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Dingo Fenris
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PostPosted: Thu Feb 02, 2006 2:47 am    Post subject: Yay finally a worthy pic Reply with quote

Heh well this is my first furry pic that I thought was worth while, I don't draw all too often and CONSTRUCTIVE crit wanted

Oh and if any one could PhotoShop it for me, it would be greatly appreciated.

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PostPosted: Thu Feb 02, 2006 10:18 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Ah, the obligatory assault rifle everyoneīs first drawings have to contain and a katana for good measure...
...bigger hands.
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PostPosted: Thu Feb 02, 2006 11:01 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Yes I concur that its not too origninal, but man I have a hard time on hands, I believe more practice is in order
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PostPosted: Fri Feb 03, 2006 9:07 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

I wasnīt complaining - itīs just that I drew the same stuff when I started,
only worse. I doubt I could do better.
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PostPosted: Fri Feb 03, 2006 1:16 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

i like it! s' well posed and an orginal style. as danny said, try making the hands a bit bigger, and define the lines a bit more (i.e. inking it) and i think youll be there.

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PostPosted: Fri Feb 03, 2006 6:47 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Inking is certainly on my agenda, and the female figur is too, I drew a few nights back but in my opinion she needs a more defined form
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PostPosted: Sat Feb 18, 2006 6:27 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Neat female, if u do really want 2 get a more female-ish look, u can fine online human anatomy books, it's a great way 2 learn the anatomy. & I will gladly help u if u want. Check out my art at http://kalystograph.sheezyart.com/
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PostPosted: Sun Apr 16, 2006 5:49 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

If you would set the katana a little more backwards and diagonal, that would create a better effect.
His body is great, although you might want to increase the size of his left upper arm and shoulder.
I dont really get it with the pants, is his fly open?
The head and face expression look great.
I always liked bigger tails, but thats only a matter of own choise.

The female looks good too, but I dont really like are her straigt shoulders, women usually have shoulders poining down.
Also her eyebrows seem a little too large.

Dispite these minor things, both furries look great!
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PostPosted: Tue Sep 12, 2006 3:43 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Well been drawing a bit, these are two of my latest works, improving (or so I like to think).
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PostPosted: Wed Oct 25, 2006 11:41 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

i like the look of it. i'm not so good on action poses or front veiws or other stuff like that take a look at my deviant art and you will see.
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