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Kellan Meig'h
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PostPosted: Fri Jan 21, 2022 2:14 am    Post subject: "Rift" Reply with quote

Well, here it is, the first chapter to the sequel of Scribe. Enjoy the ride!

"Rift Chapter 01"

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PostPosted: Fri Jan 21, 2022 9:19 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Hmmm, interesting start with maybe some space-time mix-up as well ... at least it's not an Enemy Mine set-up ... (yet)
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PostPosted: Sat Feb 19, 2022 1:48 am    Post subject: Next Chapter Up! Reply with quote

Here it is, Chapter 02 of "Rift" is up for your reading pleasure.

Enjoy!

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PostPosted: Sat Feb 19, 2022 8:20 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Nothing like finding a wormhole the wrong way, finding a habitable planet at the other end and survivors of someone else's exit from the same wormhole ... then a whole equatorial field of 'parts' to maneuver around before landing ...

Of course, the armor checks do need to be done (and the mistakes with THAT)!

Now that two 'old' flames try to reignite each other ...
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PostPosted: Thu May 19, 2022 7:06 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

(*looks around*)

Wasn't there supposed to be a story here somewhere??

(*searching some more*)

Oh my ... so that's what 90 days of neglect(?)/nothing added looks like ... needs a little (or a lot) of TLC ...

(*heads back out*)

Maybe a wake-up call??
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PostPosted: Thu May 19, 2022 3:02 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Frazikar wrote:
(*looks around*)

Wasn't there supposed to be a story here somewhere??

(*searching some more*)

Oh my ... so that's what 90 days of neglect(?)/nothing added looks like ... needs a little (or a lot) of TLC ...

(*heads back out*)

Maybe a wake-up call??

RL got in the way, been caring for my wife for a bit. thankfully, she's gotten better so I now have a bit more time now. I also need a real editor, it seems. I was paying somebody to edit my chapters and what they sent back for Chapters 3, 4 & 5 was not sharable. Basically a wall of text that had been turned into British-English spelling, dialogue flow and slang. That was $40 USD per chapter. I sent it back, they sent it "RIght the way back," citing nothing wrong. Yeah.

Well, needing help/editing/proofing/grammatical errors or not, I'll post a few chapters this Friday or Saturday.

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PostPosted: Sat May 21, 2022 1:20 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

So, if you agree to ignore any spelling or grammatical errors, here it is!

Chapter 03 of "Rift"

Enjoy! This is mostly character development and situational placement.

Kel

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PostPosted: Sat May 21, 2022 7:34 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Limping into port and then pulling a small rescue before attempting a landing (at least it's a powered landing), now if it all hangs together ...
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PostPosted: Sun May 22, 2022 2:01 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Well, will we see if The Dark Claw makes it dirtside or will it suffer the same fate as the Killark Feddri? Read on to find out.

Chapter 04 of "Rift"

Kel

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PostPosted: Sun May 22, 2022 6:45 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Now that was just ... just ... OK so Enemy Mine wasn't that far off
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PostPosted: Tue Jun 14, 2022 12:16 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Well, here it is, the fifth installment of "Rift" for your enjoyment.

Chapter 5 of "Rift"

Enjoy!

Mr. Green

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PostPosted: Tue Jun 14, 2022 7:46 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Wellp, almost done with all the meet-&-greets (no need for the dog-&-pony) ...

As for where, seems to be answered, maybe ...
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PostPosted: Wed Jul 20, 2022 10:55 pm    Post subject: chapter 06 of "Rift" Reply with quote

Here is Chapter 6 for your reading pleasure. We finally meet the ones that seem to have issues with visitors and we also discover a fact unknown to the members of The Dark Claw.

Chapter 06 of "Rift"

Mr. Green

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PostPosted: Thu Jul 21, 2022 7:48 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Hmmm, seems there IS another survivor set coming into play ...

Ah, roller-blading/skating (depending on era), an interesting development (at least the floors were cheap) ...
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