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PostPosted: Mon Apr 26, 2004 1:22 am    Post subject: And so it ends.... Reply with quote

Four years in the making.
500,000 words in the typing.
136 chapters all told.....

And now, the final chapter has been posted in the main story....

At least until I get around to writing Act IV that is. *laughs*

32 pages long, folks. This is it. Get it while it's hot!

Chers

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PostPosted: Mon Apr 26, 2004 2:44 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

*Kicks self*
DAMN!!! And I still havent read 49 yet everytime it comes to mind something keeps getting in the way damnit why the he11 do I bother with unimprtent stuff like.....work or sleep Confused Oh well I'm going to have a lot to read on my next weekend, can't wait.

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PostPosted: Mon Apr 26, 2004 2:54 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

the end of an epic tale... for now. Many thanks for what you've done so far Hikaru, you've given quite a thrill ride for this fox with your literary works.
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PostPosted: Mon Apr 26, 2004 4:10 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Excellent story, Hikaru.

I've enjoyed reading it from beginning to end...probably more times than would be considered healthy. Now, i'm saddened to see it come to a close... like watching the final episode of a favorite Tv show.

It is definately a tale of epic proportions!

When you do begin writing act four, I'm sure you'll once again have us super-glued to the monitor! Very Happy

Once again, Geart story and exquisite work, Hikaru!
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PostPosted: Mon Apr 26, 2004 9:24 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

I'm not sure when I'll start Act 4. I want to try and work on Yin's again. Give me a month or so and we'll see.

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PostPosted: Mon Apr 26, 2004 10:27 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Great chapter Hikaru. I know we'll all be eagerly awaiting the beggining and end of act IV.
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PostPosted: Mon Apr 26, 2004 1:37 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

<shouts random qoutes from souths parks more creative language-usage at hikaru>

How dare you!?!


You better get your fussy butt busy on making a chapter one in the fourth act or there'll be a lot of testy fans out here that wont like it!!!


apart from that, great chapter! (Although some clarification on Ardens situation - or lack of - would have been nice to see)

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PostPosted: Mon Apr 26, 2004 2:39 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

webkilla wrote:
apart from that, great chapter! (Although some clarification on Ardens situation - or lack of - would have been nice to see)

Sorry, but that would defeat the entire point of having a cliff-hangar ending!

Maybe I should title Act IV: Where's Arden?

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PostPosted: Mon Apr 26, 2004 2:49 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Cliff-hanger my dear. That cliff is at least a light-year high.

Isn't there anyone (except for maybe Sheila, but I'm not sure about her either) who does not mix and wrap thr truth and lies like a fractal onion? Confused

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PostPosted: Mon Apr 26, 2004 3:21 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Gee, who'da thought that an epic tale regarding the outcome of the universe would involve a court hearing?

Great story Hikaru! I've enjoyed it since Act I. I look forward to your next literary project.

(By the way, which Japanese cartoon did you quote when Arden duplicated himself? I'm guessing "Naruto")

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PostPosted: Mon Apr 26, 2004 3:25 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Aramis Dagaz wrote:
Gee, who'da thought that an epic tale regarding the outcome of the universe would involve a court hearing?

At least none of the beings present were any more evil than the average lawyer... Twisted Evil

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PostPosted: Mon Apr 26, 2004 8:01 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Nameless wrote:
Aramis Dagaz wrote:
Gee, who'da thought that an epic tale regarding the outcome of the universe would involve a court hearing?

At least none of the beings present were any more evil than the average lawyer... Twisted Evil


I think that some lawyers could give Lucifer a run for his money on being evil and not even break a sweat doing it Twisted Evil

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PostPosted: Mon Apr 26, 2004 9:17 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Aramis Dagaz wrote:
(By the way, which Japanese cartoon did you quote when Arden duplicated himself? I'm guessing "Naruto")


Technically, that anime hasn't come out according to the official time-line. This is early 2001 as far as Sheila's concnerned. However, that is where I got the idea for the ability. Nothing like a good ninja cartoon to lighten up the week.

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PostPosted: Mon Apr 26, 2004 9:18 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Excellent job, Hikaru!!! My sincerest congratulations and thanks!

This surely is one He11 of a cliff-hanger...I'm most curious as to what false memories and alibi he gave Sheila, which would explain her absence, her pregnancy, and vindicate Zig Zag, all at once!

Whether we ever learn exactly what happens...I feel good knowing that Sheila at least made it home to have her kits.

Thanks for the excellent story!

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PostPosted: Tue Apr 27, 2004 6:15 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Hmmm, if most of the involved beings did not really have free will (the angel, Lucifer and probably Lakash), the "court" was mostly a sham, just an event to bring Arden to the point where he made his choice/wish.
(As was most of the quest.)

Hmmm, an interesting question:
Does God Himself have a "free will"? Or does the question even make sense?

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