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  Topic: Virmir's Metamor Keep stories! (updated 2/25)
Luther

Replies: 19
Views: 5885

PostForum: Writer's Guild   Posted: Wed Sep 26, 2007 1:28 am   Subject: Virmir's Metamor Keep stories! (updated 2/25)
Kept me up late with this one, lol.

Thought you outdone yourself on this one, liked what you did at the begining with Vale and her dream.
Also liked how she described panting as "degrading&q ...
  Topic: "The Galaxy Hero" Chapter 1 a longing for home.
Luther

Replies: 8
Views: 1956

PostForum: Writer's Guild   Posted: Wed Sep 26, 2007 12:55 am   Subject: "The Galaxy Hero" Chapter 1 a longing for home.
(sorry for posting a bit late, like to think about it a bit)

Love this, kinda reminds me of Bourne Identity with avoiding the government and everything.

I think you really got a cool idea going ...
  Topic: The Sara & Dorothy Cases
Luther

Replies: 49
Views: 11380

PostForum: Writer's Guild   Posted: Wed Sep 26, 2007 12:13 am   Subject: The Sara & Dorothy Cases
(Looks like im guilty of lurking on you...sorry about that.)

Read the first story several months ago but never got around posting.

Anyway, just read your second story (missing Girlfriend) and th ...
  Topic: The Unicorn
Luther

Replies: 4
Views: 1496

PostForum: Writer's Guild   Posted: Tue Sep 25, 2007 11:52 pm   Subject: The Unicorn
Good read, really enjoyed it.

Not much to add that Teric and Virmir havent already mentioned,
have to really agree with them on the paragraphs though.

Planing on continueing with it?

-L
  Topic: Shadows in the Snow. My first story.
Luther

Replies: 56
Views: 27614

PostForum: Writer's Guild   Posted: Tue Sep 25, 2007 11:40 pm   Subject: Shadows in the Snow. My first story.
Nice twist there. Loved the creature, reminded me of something out of Silent Hill,
and the description of the face and blade weapon were great.

Im going to have to root for the Aberrant in the in ...
  Topic: "Spells of Brigervan" -- A quick story
Luther

Replies: 7
Views: 2055

PostForum: Writer's Guild   Posted: Wed Jun 13, 2007 2:01 am   Subject: "Spells of Brigervan" -- A quick story
Nicely done once again, you seem to be good at these rather strange stories. Had me guessing toward the end...
until I accidently read the last sentence scrolling down *smacks himself in the head*. ...
  Topic: Angel Story chapters 1-4
Luther

Replies: 2
Views: 1303

PostForum: Writer's Guild   Posted: Sat Mar 17, 2007 1:03 pm   Subject: Angel Story chapters 1-4
Looken good to me, keep it up.

-L
  Topic: A New Story
Luther

Replies: 4
Views: 1541

PostForum: Writer's Guild   Posted: Tue Mar 13, 2007 8:33 pm   Subject: A New Story
I like it, looking forward to more.

-L
  Topic: Descent
Luther

Replies: 6
Views: 1912

PostForum: Writer's Guild   Posted: Mon Feb 05, 2007 12:06 am   Subject: Descent
Nice work. There were three things that really stuck out to me:

1. Gregory being unable to get close to his mother, due to her power and his curse, (just seems like something a vilian would come up ...
  Topic: What are you listening to right now?
Luther

Replies: 1008
Views: 113570

PostForum: Ongoing Threads   Posted: Sun Jan 28, 2007 1:29 pm   Subject: What are you listening to right now?
Main theme to Mercenaries: Playground of Destruction

-L
  Topic: Virmir's Metamor Keep stories! (updated 2/25)
Luther

Replies: 19
Views: 5885

PostForum: Writer's Guild   Posted: Sun Jan 28, 2007 1:26 pm   Subject: Virmir's Metamor Keep stories! (updated 2/25)
A very intresting scouting unit. I'm curious what happens to Claudia, was not expecting the incident with the Keeper.

-L
  Topic: My furry art--feedback appreciated
Luther

Replies: 18
Views: 3929

PostForum: Drawing Corner   Posted: Thu Jan 25, 2007 4:33 pm   Subject: My furry art--feedback appreciated
Awesomeness on the picture, and a good start on the shading.

Also, you plan on writing something involving this charector?

-L
  Topic: "Scarred" -- A quick story
Luther

Replies: 4
Views: 1356

PostForum: Writer's Guild   Posted: Sun Jan 21, 2007 1:42 am   Subject: "Scarred" -- A quick story
A bit sad for my taste, but the ending finished it up quite nicely I think.

Overall nice job.

-L
  Topic: What are you listening to right now?
Luther

Replies: 1008
Views: 113570

PostForum: Ongoing Threads   Posted: Sun Jan 21, 2007 1:04 am   Subject: What are you listening to right now?
Theme to Metal Gear Solid 3: Snake Eater.

-L
  Topic: Virmir's Metamor Keep stories! (updated 2/25)
Luther

Replies: 19
Views: 5885

PostForum: Writer's Guild   Posted: Sun Jan 21, 2007 12:54 am   Subject: Virmir's Metamor Keep stories! (updated 2/25)
I like it, can't wait for the next.

-L
 
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