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Concolor Registered User
Joined: 19 Nov 2001 Posts: 832 Location: South Carolina
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Posted: Sun Apr 21, 2002 2:19 pm Post subject: Feline Destiny |
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Very interesting. I do WONDER what comes next.
They aren't intending to keep the Mystic or its passengers, but that is assuming they make it to Helm. That might not be a sound assumption, given what we have already seen of this section of space.
So, why are Josh & Susan still 'out'?
What happened to their onboard computer?
Why are the hydrogen tanks empty?
Did they really get shunted forward in time, and if so, why?
What horrible thing does Tygon suspect, that he fears more than pirates?
Lots of clues. Lots of questions. Darn few answers.
Yet.
Stay tuned. I certainly plan to. |
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Pflarrian Registered User
Joined: 05 Apr 2001 Posts: 251 Location: Wandering around...
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Posted: Mon Apr 22, 2002 12:25 am Post subject: Feline Destiny |
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Tygon already got my comments, so I'll leave it for the rest of you to comment on. |
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Pflarrian Registered User
Joined: 05 Apr 2001 Posts: 251 Location: Wandering around...
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Posted: Tue Apr 23, 2002 12:04 am Post subject: Feline Destiny |
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I know bits of the answers, but only because I helped edit it, and I'm not telling.
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Tygon Site Owner
Joined: 03 Apr 2001 Posts: 2497 Location: Isernhagen, Lowersaxony, Germany
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Posted: Tue Apr 23, 2002 10:10 am Post subject: Feline Destiny |
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quote: Originally posted by Pflarrian:
I know bits of the answers, but only because I helped edit it, and I'm not telling.
For a moment I had to think hard where you knew these 'bits' but then I remembered |
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Tygon Site Owner
Joined: 03 Apr 2001 Posts: 2497 Location: Isernhagen, Lowersaxony, Germany
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Posted: Thu Apr 25, 2002 6:07 pm Post subject: Feline Destiny |
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quote: Originally posted by TVDAVE:
Sooooo! it was 2 half dead bodies, who would have been dead if not found by the fearless
crew of the Wild Star , so I was sorta close.
Yep, sorta
quote: Originally posted by TVDAVE:
The black background is hard to read during the day on lap top , but in the dark, here on a sand dune, under the stars it looks killer, while sipping a fine vintage cola.
Oh, well, I don't have a laptop. If I had i would have tried it.
If anything looks strange on the site, pease tell me so I can fix it.
quote: Originally posted by TVDAVE:
So Josh and Susan tied the knot, went on the honeymoon, and for some strange reason knocked out, sent to the future, and left to be found, hmmmm smells like a trap to me!!!
and what evils did Engineer Dave partake in
on Elysium, I guess its a place you cant take the kids to,
Well, I can say that Tygon did no evils on Elysium, but I'm not sure about certain members of the crew
And no, Elysium is definitely not a place for children. To say the truth, it's not a place for most living beings. If you want more info about that planet, mail me and I'll point you to it.
quote: Originally posted by TVDAVE:
Good stuff Ty , Im gonna take a guess here , is Zig Zag gonna be the evil space pirate, waiting to plunder and pillage the Wild Star, or will she be the ships nurse, Helloooooo Nurse!!!!lol but yep! another
good chapter , bring on more.
I'm glad you like it and more is in the works.
Regarding your guesses, TVDave Warner is about to be disappointed. Zig Zag is not a member of the crew, so no "Hellooooooooo Nurse!" in this story
Hmmm... a space pirate... in a certain way... nah, I better don't say more
You will meet her in chapter 5 or six, depanding on how 3 and 4 come out.
quote: Originally posted by TVDAVE:
well its almost midnight here, need sleep
ahhh for a hot bath ,
Heh, have fun in the tub and pleasant dreams |
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TVDAVE Site Owner
Joined: 11 Feb 2002 Posts: 238 Location: RIYADH, SAUDI ARABIA
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Posted: Fri Apr 26, 2002 6:22 am Post subject: Feline Destiny |
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Opps sorry Tygon, I ment to say, is during the day, its hard to read the blue print on the black background, on my laptop, so i read it at night , in total dark, it looks killer then, with all the stars.....
So Zig's not the nurse, hmmmmmmmmm, ok she runs a seedy bar on Helm!
Welllll furs and femms, does the same fate await the crew of the Wild Star, that befell Josh and Susan.
And will Josh and Susan ever wake up to reveal what happened to them ?????
Tune in again next week, when we hear Tygon say!!!! Rava!!! whats that on the view sreen ? where sir!!,, there moving erratically between those two moons.......
Oh! thats a fly sir!.....Ahhhh!
On Feline Destiny!!!!
Brought to you each week on the Mutual Broadcasting system and its affilited sattions coast to coast.
and by Furall Drug Stores , Good health to all from Furall !!, good night every one....
from the Saudi Desert
TVDAVE Reporting
[ April 26, 2002: Message edited by: TVDAVE ] |
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Tygon Site Owner
Joined: 03 Apr 2001 Posts: 2497 Location: Isernhagen, Lowersaxony, Germany
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Posted: Sun Apr 28, 2002 9:46 am Post subject: Feline Destiny |
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quote: Originally posted by TVDAVE:
Opps sorry Tygon, I ment to say, is during the day, its hard to read the blue print on the black background, on my laptop, so i read it at night , in total dark, it looks killer then, with all the stars.....
Ah, okay then. Still, I really gotta get myself a laptop.
quote: Originally posted by TVDAVE:
So Zig's not the nurse, hmmmmmmmmm, ok she runs a seedy bar on Helm!
Again, in a certain way...
quote: Originally posted by TVDAVE:
Welllll furs and femms, does the same fate await the crew of the Wild Star, that befell Josh and Susan.
You'll have to wait and see
quote: Originally posted by TVDAVE:
And will Josh and Susan ever wake up to reveal what happened to them ?????
Again, wait and see
quote: Originally posted by TVDAVE:
Tune in again next week, when we hear Tygon say!!!! Rava!!! whats that on the view sreen ? where sir!!,, there moving erratically between those two moons.......
Oh! thats a fly sir!.....Ahhhh!
On Feline Destiny!!!!
Brought to you each week on the Mutual Broadcasting system and its affilited sattions coast to coast.
and by Furall Drug Stores , Good health to all from Furall !!, good night every one....
LOL! Cool! |
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TVDAVE Site Owner
Joined: 11 Feb 2002 Posts: 238 Location: RIYADH, SAUDI ARABIA
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Posted: Fri May 17, 2002 9:02 pm Post subject: Feline Destiny |
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At that , TVDAVE goes to the fish market to pick up a kelo of fresh gulf shrimp,to whip up for the next chapter |
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Tygon Site Owner
Joined: 03 Apr 2001 Posts: 2497 Location: Isernhagen, Lowersaxony, Germany
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Posted: Sat May 18, 2002 12:10 am Post subject: Feline Destiny |
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I just uploaded a Character Bio page. It's not yet finished and most likely won't be in the next future since new character will be added when they appear in the story. |
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Tygon Site Owner
Joined: 03 Apr 2001 Posts: 2497 Location: Isernhagen, Lowersaxony, Germany
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Posted: Sun Jun 16, 2002 4:16 pm Post subject: |
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Okay, I can't concentrate on my stories so I decided to finally start working on the historical timeline of FD. According to Maxx I have a good start there. I'm hoping to get it done soon but that depends on how much into the mood I get. The last time I wrote a 'small timeline' I ended up with an 11 pages document (Word 2002, Times New Roman, size 10, German A4 format).
I don't think this will be that long but who knows. My muse tends to doublecross me in such cases _________________ Tygon Panthera - name and species
www.planetfurry.com/~tygon/ |
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Tygon Site Owner
Joined: 03 Apr 2001 Posts: 2497 Location: Isernhagen, Lowersaxony, Germany
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Posted: Sat Jun 22, 2002 5:38 pm Post subject: Timeline |
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Okay, the timeline for Feline Destiny is finished and posted. Thanks to Pflarrian for giving it a quick check. I knew it would pay off to have a history major for a friend
Anyway, you can find the timeline on the Feline Destiny pade of my site in the 'The Universe' section.
I hope you'll enjoy it and please tell me what you think _________________ Tygon Panthera - name and species
www.planetfurry.com/~tygon/ |
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Pflarrian Registered User
Joined: 05 Apr 2001 Posts: 251 Location: Wandering around...
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Posted: Wed Jun 26, 2002 8:06 pm Post subject: Re: Timeline |
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Tygon wrote: | Okay, the timeline for Feline Destiny is finished and posted. Thanks to Pflarrian for giving it a quick check. I knew it would pay off to have a history major for a friend |
LOL! Hey, I have to use my major for something, don't I? It's a cinch that I'm not working in that field!
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I hope you'll enjoy it and please tell me what you think |
Well, *I* like it, but I've already told you how it appeals to me historically. I still think it needs a bit of fleshing out, but it will siffice for some time to come. |
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caspian Registered User
Joined: 02 Jul 2002 Posts: 206 Location: Richmond, Virginia, USA
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Posted: Wed Jul 31, 2002 1:03 pm Post subject: |
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Tygon,
The Blue on Black may look cool But man it is hard to read. Could you make the lettering white or yellow and think of them as letter shapped stars.
Casp _________________ Caspian
"Be Good all!" - TVDave
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Tygon Site Owner
Joined: 03 Apr 2001 Posts: 2497 Location: Isernhagen, Lowersaxony, Germany
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Posted: Wed Jul 31, 2002 1:21 pm Post subject: |
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caspian wrote: | Tygon,
The Blue on Black may look cool But man it is hard to read. Could you make the lettering white or yellow and think of them as letter shapped stars.
Casp |
I tried them as yellow and white but believe me, it's even harder to read. _________________ Tygon Panthera - name and species
www.planetfurry.com/~tygon/ |
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Galadrion Registered User
Joined: 17 Aug 2001 Posts: 378 Location: Portland, Oregon
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Posted: Wed Jul 31, 2002 4:15 pm Post subject: |
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Mm... this looks like the same problem I had. Rather than change the color, you might want to try enlarging the font a couple of points. That might take care of it. Failing that (or maybe even in conjunction with it), you might try using a slightly whiter shade of blue. |
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