes and hopes are with you. |
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kaze Registered User
Joined: 21 Sep 2001 Posts: 17 Location: San Marcos, Texas
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Posted: Wed Jan 16, 2002 11:20 pm Post subject: Chapter 9 |
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May the blessings of which ever dietydieties you believe in be upon you, Chris!
~Kaze |
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mephit Registered User
Joined: 26 Nov 2000 Posts: 1 Location: Mahanoy CIty, PA, USA
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Posted: Fri Jan 18, 2002 12:18 am Post subject: Chapter 9 |
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Great chapter, you two. Especially the suspense at the end. I've been saying for a long while that when they do finally meet up, the chapter would end right at that spot. And the next will probably begin with Tabitha wasting no time in breaking down into tears. But I'm kinda pleasanttly surprised that all this happened so soon. I wasn't expecting The Meeting to happen for a few chapters, yet..
One thing struck me as odd, though. In chapter 7, after his conversation with Tabitha, Richard went and inspected the modules. From the way it was written, it looked like he figure out that Tabitha had made a switch, and I couldn't understand why Richard was so confused in the recent chapter. But I just realized that maybe the module that Tabitha put in was so good of a copy that Richard thought it was real, and he "should've known better" than to go and check it in the first place, that Tabitha wouldn't go and do something like she went and did.
Gah, I'm sure there was something else I wanted to say, but I can't remember what it was. Oh, well.
Looking forward to the next chapter.
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mfwhite Site Owner
Joined: 21 Feb 2002 Posts: 327 Location: Big land mass north of the USA
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Posted: Sun Mar 24, 2002 4:07 pm Post subject: Chapter 9 |
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I came I read i felt joy...
I give it a thumbs up.
I've enjoyed Tabitha, she's cool..it will be interesting when she actually meets herself, will the universe implode
Oh well only time will tell.
Anyway thats my two cents... |
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