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Lucius_Vane Registered User
Joined: 23 Oct 2006 Posts: 386 Location: Turn around...
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Posted: Tue Mar 11, 2008 3:58 pm Post subject: The Tale of Telfarian |
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Two chapters and an interlude are up, and I'd like to hear what you think. Fantastic? Utter crap? Do you like cookies? Post it here.
I want to know what you think, of the characters, of the plot or anything else you want to comment on.
Thanks for the feedback.
-Lucius _________________
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Teric Registered User
Joined: 11 Dec 2006 Posts: 2566 Location: Southern California
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Posted: Tue Mar 11, 2008 4:17 pm Post subject: |
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Is chapter two supposed to be cut off?
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...charging only for alcohol. No one who was open refused a hungry soul or tried to make a profi |
_________________ Styx: "Oh sure like flaming a dragon going to do massive damage, brave challenge there Teric." |
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Lucius_Vane Registered User
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Posted: Tue Mar 11, 2008 4:25 pm Post subject: |
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Whoops, thanks Teric.
Not quite sure why it did that. _________________
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Lucius_Vane Registered User
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Posted: Fri Sep 12, 2008 4:21 pm Post subject: |
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Chapter 4 is now posted! Enjoy.
-LV _________________
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Lucius_Vane Registered User
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Posted: Wed Oct 29, 2008 1:04 am Post subject: |
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An interlude, this is the last one featuring this character for a while. I think Concolor will be able to appreciate that...
Feedback would be a great help! _________________
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Kellan Meig'h Administrator
Joined: 01 Apr 2007 Posts: 2045 Location: Just East of Indianapolis, Indiana
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Posted: Wed Oct 29, 2008 3:42 am Post subject: Information, please! |
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Letting you know I bookmarked your site, Lucius.
I'll sit down and do some reading this week and I'll be sure to give you some feedback when I do. I did a quick read of the first few paragraphs fo chapter 1 and I like what I see so far.
Kellan _________________ "Старый боевой конь, Кeллан" |
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