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racky raccoon
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PostPosted: Mon Jun 16, 2008 8:35 pm    Post subject: Chapter 55!!!!! Reply with quote

Thought i'd start a proper thread the other one was cluttered Very Happy

Hope ou guys like it as much as we loved writing it

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PostPosted: Mon Jun 16, 2008 10:30 pm    Post subject: Re: Chapter 55!!!!! Reply with quote

racky raccoon wrote:
Thought i'd start a proper thread the other one was cluttered Very Happy


But I liked it! They were saying nice stuff about us! Smile

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What he said Smile
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PostPosted: Mon Jun 16, 2008 11:11 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

It's about time! I've been dieing to read this, and it seems like forever since 54.

I sure hope it won't be as long for 56.

Great chapter, guys. But it sure chopped off sudden like.

*thumbs up*

And I'm having some difficulty visualizing Sabby's pole dance...

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PostPosted: Mon Jun 16, 2008 11:16 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Nicolai Borovskaya wrote:
Great chapter, guys. But it sure chopped off sudden like.


Probably from having too much--there was no natural break in the story.

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And I'm having some difficulty visualizing Sabby's pole dance...


Yes, that certainly was some enchanted evening.

Did Clarence buy what I think he did? That seems like a rather odd gift, even for the 'new him'!

The Christmas exchange in Eau Claire was interestingly written. Reminds me of an old Are You Being Served? episode when Mrs Slocombe was having her birthday and the other staff members got her a gift...

Mr Humphries (breaking fourth wall): "We're not going to gell you what it is. It's a secret!"
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PostPosted: Mon Jun 16, 2008 11:31 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Nicolai Borovskaya wrote:
It's about time! I've been dieing to read this, and it seems like forever since 54.


I know, and I really am sorry!!

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I sure hope it won't be as long for 56.


Long as everything falls into place, should be a week! Smile

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Great chapter, guys. But it sure chopped off sudden like.


Thanks!

That seemed to be the best place to take the break. I kinda felt the same way, but there really wasn't any other place to do it.

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And I'm having some difficulty visualizing Sabby's pole dance...


But I'll bet you're having fun trying Wink
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PostPosted: Mon Jun 16, 2008 11:36 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

DHLawrence wrote:
Nicolai Borovskaya wrote:
Great chapter, guys. But it sure chopped off sudden like.


Probably from having too much--there was no natural break in the story.


You're right, there really wasn't!

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And I'm having some difficulty visualizing Sabby's pole dance...


Yes, that certainly was some enchanted evening.


Awwwyeeeaaaah! Cool

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Did Clarence buy what I think he did? That seems like a rather odd gift, even for the 'new him'!


I dunno, what do you think he got her? Wink

No, seriously, what do you think he got her?

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The Christmas exchange in Eau Claire was interestingly written. Reminds me of an old Are You Being Served? episode when Mrs Slocombe was having her birthday and the other staff members got her a gift...

Mr Humphries (breaking fourth wall): "We're not going to gell you what it is. It's a secret!"


DAMN! You guessed it, that's exactly where that idea came from! Very Happy
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PostPosted: Mon Jun 16, 2008 11:43 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

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I dunno, what do you think he got her? Wink

No, seriously, what do you think he got her?


Well, unless "paw-held stick blender" wasn't a euphemisum...

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DAMN! You guessed it, that's exactly where that idea came from! Very Happy


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PostPosted: Tue Jun 17, 2008 4:29 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Well, I for one knew exactly what a "Paw-heold stick blender" was. We have one. it's great for mixing drinks and shakes and the like. It does make a bit of noise and, well, vibration, so your idea is as good as any as to what Zig will actually use it for.

Great chapter guys. Plus, its always fun to see BondoFox around.

(pole dancing, with bushy tails. the mind boggles!)

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PostPosted: Tue Jun 17, 2008 5:52 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Are You Being Served..... Americans..... strange cross overs?

I wonder is Mrs Slocombe (heehee innuendo) would be a feline in the story.... weird.

Well at least you know now what the plastic mold was for Smile

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PostPosted: Tue Jun 17, 2008 7:29 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

DHLawrence wrote:
ChrisFoxx wrote:
I dunno, what do you think he got her? Wink

No, seriously, what do you think he got her?


Well, unless "paw-held stick blender" wasn't a euphemisum...


Nope, he really did get her a stick blender!
This is Clarence, remember! Smile

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PostPosted: Tue Jun 17, 2008 7:29 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Tigermark wrote:
Well, I for one knew exactly what a "Paw-held stick blender" was. We have one. it's great for mixing drinks and shakes and the like. It does make a bit of noise and, well, vibration, so your idea is as good as any as to what Zig will actually use it for.


I had those same thoughts running through my head Smile

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Great chapter guys.


Thank you!!

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Plus, its always fun to see BondoFox around.


I don't know why, but he had to make another appearance Smile

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I know mine's still boggled!
But in a really good way Smile
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PostPosted: Tue Jun 17, 2008 7:36 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

racky raccoon wrote:
Are You Being Served..... Americans..... strange cross overs?


I know! Tell you what, when that show made it over here in the 80's on public television, it was a phenomenon! Not as big as Monty Python was when it hit the PBS stations, but darned near!

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I wonder is Mrs Slocombe (heehee innuendo) would be a feline in the story.... weird.


I couldn't see her being anything else, with her constant references to her pussy Very Happy

(that's her housecat for those of you who never saw the show, she always refers to it as "my pussy" for the double-entendre)

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Well at least you know now what the plastic mold was for Smile


When I saw that cartoon, I simply HAD to! Smile


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PostPosted: Tue Jun 17, 2008 10:22 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

racky raccoon wrote:
Are You Being Served..... Americans..... strange cross overs?


Americans and a Canadian Razz

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Well, I for one knew exactly what a "Paw-heold stick blender" was. We have one. it's great for mixing drinks and shakes and the like. It does make a bit of noise and, well, vibration, so your idea is as good as any as to what Zig will actually use it for.


Well, with her saying to Clarence "how naughty", it's pretty easy to guess Wink
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PostPosted: Tue Jun 17, 2008 10:42 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Fantastic Chapter! Finally know what that mould was used for.
Can't wait for the next chapter, i tried to just read a little but i just had to keep reading.
Not exactly the best place to end a chapter but i understand that the splitting must have been quite hard.

Keep 'em coming! Please!

Great Work Chris and Racky!
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PostPosted: Tue Jun 17, 2008 11:01 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

My bet is that Clarence didn't even think about any double entendres or 'alternate' uses...
For someone working in a porn studio, he's still rather... naive and innocent.
(Which is why everyone likes him)

The big question is whether or not I'll ever be able to use my stick-blender again, without thinking of Zig-zag.
(I only use it for making chocolate mousse and similar goodies, though. Would probably do me good not to use it that often in the future... )

BTW: I think that Darke is waaaay to underexposed as in this or any other story taking place in that studio.

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