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Nameless Site Owner
Joined: 06 Sep 2002 Posts: 1368 Location: Vienna, Austria
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Posted: Tue Dec 10, 2002 2:17 pm Post subject: SiasfL - Stranger in a strangely familiar Land - Act 1 |
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Bearion wrote: | Nameless wrote: | Now, how long should I keep you waiting for the next chapter... |
Now that is true evil! Noooooooo! |
Well, ok. The next chapter was actually the very first chapter I wrote.
But it is currently undergoing major editing and is not able to leave stationary care.
I'm still undecided when to post it.
I want to post it as a birthday present, that is on the 22. of December.
Or maybe I'll post it when it is ready, probably a few days earlier...
Decisions, Decisions... _________________ I'm a nut, but there are those who appreciate me for it.
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Bearion Registered User
Joined: 01 Jun 2002 Posts: 278 Location: Bay Area, California
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Posted: Tue Dec 10, 2002 5:35 pm Post subject: Re: SiasfL - Act 1 |
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Nameless wrote: | I'm still undecided when to post it.
I want to post it as a birthday present, that is on the 22. of December.
Or maybe I'll post it when it is ready, probably a few days earlier... |
December 22nd? So, since you've been stuck with a suckie Birth-day Your Whole Life (so close to Christmas) we ALL should suffer???
Well, since it's December: HAPPY BIRTHDAY NAMELESS.
:multi: :new-bday: :multi:
We'll accept it as a BD gift to us!
Bearion |
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Sslaxx Registered User
Joined: 20 Nov 2000 Posts: 71 Location: Malvern, Worcs., UK
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Posted: Sun Dec 15, 2002 6:56 pm Post subject: Re: SiasfL - Act 1 |
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Nameless wrote: | Bearion wrote: | Nameless wrote: | Now, how long should I keep you waiting for the next chapter... |
Now that is true evil! Noooooooo! |
Well, ok. The next chapter was actually the very first chapter I wrote.
But it is currently undergoing major editing and is not able to leave stationary care.
I'm still undecided when to post it.
I want to post it as a birthday present, that is on the 22. of December.
Or maybe I'll post it when it is ready, probably a few days earlier...
Decisions, Decisions... |
Hmmm... seven days from now? _________________ Stuart "Sslaxx" Moore. |
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Nameless Site Owner
Joined: 06 Sep 2002 Posts: 1368 Location: Vienna, Austria
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Posted: Wed Dec 18, 2002 12:37 pm Post subject: |
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The chapter is ready, I've decided not to wait until Sunday.
So here it is, have fun. _________________ I'm a nut, but there are those who appreciate me for it. |
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Tygon Site Owner
Joined: 03 Apr 2001 Posts: 2497 Location: Isernhagen, Lowersaxony, Germany
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Posted: Wed Dec 18, 2002 1:30 pm Post subject: |
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Ah, so I was right! Well, at least basically
Very interesting read. I don't want to take any details away for the ones who haven't read it yet so for now I'll just say that I like it. I'll go into details when more people read it _________________ Tygon Panthera - name and species
www.planetfurry.com/~tygon/ |
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RealDesertFox Registered User
Joined: 09 Oct 2002 Posts: 503
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Posted: Wed Dec 18, 2002 1:37 pm Post subject: |
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*Strains to type after reading for so long* <Not really, I like reading long stories, now let me think of a word to describe the chapter... Er its too hard. I'll just says its wicked (excuse the slang) and thats putting it lightly...
BTW: I like roasted squirrel, its so tasty... |
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Concolor Registered User
Joined: 19 Nov 2001 Posts: 832 Location: South Carolina
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Posted: Wed Dec 18, 2002 2:42 pm Post subject: |
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WOOT!! WOOT!! WOOT!!
:rainbowafro:
This rocks! An excellent beginning! Sooooo many possibilities.
Pray do continue. _________________ Oddly enough, my life is based on a true story. (Ashleigh Brilliant) |
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Cateagle Site Owner
Joined: 20 Nov 2000 Posts: 1004 Location: Ft. Worth, TX
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Posted: Wed Dec 18, 2002 2:55 pm Post subject: Thumbs Up!!! |
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Most excellent!!
A very promising beignning with lots of room for plot twists and turns. I'll definitely be looking forward to the next installment. Gets comfortable in his seat with anticipation.
Cheers,
Cateagle _________________ "But the wildest of all the wild animals was the Cateagle. He walked by himself and all places were alike to him."
-- With apologies to Rudyard Kipling |
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Sslaxx Registered User
Joined: 20 Nov 2000 Posts: 71 Location: Malvern, Worcs., UK
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Posted: Wed Dec 18, 2002 3:28 pm Post subject: Re: Thumbs Up!!! |
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Cateagle wrote: | Most excellent!!
A very promising beignning with lots of room for plot twists and turns. I'll definitely be looking forward to the next installment. Gets comfortable in his seat with anticipation.
Cheers,
Cateagle |
Indeed. Now, of course, Act 0's chapters need editing to put the proper title in, instead of the acronym. _________________ Stuart "Sslaxx" Moore. |
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Bearion Registered User
Joined: 01 Jun 2002 Posts: 278 Location: Bay Area, California
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Posted: Wed Dec 18, 2002 4:37 pm Post subject: |
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Very excellent! I enjoyed this. A good, believable first meeting.
Side note: I wonder if Google will wonder at the upsurge in requests for "Hemmer & Hellene"? |
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Nameless Site Owner
Joined: 06 Sep 2002 Posts: 1368 Location: Vienna, Austria
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Posted: Wed Dec 18, 2002 4:44 pm Post subject: |
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Seems like quite a few people are reading this.
Since this was originally planned as "fan fiction about fan fiction", there are quite a few references to other furry stories, stolen ideas for a scene, ...
I'd be really interested to hear about it if one of you spots them. (Only furry references)
Two come to mind in this chapter (there are probably more):
The chapter title and the "Hemmer & Hellene".
What to they refer to / where they stolen from ? _________________ I'm a nut, but there are those who appreciate me for it. |
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Tygon Site Owner
Joined: 03 Apr 2001 Posts: 2497 Location: Isernhagen, Lowersaxony, Germany
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Posted: Wed Dec 18, 2002 4:51 pm Post subject: |
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Nameless wrote: | Two come to mind in this chapter (there are probably more):
The chapter title and the "Hemmer & Hellene".
What to they refer to / where they stolen from ? |
I think "Hemmer & Hellene" refers to "Kevin & Kell"
The chapter title? Well, it probably refers to the title of the first chapter of "Zig Zag" what if I remember correctly is "Damsel in Distress" _________________ Tygon Panthera - name and species
www.planetfurry.com/~tygon/ |
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Nameless Site Owner
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Posted: Wed Dec 18, 2002 4:56 pm Post subject: |
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I quess that was too easy. _________________ I'm a nut, but there are those who appreciate me for it. |
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Tygon Site Owner
Joined: 03 Apr 2001 Posts: 2497 Location: Isernhagen, Lowersaxony, Germany
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Posted: Wed Dec 18, 2002 5:02 pm Post subject: |
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Nameless wrote: | I quess that was too easy. |
Only because you pointed them out. If you wouldn't have I would have to go through the story, picking out possible 'stolen' thing and cross-reference them with the rest of furry literatured etc. out there.
My head starts hurting from only thinking about it _________________ Tygon Panthera - name and species
www.planetfurry.com/~tygon/ |
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Bearion Registered User
Joined: 01 Jun 2002 Posts: 278 Location: Bay Area, California
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Posted: Wed Dec 18, 2002 6:19 pm Post subject: |
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Tygon wrote: | I think "Hemmer & Hellene" refers to "Kevin & Kell"
| Rudy's comic??? If the name was mentioned, I didn't pick up on it.
Thanks, Tygon! |
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