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a song i wrote bout the curse that all of us share

 
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hippiemouse
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PostPosted: Fri Jan 26, 2007 4:14 pm    Post subject: a song i wrote bout the curse that all of us share Reply with quote

i posted this on Furtopia and thought i should post it here as well. i warn you dudes and dudetes this song (and any other poem or song i may post) is a work in progress and will only be finished years from now when i have passed on to the next life.
i began this song in September of last year. way before i met Devendra. this song was my only weapon against the loneliness that threatened to consume me and i thank the powers that be, for bringing him into my life.
i wrote this with the idea that Roy Orbison's song "only the lonely" would be playing in the background with a little hiphop beat added to it.
enjoy.

Lament of the Hippiemouse

By Cory Cox
A.K.A
Moonshadow
The Hippiemouse

A wise furry once said that “It isn’t easy bein furry”
And it is this one fact that makes me worry
For I have lived all my life alone, a guest in someone else’s home
And having no one special to call on the phone
Alone in the moonlight I stand, a shy little mouse trapped in a human form
Keenly feeling a curse that is the bane of all who are different from the norm
Loneliness I say, yeah, uh huh, that is the curse of which I speak
And I feel its cruel sting day after day and week after week
It’s enough to make me shriek and I can’t even sleep cuz I constantly weep
My only hope is this treasure I seek
True love, A treasure more valuable than gold
Yet so rare is it that I could search my entire life till hell grows cold, never once finding someone gentle and bold, who’d take me into their fold, wrap their arms around me in a loving hold
And press their lips up against mine till our souls intertwine in a kiss infinitely sweeter than wine



Love is a dream that we all tend to dream and though in the end it may seem
an impossible dream and I just want to scream and pull out my hair
Cause I lack for someone to care, someone with whom I can share every secret dark & fair. I mustn’t despair for I know you are there, yeah…somewhere out there, (chuckling) perhaps staring up at the same pale moonlight, thinking of me and loving me tonight. And it is this thought alone that makes me feel ah-ite.

The curse’s got me feeling blue. What on earth can I do? I know I need love to get me through. But where to find it I just don’t have a clue
I don’t know if I can last much longer. every day the curse gets stronger
I’m starting to feel all dark and gloomy.
and the loneliness threatens to consume me
And I fear that it may one day rule me,
Till it makes me all crazy, an’ I start talking to a daisy
So before I lose my mind B. I must ask you kindly.
Please can you come and find me ?
Where? The town of Owasso Michigan. You can find me there
And I don’t even care if you’re a stallion or a mare, a fox or a bear
Just so long as you’ll always be there, treating me fair
& square and with the utmost care
tell me you love me as you run your fingers through my hair
and i swear, upon my honor, every bit of it there
I'll be loyal and true and never make you blue


to the lonely, love is like a feast for a starving man, you'll search the entire land, doing what you can till what you seek is held within your hand and right now, this mouse is hungry like the wolf and thats no lie
it's either do or die. i will find my feast, all i gotta do is try
alright everybody i got question for you. what do you do when the wolf in you is looking for a fox, hopeing you find one before the day your put into a box and buried in the ground?
the answer is simple my friend, you search all around until you have found.. love, the force that makes the world go round

Now,Being any kind of furry is ruff
But, being a mouse can be twice as tuff
It's a lonely thing being a mouse
For one thing, your the most ignored in all the house
speaking often your rarely heard
your lips may be moving but they don't hear a word
your invisible like mister cellophane
a fact that causes you pain
it's the reason reason your not very confident
you fear others view you as incompetent
now please don't get me wrong, allow me to reverse the direction this song
and say that being a mouse isn't all just frowns, it has it's up's as well as it's downs
your heart vastly supersedes your body's size, and beyond your years you are wise
you never turn your back on someone in pain
you'll do whatever it takes to comfort them and keep them sane
you tell funny stories and clown around, hoping to turn everyone's frown around
Why? because your entire existence becomes worthwhile whenever you make a sad person smile

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PostPosted: Fri Jan 26, 2007 6:12 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Pretty cool. I can relate in some ways, and in some ways not (don't really consider it a "curse" per say, but a difference).

All in all, nice work!

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PostPosted: Wed Jan 31, 2007 3:42 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Virmir wrote:
Pretty cool. I can relate in some ways, and in some ways not (don't really consider it a "curse" per say, but a difference).

All in all, nice work!


thank you. im glad you liked it.now dont get me wrong dude i absoultly love being diffrent its just the loneliness that i dont like.it is my greatest wish that no one ever had to suffer through loneliness.

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PostPosted: Sat Mar 31, 2007 6:53 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

very nice. Very Happy
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PostPosted: Sat Mar 31, 2007 6:56 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

thanks dude.im glad ya liked it.
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