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Virmir
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PostPosted: Mon Jan 01, 2007 11:21 pm    Post subject: "Down the River" Reply with quote

(Story text removed because I *sold* it! See below.)
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Teric
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PostPosted: Tue Jan 02, 2007 2:26 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Neato! That was some pretty cool story telling. The twist where the younger Jackal saved him by 'counter-infecting' him was very clever.

There is some potential for this story to continue and develop into something bigger.

Nice work!
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PostPosted: Tue Jan 02, 2007 11:15 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Well done, really kept my intrest through the entire story.

Im goin to have to agree with Teric too, good potential to continue writing it.

Overall I think you did a good job writing it, keep it up.

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Virmir
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PostPosted: Tue Jan 02, 2007 12:51 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Thanks for reading to the both of you. I'm glad you liked it! I really hadn't considered doing anything more with it, but now I'll think about it!
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PostPosted: Mon Jan 08, 2007 7:22 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

welcome back for me Exclamation Razz

i really liked it. you can keep on writing if you can do stuff this good.

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Virmir
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PostPosted: Mon Sep 17, 2007 6:28 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Hey folks, I have some wonderful news about this story (if any of you actually remember it from nine months ago!)

I just sold this to a furry mag! I'm going to be a *published author*!

This is crazy. I've been writing for less than a year! I never really expected to actually see my work in print, let alone so soon! The name of the publication is "Anthrolations" and it is due out later this year... So awesome!

Thank you all for your feedback and comments! I couldn't have done it without you!

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PostPosted: Mon Sep 17, 2007 6:37 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Woa, CRAZY! That's awesome, Virmir! So are you going to continue the story or leave it as is?

Congratulations on being published. Smile

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PostPosted: Wed Sep 19, 2007 6:11 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Well congregation on selling your story. You will have to let us know what publication it is in so I can read as I guess I missed it when it was free here.


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Virmir
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PostPosted: Wed Sep 19, 2007 8:28 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Thanks folks!

I'm probably going to leave it as-is, Teric, seeing as I haven't had any more ideas to add to it. That's not to say I won't at some point in the future. I've already had ideas to do another story set in the same universe as another tale I wrote around here that I wasn't planning to do anything more with either. Smile

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