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ChrisFoxx Site Owner
Joined: 19 Mar 2001 Posts: 1056 Location: Eau Claire, PA USA
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Posted: Sun Aug 03, 2008 1:07 am Post subject: Chapter 56 |
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Please enjoy Racky's work with my three sentences added.
Chris |
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racky raccoon Registered User
Joined: 24 Mar 2004 Posts: 619 Location: MASH H.Q. (Essex) England
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Posted: Sun Aug 03, 2008 6:19 am Post subject: |
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WOO HOO its out yay YEAH take the Henry Kissinger!
I must admit it was a hard chapter to write, it has been sitting on my PC for over a year now in one way shape or form. Just hope you guys enjoy it... This is the longest chapter I think so far. _________________ A Pro From Dover.
Crash Survivor 08/04
He who seeks knowledge is never a fool.
-Mike Regan-
I want a Lawyer, a Doctor... A CHEESE SANDWICH
-Harley Quinn-
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Frazikar Registered User
Joined: 25 Jan 2008 Posts: 1181 Location: North Coast, USA
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Posted: Sun Aug 03, 2008 9:45 am Post subject: New Years |
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56 is UP, double yea!
Now the question, do we really want to know what 'the Hop' entails.... |
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ChrisFoxx Site Owner
Joined: 19 Mar 2001 Posts: 1056 Location: Eau Claire, PA USA
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Posted: Sun Aug 03, 2008 10:21 am Post subject: Re: New Years |
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Frazikar wrote: | 56 is UP, double yea!
Now the question, do we really want to know what 'the Hop' entails.... |
Probably not! |
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tobi3B Registered User
Joined: 07 Jan 2008 Posts: 645 Location: Germany Siegen
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Posted: Sun Aug 03, 2008 12:08 pm Post subject: |
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Nice chapter Chris and Racky!! _________________ Whether a black cat brings misfortune or not, depends on whether one is a fur or a mouse.
[br]Feed Me![br]Adopted from Valenth |
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ChrisFoxx Site Owner
Joined: 19 Mar 2001 Posts: 1056 Location: Eau Claire, PA USA
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Posted: Sun Aug 03, 2008 12:52 pm Post subject: |
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tobi3B wrote: | Nice chapter Chris and Racky!! |
Than'keeeeew! |
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anthony Site Owner
Joined: 12 Nov 2001 Posts: 1304 Location: Norway
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Posted: Sun Aug 03, 2008 3:47 pm Post subject: |
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Great stuff!
(As usual... )
You may want to change the end of the chapter, though...
_________________ "My name's Lion, Anthony Lion"
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ChrisFoxx Site Owner
Joined: 19 Mar 2001 Posts: 1056 Location: Eau Claire, PA USA
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Posted: Sun Aug 03, 2008 4:48 pm Post subject: |
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anthony wrote: | Great stuff!
(As usual... ) |
Thank you!
Quote: | You may want to change the end of the chapter, though...
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D'OH!!
Mike, you didn't catch that! |
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ChrisFoxx Site Owner
Joined: 19 Mar 2001 Posts: 1056 Location: Eau Claire, PA USA
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Posted: Sun Aug 03, 2008 10:42 pm Post subject: |
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Mike Regan wrote: | ChrisFoxx wrote: |
Mike, you didn't catch that! |
I did, but Anthony said something first.
You might also want to recheck the paragraph indents and spacing.
Some did not come out right. Try around the ring scene. |
Don't care, I just want people to tell me how good it was
Seriousness aside, I'll check it later, it's way past my bedtime. A lot of it I'm writing off to teething troubles from the new website design.
Didn't notice, didja? |
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Tigermark Site Owner
Joined: 18 Apr 2003 Posts: 855 Location: Hopkinsville, KY
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Posted: Mon Aug 04, 2008 12:39 am Post subject: |
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Yep, and it does have a nice fresh look. Very clean. Glad you kept "The Mistress of the Mouse" pic of Sabrina. The chapter was very long, and very, very good. I really enjoyed the confrontation scene and resolution with Clarence and Susan. heh, who'da thunk it? Susan getting so excited by someone being in control. The Clique has deep waters indeed.
And so, Zig adds another stray to the studio's collection. You know, try as they might, sooner or later I think the whole gang will end up working for her. great job, Chris, Racky. I thoroughly enjoyed it.
TM (Who, after this much innuendo could almost go smoke a cigarette..if I smoked.) _________________ Tiger, tiger, burning bright...
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ChrisFoxx Site Owner
Joined: 19 Mar 2001 Posts: 1056 Location: Eau Claire, PA USA
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Posted: Mon Aug 04, 2008 10:15 am Post subject: |
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[quote="Tigermark"]Yep, and it does have a nice fresh look. Very clean. Glad you kept "The Mistress of the Mouse" pic of Sabrina. [/quote
"Mistress of the Mouse ... I like that!
Oh man, I HAD to keep that! I'm so in love with that pic! I honestly thought of having it transferred onto a necktie, if Eric'd let me
Actually, Chris II (my son, aka Hunter Bahamut in FA (when it works) and dA) is working on a website of his own and decided to use some of his newfound talent as a Father's Day surprise for me! The new site was being beta'd on my Furnation site for about 2 months now. Trouble is, with the new organization, I now have new stuff to learn! It isn't updated right, so I MAY -- God forbid! -- have to whack the entire site in order to reload it with this new format.
Anyone have a copy of WS-FTP I can hork to make life easier?
Quote: | The chapter was very long, and very, very good. I really enjoyed the confrontation scene and resolution with Clarence and Susan. heh, who'da thunk it? |
All Racky's idea. When I read it I absolutely LOVED the idea of Susan getting that defensive, then Clarence of all people putting her in her place!
Quote: | Susan getting so excited by someone being in control. The Clique has deep waters indeed. |
Yeah, I had to admit, I loved that idea, too I'm hoping (and suspect he will) Josh Fox'll like it -- there's a reason when I last talked to him that he wanted to give Susan a necklace that kind of looked like a collar
Quote: | And so, Zig adds another stray to the studio's collection. You know, try as they might, sooner or later I think the whole gang will end up working for her. |
COULD you imagine!!!! LOL!!
Quote: | great job, Chris, Racky. I thoroughly enjoyed it. |
Everything you mentioned can all be attributed to Racky. Credit where credit's due.
(talking of taking in strays ... )
Quote: | TM (Who, after this much innuendo could almost go smoke a cigarette..if I smoked.) |
You too, huh?
...... maaaaybe a Clarence/susan story .... naaaaaaaaaaaah! |
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DHLawrence Registered User
Joined: 18 Nov 2007 Posts: 96 Location: Canada
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Posted: Mon Aug 04, 2008 12:29 pm Post subject: |
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ChrisFoxx wrote: | Anyone have a copy of WS-FTP I can hork to make life easier? |
Would Win-SCP be of any help? It's free, and I find the interface a little friendlier.
Quote: | ...... maaaaybe a Clarence/susan story .... naaaaaaaaaaaah! |
Well, not on the publicly-viewable section of the website at least |
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ChrisFoxx Site Owner
Joined: 19 Mar 2001 Posts: 1056 Location: Eau Claire, PA USA
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Posted: Mon Aug 04, 2008 1:31 pm Post subject: |
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DHLawrence wrote: | ChrisFoxx wrote: | Anyone have a copy of WS-FTP I can hork to make life easier? |
Would Win-SCP be of any help? It's free, and I find the interface a little friendlier. |
I reckon so, thanks!
I've been using LeechFTP for countless thousands of years, only thing about it I don't like is that it doesn't let you move files around at the server. I need a proggie that does.
*holds head* Ye gods, I'm talking like Racky more and more
Quote: | Quote: | ...... maaaaybe a Clarence/susan story .... naaaaaaaaaaaah! |
Well, not on the publicly-viewable section of the website at least |
Hmmmmmmmmm ................. maaaaaaaayyyyyybe! |
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Styx Site Owner
Joined: 25 Dec 2002 Posts: 3176 Location: West Covina, California
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Posted: Mon Aug 04, 2008 2:14 pm Post subject: |
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Yeah Clare is going to need some lessons in controling his skunkish tendencies like Sabby did, or his and Cindy's honeymoon will be mor eventful either of them want it to be _________________ "Political Correctness is tyranny with manners." Charlton Heston
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Teric Registered User
Joined: 11 Dec 2006 Posts: 2566 Location: Southern California
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Posted: Mon Aug 04, 2008 5:36 pm Post subject: |
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YAY thank you very much Chris and Racky!
I enjoyed this chapter quite a bit, even though I was pretty surprised to meet Sabrina's extended family.
Yes, I have to agree that the scene between Clarence and Susan was quite unexpected. I just sat there in wide-eyed disbelief when Susan switched from angry, protective lioness to... to... woa. *shake head*
Josh, you've got to do something about that girl...
And a very nice nod to Eric's Y2K comic--I caught the reference immediately. Fun!
It's sweet to see that Clarence still has some feelings for Sabrina. And not at all unexpected. But it's clear that he realizes that it will never happen--he's got himself all wrapped up in tawny-lop-eared love.
Thanks again, guys--this was a good, fun chapter. _________________ Styx: "Oh sure like flaming a dragon going to do massive damage, brave challenge there Teric." |
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