![Planetfurry BBS Forum Index](templates/subSilver/images/logo_phpBB.gif) |
Planetfurry BBS Forums for Planetfurry Site Members and more
|
View previous topic :: View next topic |
Author |
Message |
Elfen_Furry Moderator
![](images/avatars/d8c219ec3e60355705f18.gif)
Joined: 18 Jun 2002 Posts: 2601 Location: NYC NY
|
Posted: Thu Oct 24, 2002 11:10 pm Post subject: Chapter 7b Delays |
|
|
I think I maybe changing the direction the orginal story went, even though 3/4 done. This will be disasterous for the following chapters if I am.
But its hard to tell what should go in between the larger gaps of unrecoverable data and recovered paragraphs. Smaller gaps are simpler, often a word or two, many times just a few letters in the right place is all thats needed.
I'm shooting for before a Holloween Posting, but dont count on it; yet. Maybe I'll get lucky. |
|
Back to top |
|
![](templates/subSilver/images/spacer.gif) |
Tygon Site Owner
![Site Owner Site Owner](images/ranks/rank-site-owner.gif)
![](images/avatars/146811545340e82c2aab393.jpg)
Joined: 03 Apr 2001 Posts: 2497 Location: Isernhagen, Lowersaxony, Germany
|
Posted: Fri Oct 25, 2002 9:13 am Post subject: |
|
|
Take all the time you need and do what you think is best for your story.
BTW: Now that my boss is away I finally again have the possibility to read stories at work and yours was one of these. While it's very interesting and kinda different to the other Sabrinaverse Stories I noticed some distinct dis-similarities to the rest of the Sabrinaverse. I take that was intended to make it an alternate Sabrinaverse, right? _________________ Tygon Panthera - name and species
www.planetfurry.com/~tygon/ |
|
Back to top |
|
![](templates/subSilver/images/spacer.gif) |
Elfen_Furry Moderator
![](images/avatars/d8c219ec3e60355705f18.gif)
Joined: 18 Jun 2002 Posts: 2601 Location: NYC NY
|
Posted: Sat Oct 26, 2002 1:03 am Post subject: |
|
|
Tygon wrote: | Take all the time you need and do what you think is best for your story.
BTW: Now that my boss is away I finally again have the possibility to read stories at work and yours was one of these. While it's very interesting and kinda different to the other Sabrinaverse Stories I noticed some distinct dis-similarities to the rest of the Sabrinaverse. I take that was intended to make it an alternate Sabrinaverse, right? |
Alternate? Arent they all Alternate?
Everyone's life must be tested once in a while; but some are lucky to have a 5 question quizes while others are forced to write 200 page dissertations- all for the same grade! But not just Sabrina and company, everyone's going to be forced to either pass or fail. With lives on the line as a grade, this will be one class no one will be able to cut or dismiss...
Am I or what?!!
At least I have not threatened the planet wide extinction through a 25 mile Ort Cloud Renegade Meteor... Hey!!! ![Twisted Evil](images/smiles/icon_twisted.gif) ![Arrow](images/smiles/icon_arrow.gif) ![Idea](images/smiles/icon_idea.gif) ![Exclamation](images/smiles/icon_exclaim.gif) ![Exclamation](images/smiles/icon_exclaim.gif) ![Exclamation](images/smiles/icon_exclaim.gif) |
|
Back to top |
|
![](templates/subSilver/images/spacer.gif) |
Tygon Site Owner
![Site Owner Site Owner](images/ranks/rank-site-owner.gif)
![](images/avatars/146811545340e82c2aab393.jpg)
Joined: 03 Apr 2001 Posts: 2497 Location: Isernhagen, Lowersaxony, Germany
|
Posted: Sat Oct 26, 2002 4:04 am Post subject: |
|
|
Elfen_Furry wrote: | Tygon wrote: | Take all the time you need and do what you think is best for your story.
BTW: Now that my boss is away I finally again have the possibility to read stories at work and yours was one of these. While it's very interesting and kinda different to the other Sabrinaverse Stories I noticed some distinct dis-similarities to the rest of the Sabrinaverse. I take that was intended to make it an alternate Sabrinaverse, right? |
Alternate? Arent they all Alternate?
Everyone's life must be tested once in a while; but some are lucky to have a 5 question quizes while others are forced to write 200 page dissertations- all for the same grade! But not just Sabrina and company, everyone's going to be forced to either pass or fail. With lives on the line as a grade, this will be one class no one will be able to cut or dismiss...
Am I or what?!! ![Mr. Green](images/smiles/icon_mrgreen.gif) |
Well, that wasn't what I meant. It's more things like that ZZ Studions is in Columbus, not Springfield.
Elfen_Furry wrote: | At least I have not threatened the planet wide extinction through a 25 mile Ort Cloud Renegade Meteor... Hey!!! ![Twisted Evil](images/smiles/icon_twisted.gif) ![Arrow](images/smiles/icon_arrow.gif) ![Idea](images/smiles/icon_idea.gif) ![Exclamation](images/smiles/icon_exclaim.gif) ![Exclamation](images/smiles/icon_exclaim.gif) ![Exclamation](images/smiles/icon_exclaim.gif) |
No, and you shouldn't either. Planet wide devastation is MY speciality ![Twisted Evil](images/smiles/icon_twisted.gif) _________________ Tygon Panthera - name and species
www.planetfurry.com/~tygon/ |
|
Back to top |
|
![](templates/subSilver/images/spacer.gif) |
Elfen_Furry Moderator
![](images/avatars/d8c219ec3e60355705f18.gif)
Joined: 18 Jun 2002 Posts: 2601 Location: NYC NY
|
Posted: Sun Oct 27, 2002 10:26 pm Post subject: |
|
|
Tygon wrote: | Well, that wasn't what I meant. It's more things like that ZZ Studions is in Columbus, not Springfield. |
D'OH! |
|
Back to top |
|
![](templates/subSilver/images/spacer.gif) |
Cateagle Site Owner
![Site Owner Site Owner](images/ranks/rank-site-owner.gif)
![](images/avatars/228779962400bdc0f47c7d.jpg)
Joined: 20 Nov 2000 Posts: 1004 Location: Ft. Worth, TX
|
Posted: Sun Oct 27, 2002 11:00 pm Post subject: |
|
|
Elfen_Furry wrote: | Tygon wrote: | Well, that wasn't what I meant. It's more things like that ZZ Studions is in Columbus, not Springfield. |
D'OH! |
Actually, EWS has established them as being in Worthington, a smaller town on the north side of Coumbus.
Cateagle _________________ "But the wildest of all the wild animals was the Cateagle. He walked by himself and all places were alike to him."
-- With apologies to Rudyard Kipling |
|
Back to top |
|
![](templates/subSilver/images/spacer.gif) |
Elfen_Furry Moderator
![](images/avatars/d8c219ec3e60355705f18.gif)
Joined: 18 Jun 2002 Posts: 2601 Location: NYC NY
|
Posted: Mon Oct 28, 2002 6:49 pm Post subject: |
|
|
...and to believe that I have all this action going on in Springfeild....
D'OH!
Wait until the ending chapters of the original 14... it was set in within the setting of the World Trade Center's observation deck; after some demands have been met in chapters 10 - 13.
But off course, things can change. From Chapter 10 - 13 were relatively small, but 7 (currently 7b) - 9 were large. 14, as I remembered it, was 1/2 done. The outline for Chapter 15 was FOR THE REVOLUTION! I have yet to place thought into paper or binary, but to some it will be reminicant of certain times: Russia in 1914, Spain in 1930's, China in the 1880's an 1940's, Cuba in the 1950, even in the Good Ole USA on a certain day in November in 1963...
The chapter lengths vary in characters' introductions, as many have yet to be put in according to your eyes. As characters pop in and out, there will be plot twists and kinks to be generated... Sheesh... Solmaria is as I remembered- one of the kinkiest characters around, but Jammeka will have some definate plot twists put upon her young life.
Hints:
Solmaria has been introduced in a past chapter by name only and not as a person, while Jammeka was introduced first as a person and later by name in chapter 7a.
You know- I have yet to clean up that mess on I94... |
|
Back to top |
|
![](templates/subSilver/images/spacer.gif) |
Tygon Site Owner
![Site Owner Site Owner](images/ranks/rank-site-owner.gif)
![](images/avatars/146811545340e82c2aab393.jpg)
Joined: 03 Apr 2001 Posts: 2497 Location: Isernhagen, Lowersaxony, Germany
|
Posted: Mon Oct 28, 2002 7:08 pm Post subject: |
|
|
Cateagle wrote: | Elfen_Furry wrote: | Tygon wrote: | Well, that wasn't what I meant. It's more things like that ZZ Studions is in Columbus, not Springfield. |
D'OH! |
Actually, EWS has established them as being in Worthington, a smaller town on the north side of Coumbus.
Cateagle |
okay, greater Columbus ![Smile](images/smiles/icon_smile.gif) _________________ Tygon Panthera - name and species
www.planetfurry.com/~tygon/ |
|
Back to top |
|
![](templates/subSilver/images/spacer.gif) |
Tygon Site Owner
![Site Owner Site Owner](images/ranks/rank-site-owner.gif)
![](images/avatars/146811545340e82c2aab393.jpg)
Joined: 03 Apr 2001 Posts: 2497 Location: Isernhagen, Lowersaxony, Germany
|
Posted: Mon Oct 28, 2002 7:14 pm Post subject: |
|
|
Elfen_Furry wrote: | ...and to believe that I have all this action going on in Springfeild....
D'OH! |
Hehe, don't grudge. The mistake has been spotted. I just wonder why nobody has said something earlier
Elfen_Furry wrote: | Wait until the ending chapters of the original 14... it was set in within the setting of the World Trade Center's observation deck; after some demands have been met in chapters 10 - 13.
But off course, things can change. From Chapter 10 - 13 were relatively small, but 7 (currently 7b) - 9 were large. 14, as I remembered it, was 1/2 done. The outline for Chapter 15 was FOR THE REVOLUTION! I have yet to place thought into paper or binary, but to some it will be reminicant of certain times: Russia in 1914, Spain in 1930's, China in the 1880's an 1940's, Cuba in the 1950, even in the Good Ole USA on a certain day in November in 1963...
The chapter lengths vary in characters' introductions, as many have yet to be put in according to your eyes. As characters pop in and out, there will be plot twists and kinks to be generated... Sheesh... Solmaria is as I remembered- one of the kinkiest characters around, but Jammeka will have some definate plot twists put upon her young life.
Hints:
Solmaria has been introduced in a past chapter by name only and not as a person, while Jammeka was introduced first as a person and later by name in chapter 7a.
You know- I have yet to clean up that mess on I94... |
Sounds like interesting times are ahead ![Smile](images/smiles/icon_smile.gif) _________________ Tygon Panthera - name and species
www.planetfurry.com/~tygon/ |
|
Back to top |
|
![](templates/subSilver/images/spacer.gif) |
Elfen_Furry Moderator
![](images/avatars/d8c219ec3e60355705f18.gif)
Joined: 18 Jun 2002 Posts: 2601 Location: NYC NY
|
Posted: Tue Oct 29, 2002 12:07 am Post subject: |
|
|
Tygon wrote: | Elfen_Furry wrote: | ...and to believe that I have all this action going on in Springfeild....
D'OH! |
Hehe, don't grudge. The mistake has been spotted. I just wonder why nobody has said something earlier ![Smile](images/smiles/icon_smile.gif) |
Maybe they're too scared to say how many goof up ended up in the story... Like military copters shooting down a jet? Possible, but not doable in a practical sense. Or that I94 does not exist in at that part of the country.
But a good writer should be able to capture his audience through their imaginations, and any reader who dares gets up and complains about plausabilities and little details, in my opinion, HAS TOO MUCH TIME ON HIS HANDS!!!
But yes- I'm not grudging, and glad that somebody pointed something out.
Tygon wrote: | Sounds like interesting times are ahead ![Smile](images/smiles/icon_smile.gif) |
We'll see what will happeen next. As each chapter gets resurected from the harddrive and posted, as well as new chapters are created... it will be interesting times ahead! |
|
Back to top |
|
![](templates/subSilver/images/spacer.gif) |
Elfen_Furry Moderator
![](images/avatars/d8c219ec3e60355705f18.gif)
Joined: 18 Jun 2002 Posts: 2601 Location: NYC NY
|
Posted: Sat Nov 02, 2002 1:50 am Post subject: |
|
|
Holloween's gone and past, and I am not finished with my 7b chapter. It seems to be growing a life of its own with is what I feared when I started chapter 7, before it was broken into two
I'm also having computer security problems; my FTP/ssh went to hades and its rearing satan's ugly head all the time now. What does one expect with shareware?
In short the trail date expired and the registration code pops up as "This is a priated code! Please visit [site url] and register for a legit code!" Since I wont use paypal (personal reasons), I will have to email and snailmail the software author again for a new code. *Sigh*
What evil lies in the hearts of your average Mac user with 18 years of Mac OS Experience...? Where's my Res-Edit!
Hopefully all this will be fixed and soon! |
|
Back to top |
|
![](templates/subSilver/images/spacer.gif) |
|
|
You cannot post new topics in this forum You cannot reply to topics in this forum You cannot edit your posts in this forum You cannot delete your posts in this forum You cannot vote in polls in this forum You cannot attach files in this forum You cannot download files in this forum
|
Powered by phpBB © 2001, 2005 phpBB Group
|