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webkilla · Posted: Tue Jun 15, 2004 6:06 pm Post subject:

Uhm... no

1) I do not believe that ZZ would eva be that open about what her father did to her

2) scrotum in bag? How are you gonna explain Ardens return if anyone other than Sheila gets to see him?

3) WE WANT SHIELA!

4) Excellent chapter, although not your best...

hikaru · Posted: Tue Jun 15, 2004 6:31 pm Post subject:

Nameless · Posted: Wed Jun 16, 2004 2:49 pm Post subject:

Interesting chapter. An interview is a great way to catch up with a lot of the backstory.

What I'm really interesting is, is how much (if anything) Zig is going to cut out (and what).

webkilla · Posted: Wed Jun 16, 2004 4:39 pm Post subject:

Shadu · Posted: Wed Jun 16, 2004 8:07 pm Post subject:

COOL!!!

Hortmage · Posted: Wed Jun 16, 2004 8:35 pm Post subject:

hikaru · Posted: Wed Jun 16, 2004 9:07 pm Post subject:

Hate to break it to you, that's the same site.

I think the problem is that I moved the web page to a new host over a week ago and there are machines out there going to the old URL.

MicroSlop is notorious about Windoze boxes never releasing their DNS chache so if you've not rebooted for a while, or your ISP uses a Windoze box for DNS and THEY haven't rebooted for a while, you're gonig to keep getting the wrong address even though there's a 48 hour maximum lifetime associated with the domain. Really pisses me off, but nothing I can do about it.

Cheers

Hortmage · Posted: Wed Jun 16, 2004 9:40 pm Post subject:

OK, I'm back again after having read Chapter 6.

Oh. My. God. Shocked

I'm going to have to disagree with Webkilla...this was an awesome chapter! Not only the length, which was impressive...

Hey, it's quality, not quantity!

...but the sheer amount of backstory you provided. I'm assuming you ran this past James Bruner beforehand, but how much of this is canon to her history, as per Zig Zag, the Story?

I like the wide range of questions that were asked. I also appreciated the raw emotion Zig shows when dealing with some of Logan's questions. Very well written, very believable.

The "story" of Sheila and Arden at the end...this, I assume, was the "history" that Lucifer implanted in her mind. I'd believe it. Only a purely evil being could possibly come up with something that horrible and twisted.

...Um, sorry about that, Hikaru.... Embarassed

Anyway...it's no wonder that Sheila is an emotional wreck. If she really had lived through the entire 9 month ordeal, this warehouse scene alone would be enough to send most beings over the edge. Then, to spend 9 months in the mafia bordello.... It's borderline whether you should slap a warning on that last part of the chapter, Hikaru...that was truly twisted.

All in all...my congratulations on this chapter! Well done!

And I'm changing the url I use to get to your stories...!

hikaru · Posted: Wed Jun 16, 2004 10:01 pm Post subject:

hikaru · Posted: Thu Jun 17, 2004 12:16 am Post subject:

Nosnibor · Posted: Thu Jun 17, 2004 5:44 pm Post subject:

A great chapter. Yet another version of Zig Zag's past to confuse the fans. Confused

But one thing made me very suspicious: during the last part of the interview, ever since James joined them on the stage, Logan kept looking for the red light that indicates which camera is 'looking'. Now I'd have expected all cameras to be active all the time so Zig Zag can choose during editing which one gave the best view of each situation. The little red light on the camera would only be important if only one channel could be recorded or transmitted, i.e. when they're live on air.

hikaru · Posted: Thu Jun 17, 2004 6:07 pm Post subject:

In production, they use a "red light" to indicate the preferred "hot" camera. It goes back to the old days of live broadcasting. Even though the interview is being taped with one tape for each camera, there's a master deck that the director is using as he switches between cameras. All that can be changed in final editing, but it's still there.

Hortmage · Posted: Thu Jun 17, 2004 9:06 pm Post subject:

hikaru · Posted: Thu Jun 17, 2004 9:23 pm Post subject:

Hortmage · Posted: Thu Jun 17, 2004 9:28 pm Post subject: