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Faith
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PostPosted: Fri Oct 20, 2006 2:06 pm    Post subject: Poetry Reply with quote

I hope ya'll like it

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Feverish with rage, spitting a thousand hateful words,
Fag, slut, freak, Jew, nigger, blasphemer;
Each caustic utterance slapping with a viscous sting,
Each tempestuous cut driving deeper within;
The vast ravine of hidous pain expanding,
The spector silently screams out its distress;
Scorched and bleeding; bruised and disfigured.

She watches in unfamiliar horror,
Aging years, instantly;
Her first brush with immense loathing
Thinking, "So this is real society";
The revelation accompanied by a lonely cry,
Soliciting an answer, receiving none,
Delving to discern a reason.

Suddenly turning to her,
Despise plain in odious eyes,
Disdain, the efficient teacher;
Learning to erect an impregnable stone wall;
An icy sacrifice, frigidly serene
Independence for emptiness,
Apathy her only weapon.

Destroying spirit instead of searching
Stagnant instead of being rapids,
Passionately vapid, wholly envious,
Condemnation originating from selfishness,
Causing agony for safety and comfort;
Any who outwardly venture are segregated and dejected
Even those nearest are not excused.

Daringly wading into the inflamed crowd
Suffocating in toxic fumes of abhorrance;
First imploring, then damanding a change,
Choosing to live, shedding procrastination;
No hesitations, no regrets;
Ruining her controlled fortress for a sturdier shield,
Assaling against with an infinitely bouteous spear.

She reflects their fury with her acceptance,
Vitriolic words will never hurt, never again.

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hippiemouse
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PostPosted: Fri Jan 26, 2007 2:15 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

very nice. i really liked it. keep up the good work
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PostPosted: Fri Jan 26, 2007 6:17 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Hmmm, kinda depressing, but I just posted something depressing a while back too, hehe...
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