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Styx Site Owner
Joined: 25 Dec 2002 Posts: 3176 Location: West Covina, California
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Posted: Sun Jul 27, 2003 2:45 pm Post subject: |
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Great chapter Nameless, so Sarah's parents are border line purists eh? *chuckles* they are really going to set new records in freaking when they finally meet Chris although I think Sarah will be able to bring them around they do after all seem to be more concerned for her happiness then her not being with another squirrel but I don't think they’d ever fully accept him. It appears that agent Mulder has got quit a large search radius on his hands so it may be a while before Sarah & Chris have any trouble from him. Is anyone else reminded of that element in Kinsfire's story Sarina where a criminal organization was trying to get a hold of the portal technology for their own uses when they read about the doctor and his crew or is it just me, could these experiments be the result of that organization’s successful acquisition of that technology?
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Quote: | doo-DOO-doo-doo ... doo-DOO-doo-doo ... doo-DOO-doo-doo ... doo-DOO-doo-doo ...
Photographs! Moulder will have something to latch onto now! |
Well only if the fur developing the film shares what he sees on the pics which I guess is almost certain. _________________ "Political Correctness is tyranny with manners." Charlton Heston
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Furry_wolf2001b Guest
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Posted: Sun Jul 27, 2003 5:56 pm Post subject: |
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Concolor wrote: |
Well, first off, if I were that "Doctor", I would be quite so sanguine about the surety of getting Chris away from Special Agent Moulder. That could get really, really messy.
Dittos to Cateagle's comment about plot complications. You've stirred the pot, but good!
I'm glad Chris has a couple more locals on his side. He'll be needing them, I fear. And I'm fearful for Sarah's well-being if anything truly bad should happen to Chris.
Lots to think about, m'friend. Good stuff. |
I aree with the rest here. greath chapter as always.
And add and -I- am also fearful for Chris well-being if anything truly bad should happen to Sarah.
Heh sudenly got picture of banner saying "Dont get me angry, you wuldent like me when i am angry", then transforms into hulk and chases a lot of furrys around, hmm another twist to the green alien. |
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Bearion Registered User
Joined: 01 Jun 2002 Posts: 278 Location: Bay Area, California
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Posted: Sun Jul 27, 2003 6:49 pm Post subject: |
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Nameless wrote: | I added a bit. If you have already read the chapter, you don't have to do it again... |
Whoa! Just a "little" omission?
This changes what Chris may see when he comes down the from the hills a LOT, as some furs may be expecting something weird. Except for the neighbors of Martin and Alice who may freak when they see Chris in an apparently empty house... _________________ I'm out of my mind right now, but feel free to leave a message... |
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Nameless Site Owner
Joined: 06 Sep 2002 Posts: 1368 Location: Vienna, Austria
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Posted: Sat Aug 09, 2003 5:28 am Post subject: |
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Chapter 9 has been posted...
It's not nearly as well polished as I would like, but I've got to move the story along a little... _________________ I'm a nut, but there are those who appreciate me for it. |
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Styx Site Owner
Joined: 25 Dec 2002 Posts: 3176 Location: West Covina, California
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Posted: Sun Aug 10, 2003 7:29 pm Post subject: |
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Lot happening in this chapter, I enjoyed reading it great job nameless can't wait for the fireworks when Chris meets the parents. _________________ "Political Correctness is tyranny with manners." Charlton Heston
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Sslaxx Registered User
Joined: 20 Nov 2000 Posts: 71 Location: Malvern, Worcs., UK
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Posted: Sun Aug 10, 2003 7:47 pm Post subject: |
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Styx wrote: | Lot happening in this chapter, I enjoyed reading it great job nameless can't wait for the fireworks when Chris meets the parents. |
Fireworks and secret services and more beside... oh my, interesting times ahoy! 80 _________________ Stuart "Sslaxx" Moore. |
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Concolor Registered User
Joined: 19 Nov 2001 Posts: 832 Location: South Carolina
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Posted: Sun Aug 10, 2003 8:52 pm Post subject: |
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AH-HA!!
AH-HA!!
Figured something like that would happen. With as much scrutiny as is being turned in Chris' direction, it was just a matter of time.
I really, really hope he can take care of himself. _________________ Oddly enough, my life is based on a true story. (Ashleigh Brilliant) |
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Cateagle Site Owner
Joined: 20 Nov 2000 Posts: 1004 Location: Ft. Worth, TX
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Posted: Mon Aug 11, 2003 1:28 am Post subject: |
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I'll second my good friend Concolor. The next chapter or two are going to get real interesting. Another great read, Nameless.
Cateagle _________________ "But the wildest of all the wild animals was the Cateagle. He walked by himself and all places were alike to him."
-- With apologies to Rudyard Kipling |
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Nameless Site Owner
Joined: 06 Sep 2002 Posts: 1368 Location: Vienna, Austria
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Posted: Mon Aug 11, 2003 1:52 am Post subject: |
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Keep your eyes peeled. The next three chapters (probably) will have a surprise or two. _________________ I'm a nut, but there are those who appreciate me for it. |
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Sslaxx Registered User
Joined: 20 Nov 2000 Posts: 71 Location: Malvern, Worcs., UK
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Posted: Mon Aug 11, 2003 5:37 pm Post subject: |
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Nameless wrote: | Keep your eyes peeled. The next three chapters (probably) will have a surprise or two. |
Definitely be waiting to see how you twist the story around. grins _________________ Stuart "Sslaxx" Moore. |
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Nameless Site Owner
Joined: 06 Sep 2002 Posts: 1368 Location: Vienna, Austria
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Posted: Thu Aug 21, 2003 2:34 pm Post subject: |
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Chapter 10 is posted.
Anybody out here who does not recognize from which story I have "borrowed" a scene here? _________________ I'm a nut, but there are those who appreciate me for it. |
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Cateagle Site Owner
Joined: 20 Nov 2000 Posts: 1004 Location: Ft. Worth, TX
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Posted: Thu Aug 21, 2003 3:12 pm Post subject: |
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Nameless wrote: | Chapter 10 is posted.
Anybody out here who does not recognize from which story I have "borrowed" a scene here? |
Very nice chapter indeed! The emotions ring quite true.
*Snickers* *wide-eyed look* Why, I have no idea where you "borrowed" a scene from.
Cateagle _________________ "But the wildest of all the wild animals was the Cateagle. He walked by himself and all places were alike to him."
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Nameless Site Owner
Joined: 06 Sep 2002 Posts: 1368 Location: Vienna, Austria
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Posted: Thu Aug 21, 2003 4:10 pm Post subject: |
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Cateagle wrote: | Why, I have no idea where you "borrowed" a scene from. |
What a shame.... _________________ I'm a nut, but there are those who appreciate me for it. |
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Concolor Registered User
Joined: 19 Nov 2001 Posts: 832 Location: South Carolina
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Posted: Thu Aug 21, 2003 4:53 pm Post subject: |
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That was good! Quite satisfactory. Very believable. I can see that happening. (Oh, got your story spotted -- nice little cameo, that. Lee's not a bad role model in such a situation. )
So Chris has now, what, a total of five furs more or less on his side? He's gonna need 'em! He will be meeting up with those ersatz authorities sooner or later. Probably sooner. He'll need to go public before they catch him, unless he wants to get up close and personal with a windowless cell for the duration of his stay in Sarah's world.
Thank you for another excellent installment. _________________ Oddly enough, my life is based on a true story. (Ashleigh Brilliant) |
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Cateagle Site Owner
Joined: 20 Nov 2000 Posts: 1004 Location: Ft. Worth, TX
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Posted: Thu Aug 21, 2003 5:17 pm Post subject: |
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*G* It should be "fascinating" when Chris does run into Lee and/or Debbye Evans. _________________ "But the wildest of all the wild animals was the Cateagle. He walked by himself and all places were alike to him."
-- With apologies to Rudyard Kipling |
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