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Kellan Meig'h Administrator

Joined: 01 Apr 2007 Posts: 2035 Location: Just East of Indianapolis, Indiana
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Posted: Fri Jan 21, 2022 2:14 am Post subject: "Rift" |
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Well, here it is, the first chapter to the sequel of Scribe. Enjoy the ride!
"Rift Chapter 01"
 _________________ "Старый боевой конь, Кeллан" |
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Frazikar Registered User
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Posted: Fri Jan 21, 2022 9:19 am Post subject: |
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Hmmm, interesting start with maybe some space-time mix-up as well ... at least it's not an Enemy Mine set-up ... (yet) |
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Kellan Meig'h Administrator

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Posted: Sat Feb 19, 2022 1:48 am Post subject: Next Chapter Up! |
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Here it is, Chapter 02 of "Rift" is up for your reading pleasure.
Enjoy!
 _________________ "Старый боевой конь, Кeллан" |
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Frazikar Registered User
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Posted: Sat Feb 19, 2022 8:20 am Post subject: |
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Nothing like finding a wormhole the wrong way, finding a habitable planet at the other end and survivors of someone else's exit from the same wormhole ... then a whole equatorial field of 'parts' to maneuver around before landing ...
Of course, the armor checks do need to be done (and the mistakes with THAT)!
Now that two 'old' flames try to reignite each other ... |
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Posted: Thu May 19, 2022 7:06 am Post subject: |
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(*looks around*)
Wasn't there supposed to be a story here somewhere??
(*searching some more*)
Oh my ... so that's what 90 days of neglect(?)/nothing added looks like ... needs a little (or a lot) of TLC ...
(*heads back out*)
Maybe a wake-up call?? |
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Kellan Meig'h Administrator

Joined: 01 Apr 2007 Posts: 2035 Location: Just East of Indianapolis, Indiana
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Posted: Thu May 19, 2022 3:02 pm Post subject: |
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Frazikar wrote: | (*looks around*)
Wasn't there supposed to be a story here somewhere??
(*searching some more*)
Oh my ... so that's what 90 days of neglect(?)/nothing added looks like ... needs a little (or a lot) of TLC ...
(*heads back out*)
Maybe a wake-up call?? |
RL got in the way, been caring for my wife for a bit. thankfully, she's gotten better so I now have a bit more time now. I also need a real editor, it seems. I was paying somebody to edit my chapters and what they sent back for Chapters 3, 4 & 5 was not sharable. Basically a wall of text that had been turned into British-English spelling, dialogue flow and slang. That was $40 USD per chapter. I sent it back, they sent it "RIght the way back," citing nothing wrong. Yeah.
Well, needing help/editing/proofing/grammatical errors or not, I'll post a few chapters this Friday or Saturday. _________________ "Старый боевой конь, Кeллан" |
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Kellan Meig'h Administrator

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Posted: Sat May 21, 2022 1:20 am Post subject: |
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So, if you agree to ignore any spelling or grammatical errors, here it is!
Chapter 03 of "Rift"
Enjoy! This is mostly character development and situational placement.
Kel _________________ "Старый боевой конь, Кeллан" |
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Frazikar Registered User
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Posted: Sat May 21, 2022 7:34 am Post subject: |
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Limping into port and then pulling a small rescue before attempting a landing (at least it's a powered landing), now if it all hangs together ... |
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Kellan Meig'h Administrator

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Posted: Sun May 22, 2022 2:01 am Post subject: |
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Well, will we see if The Dark Claw makes it dirtside or will it suffer the same fate as the Killark Feddri? Read on to find out.
Chapter 04 of "Rift"
Kel _________________ "Старый боевой конь, Кeллан" |
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Posted: Sun May 22, 2022 6:45 am Post subject: |
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Now that was just ... just ... OK so Enemy Mine wasn't that far off |
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Kellan Meig'h Administrator

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Posted: Tue Jun 14, 2022 12:16 am Post subject: |
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Well, here it is, the fifth installment of "Rift" for your enjoyment.
Chapter 5 of "Rift"
Enjoy!
 _________________ "Старый боевой конь, Кeллан" |
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Posted: Tue Jun 14, 2022 7:46 am Post subject: |
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Wellp, almost done with all the meet-&-greets (no need for the dog-&-pony) ...
As for where, seems to be answered, maybe ... |
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Kellan Meig'h Administrator

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Posted: Wed Jul 20, 2022 10:55 pm Post subject: chapter 06 of "Rift" |
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Here is Chapter 6 for your reading pleasure. We finally meet the ones that seem to have issues with visitors and we also discover a fact unknown to the members of The Dark Claw.
Chapter 06 of "Rift"
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Posted: Thu Jul 21, 2022 7:48 am Post subject: |
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Hmmm, seems there IS another survivor set coming into play ...
Ah, roller-blading/skating (depending on era), an interesting development (at least the floors were cheap) ... |
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Kellan Meig'h Administrator

Joined: 01 Apr 2007 Posts: 2035 Location: Just East of Indianapolis, Indiana
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Posted: Fri Mar 10, 2023 12:34 am Post subject: Writing Again . . . |
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So, I'm back to writing again, it will be slower than my usual times for the chapters to roll out. I've had some physical setbacks that I've had to work through and maybe a touch of winter depression, since I have no heat in my detached garage and being able to see your breath is not conductive to piddling around in general.
Anyway, I'll throw out something this weekend, most likely Saturday the 11th of March.
See all y'all around! _________________ "Старый боевой конь, Кeллан" |
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