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Frazikar Registered User
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Posted: Sat May 08, 2010 8:55 am Post subject: |
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Young human is going to be very surprised 'bout his 'striped lady'... |
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Hawke Registered User
Joined: 17 Jun 2009 Posts: 175 Location: Hickory Hills, IL (Near Chicago)
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Posted: Tue May 11, 2010 11:27 pm Post subject: |
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The Greg fellow is a little obsessive to say the least....and kinda crazy? _________________ "It's kind of like if you combined The Wizard of Oz and Reign of Fire...and Jonathan Livingston Seagull."
"^HuK'D aWN FoNYCs WuRKD 4 MEEEEEE!!!!" |
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tobi3B Registered User
Joined: 07 Jan 2008 Posts: 645 Location: Germany Siegen
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Posted: Wed May 12, 2010 9:21 am Post subject: |
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Interrested in reading it you bet.
But I read at the moment 2 Books part one and two.
And my time to read is a little bit small at the moment.
So yeah will take me some time to get to it _________________ Whether a black cat brings misfortune or not, depends on whether one is a fur or a mouse.
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Kellan Meig'h Administrator
Joined: 01 Apr 2007 Posts: 2045 Location: Just East of Indianapolis, Indiana
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Posted: Wed May 12, 2010 9:52 am Post subject: |
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Hawke wrote: | The Greg fellow is a little obsessive to say the least....and kinda crazy? |
Seconded.
All in agreement, show of paws?
Kel _________________ "Старый боевой конь, Кeллан" |
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Pecan Camari Registered User
Joined: 16 Sep 2009 Posts: 59 Location: Post Falls, ID
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Posted: Fri May 14, 2010 4:17 am Post subject: |
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Hm. I get a 404 when I click on it.
EDIT: Actually, I'm getting a 404 on quite a few stories. _________________ Furry code, anyone?
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Life is like a box of chocolates... TAKE AS MUCH AS YOU CAN, BEFORE IT'S ALL GONE! |
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AmigaDragon Registered User
Joined: 05 Dec 2004 Posts: 840 Location: Far Northern Minnesota
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Posted: Fri May 14, 2010 12:41 pm Post subject: |
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In case of typos, it can be useful to give both the bad URL and the page it was clicked from (could be multiple pages linking to it). Sometimes it's as simple as a difference in caps. URLs are case sensitive after the .com/ .net/ .org/ etc. _________________ "Cogito, ergo es. I think, therefore you is." Ray D. Tutto (King of the Moon) to Baron Munschaussen |
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AmigaDragon Registered User
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Posted: Fri May 14, 2010 1:01 pm Post subject: |
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I noticed that almost a full 1/3 of the pages in this first section were title and bios, much more than most stories give. Hopefully the next segment won't have to include them, when I see 21 pages, I want at least 19 pages of actual story.
That said, looking forward to more. _________________ "Cogito, ergo es. I think, therefore you is." Ray D. Tutto (King of the Moon) to Baron Munschaussen |
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Pecan Camari Registered User
Joined: 16 Sep 2009 Posts: 59 Location: Post Falls, ID
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Posted: Fri May 14, 2010 8:41 pm Post subject: |
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Okay, it was the ".com" site. And yes, it is working now. So, all's good. Next time I'll be sure to say the site. _________________ Furry code, anyone?
FFD3a~RS3 A+>++ C->++ D+++ H+++ M?>++ P++++ R+++ T++++ W Z Sm RLU>A/LW a- cn+++>a+++ d e>+++ f+++>++++ h>++++ i j+ p sm#
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Kellan Meig'h Administrator
Joined: 01 Apr 2007 Posts: 2045 Location: Just East of Indianapolis, Indiana
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Posted: Fri May 14, 2010 10:00 pm Post subject: |
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Read parts 8 - 10 . . .
Gah! Leave me hanging like that!
Good story, though.
Kel _________________ "Старый боевой конь, Кeллан" |
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Frazikar Registered User
Joined: 25 Jan 2008 Posts: 1181 Location: North Coast, USA
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Posted: Sat May 15, 2010 8:43 am Post subject: |
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The author is really going for the title of "Hang'em high"... decent job of it so far... |
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tijn Registered User
Joined: 27 Apr 2010 Posts: 273 Location: San Diego, CA
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Posted: Sat May 15, 2010 10:22 am Post subject: |
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Thank you all for the comments!
Actually, I simply don't know what to say to that.
Note that this story will not have the pace you find in Ship's Boy... I have been accused of getting sidetracked more than once. |
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AmigaDragon Registered User
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Posted: Sat May 22, 2010 4:47 am Post subject: |
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Benny I can understand since his job is security, but how did Greg sneak a gun into the premises for his journey? Don't they have security points around such a lab as this? _________________ "Cogito, ergo es. I think, therefore you is." Ray D. Tutto (King of the Moon) to Baron Munschaussen |
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Frazikar Registered User
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Posted: Sat May 22, 2010 8:19 am Post subject: |
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Greg knows how to bypass whatever security was in place...
Of course, Maria has a few new problems to deal with... |
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tijn Registered User
Joined: 27 Apr 2010 Posts: 273 Location: San Diego, CA
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Posted: Sat May 22, 2010 10:22 am Post subject: |
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AmigaDragon wrote: | ...but how did Greg sneak a gun into the premises for his journey? Don't they have security points around such a lab as this? |
No. It's located in a university (normally means no checkpoints) and the goal of the setup has nothing to do with animate matter passing through.
The only checkpoint Greg passed was the guard at the entrance of the building. He'd think 'ah, Greg' and nothing else. Compare to the average physics setup you'd find in a university today. Walk around confidently, say 'hi' from time to time, and if you're without scruple you can get your hands on many items.
Imagine Cally's setup, a riff-raff of old/new materials, cables everywhere, inaccessible, would not pass any safety board. Lean to the wrong part and you get zapped with current, that sort of thing. A token yellow 'Gefahr / Caution' page pasted here and there. I'm sorry I can't get the image across better
Cyril's situation is entirely different though. His setup is in the basement of the highly secretive temporal core building. Bought and defined safety first.
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Kellan Meig'h Administrator
Joined: 01 Apr 2007 Posts: 2045 Location: Just East of Indianapolis, Indiana
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Posted: Sat May 22, 2010 11:16 am Post subject: |
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Just finished the next installment and I have to say, maybe Greg isn't the total @**-wipe I thought he was.
I do hope Maria fares better.
Kel _________________ "Старый боевой конь, Кeллан" |
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