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PostPosted: Sun Aug 03, 2008 1:07 am    Post subject: Chapter 56 Reply with quote

Please enjoy Racky's work with my three sentences added.

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PostPosted: Sun Aug 03, 2008 6:19 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

WOO HOO its out yay YEAH take the Henry Kissinger!

I must admit it was a hard chapter to write, it has been sitting on my PC for over a year now in one way shape or form. Just hope you guys enjoy it... This is the longest chapter I think so far.

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PostPosted: Sun Aug 03, 2008 9:45 am    Post subject: New Years Reply with quote

56 is UP, double yea!

Now the question, do we really want to know what 'the Hop' entails....
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PostPosted: Sun Aug 03, 2008 10:21 am    Post subject: Re: New Years Reply with quote

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56 is UP, double yea!

Now the question, do we really want to know what 'the Hop' entails....


Probably not! Smile
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PostPosted: Sun Aug 03, 2008 12:08 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Nice chapter Chris and Racky!! Very Happy
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PostPosted: Sun Aug 03, 2008 12:52 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

tobi3B wrote:
Nice chapter Chris and Racky!! Very Happy


Than'keeeeew!
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PostPosted: Sun Aug 03, 2008 3:47 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Great stuff!
(As usual... )

You may want to change the end of the chapter, though...

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End of Chapter 55

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PostPosted: Sun Aug 03, 2008 4:48 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

anthony wrote:
Great stuff!
(As usual... )


Thank you!

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You may want to change the end of the chapter, though...

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End of Chapter 55


D'OH!!

Mike, you didn't catch that! Wink
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PostPosted: Sun Aug 03, 2008 10:42 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

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Mike, you didn't catch that! Wink


I did, but Anthony said something first.

You might also want to recheck the paragraph indents and spacing.
Some did not come out right. Try around the ring scene.


Don't care, I just want people to tell me how good it was Cool

Seriousness aside, I'll check it later, it's way past my bedtime. A lot of it I'm writing off to teething troubles from the new website design.

Didn't notice, didja? Razz
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PostPosted: Mon Aug 04, 2008 12:39 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Yep, and it does have a nice fresh look. Very clean. Glad you kept "The Mistress of the Mouse" pic of Sabrina. The chapter was very long, and very, very good. I really enjoyed the confrontation scene and resolution with Clarence and Susan. heh, who'da thunk it? Susan getting so excited by someone being in control. The Clique has deep waters indeed.

And so, Zig adds another stray to the studio's collection. You know, try as they might, sooner or later I think the whole gang will end up working for her. great job, Chris, Racky. I thoroughly enjoyed it.


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PostPosted: Mon Aug 04, 2008 10:15 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

[quote="Tigermark"]Yep, and it does have a nice fresh look. Very clean. Glad you kept "The Mistress of the Mouse" pic of Sabrina. [/quote

"Mistress of the Mouse ... I like that! Smile

Oh man, I HAD to keep that! I'm so in love with that pic! I honestly thought of having it transferred onto a necktie, if Eric'd let me Smile

Actually, Chris II (my son, aka Hunter Bahamut in FA (when it works) and dA) is working on a website of his own and decided to use some of his newfound talent as a Father's Day surprise for me! The new site was being beta'd on my Furnation site for about 2 months now. Trouble is, with the new organization, I now have new stuff to learn! It isn't updated right, so I MAY -- God forbid! -- have to whack the entire site in order to reload it with this new format.

Anyone have a copy of WS-FTP I can hork to make life easier? Wink

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The chapter was very long, and very, very good. I really enjoyed the confrontation scene and resolution with Clarence and Susan. heh, who'da thunk it?


All Racky's idea. When I read it I absolutely LOVED the idea of Susan getting that defensive, then Clarence of all people putting her in her place!

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Susan getting so excited by someone being in control. The Clique has deep waters indeed.


Yeah, I had to admit, I loved that idea, too Cool I'm hoping (and suspect he will) Josh Fox'll like it -- there's a reason when I last talked to him that he wanted to give Susan a necklace that kind of looked like a collar Twisted Evil

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And so, Zig adds another stray to the studio's collection. You know, try as they might, sooner or later I think the whole gang will end up working for her.


COULD you imagine!!!! LOL!!

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great job, Chris, Racky. I thoroughly enjoyed it.


Everything you mentioned can all be attributed to Racky. Credit where credit's due.

(talking of taking in strays ... Wink Very Happy )

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TM (Who, after this much innuendo could almost go smoke a cigarette..if I smoked.) Wink


You too, huh? Very Happy

...... maaaaybe a Clarence/susan story .... naaaaaaaaaaaah!
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PostPosted: Mon Aug 04, 2008 12:29 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

ChrisFoxx wrote:
Anyone have a copy of WS-FTP I can hork to make life easier? Wink


Would Win-SCP be of any help? It's free, and I find the interface a little friendlier.

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...... maaaaybe a Clarence/susan story .... naaaaaaaaaaaah!


Well, not on the publicly-viewable section of the website at least Wink
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PostPosted: Mon Aug 04, 2008 1:31 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

DHLawrence wrote:
ChrisFoxx wrote:
Anyone have a copy of WS-FTP I can hork to make life easier? Wink


Would Win-SCP be of any help? It's free, and I find the interface a little friendlier.


I reckon so, thanks!

I've been using LeechFTP for countless thousands of years, only thing about it I don't like is that it doesn't let you move files around at the server. I need a proggie that does.

*holds head* Ye gods, I'm talking like Racky more and more Wink

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...... maaaaybe a Clarence/susan story .... naaaaaaaaaaaah!


Well, not on the publicly-viewable section of the website at least Wink


Hmmmmmmmmm ................. maaaaaaaayyyyyybe! Cool
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PostPosted: Mon Aug 04, 2008 2:14 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Yeah Clare is going to need some lessons in controling his skunkish tendencies like Sabby did, or his and Cindy's honeymoon will be mor eventful either of them want it to be Twisted Evil Twisted Evil Twisted Evil
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PostPosted: Mon Aug 04, 2008 5:36 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

YAY thank you very much Chris and Racky! Smile

I enjoyed this chapter quite a bit, even though I was pretty surprised to meet Sabrina's extended family.

Yes, I have to agree that the scene between Clarence and Susan was quite unexpected. I just sat there in wide-eyed disbelief when Susan switched from angry, protective lioness to... to... woa. *shake head*

Josh, you've got to do something about that girl...

And a very nice nod to Eric's Y2K comic--I caught the reference immediately. Fun!

It's sweet to see that Clarence still has some feelings for Sabrina. And not at all unexpected. But it's clear that he realizes that it will never happen--he's got himself all wrapped up in tawny-lop-eared love. Smile

Thanks again, guys--this was a good, fun chapter.

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