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hikaru Administrator
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Kellan Meig'h Administrator
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Posted: Wed Jan 16, 2008 8:00 pm Post subject: |
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Yay!
*Quickly surfs over to read it*
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Teric Registered User
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Posted: Wed Jan 16, 2008 10:07 pm Post subject: |
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Wha...? What the heck happened there? Sheila's having flashbacks, and now she's freaking out after an encounter with some stranger. And these memories aren't even real! Is she ever going to be able to get her mind put back together?
Now forgive me, but I don't remember who Larry is...? Aparently some military fox whose fiance had an accident. Has he been mentioned before? Maybe I should go back through previous chapters.
Quote: | He gave his tails a quick shake... |
Just a note, did you mean to say that Larry had more than one tail (i.e. is he a kitsune)? _________________ Styx: "Oh sure like flaming a dragon going to do massive damage, brave challenge there Teric." |
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hikaru Administrator
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Posted: Thu Jan 17, 2008 12:48 am Post subject: |
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Teric wrote: | Wha...? What the heck happened there? Sheila's having flashbacks, and now she's freaking out after an encounter with some stranger. And these memories aren't even real! Is she ever going to be able to get her mind put back together?
Now forgive me, but I don't remember who Larry is...? Aparently some military fox whose fiance had an accident. Has he been mentioned before? Maybe I should go back through previous chapters.
Quote: | He gave his tails a quick shake... |
Just a note, did you mean to say that Larry had more than one tail (i.e. is he a kitsune)? |
Hmmm... Kistune---in the navy----rank of Commander----with name Larry.
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Kellan Meig'h Administrator
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Posted: Thu Jan 17, 2008 12:24 pm Post subject: |
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Well ... ,
I'm not sure how to comment on this chapter, Hikaru-
Michelle is one of the kit's names, if I'm not mistaken.
*runs back over to read it again*
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Lucius_Vane Registered User
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Posted: Thu Jan 17, 2008 4:12 pm Post subject: |
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Hmmm... good stuff! Keep this up, Hikaru. No, really. Keep writting. Now.
(By the way, the link on the front page still leads to chapter 26.) _________________
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hikaru Administrator
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Posted: Thu Jan 17, 2008 8:26 pm Post subject: |
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Mike Regan wrote: | Got himself a comeo huh?
Did he know about this before or will you have to hide from him next MFM?
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Talked to him on the phone after writing it, but before publishing to make sure he was cool with it.
Kellan Meig'h wrote: | I'm not sure how to comment on this chapter, Hikaru-
Michelle is one of the kit's names, if I'm not mistaken.
*runs back over to read it again* |
Correct. And who did she name her after? =^_^= _________________ Read my comic: http://www.ImperialGelf.com
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Kellan Meig'h Administrator
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Posted: Fri Jan 18, 2008 3:00 am Post subject: |
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hikaru wrote: |
Kellan Meig'h wrote: | I'm not sure how to comment on this chapter, Hikaru-
Michelle is one of the kit's names, if I'm not mistaken.
*runs back over to read it again* |
Correct. And who did she name her after? =^_^= |
*bangs forehead on keyboard*
Uh, let's see ... (quickly re-reads the relevant section) Michelle was the name of her twin sister that is supposedly dead. Maybe not so dead?
Hikaru, you are just sooo ... evil! Nicely done! *bows deeply to the author*
And after re-reading that bit, the mouse is either Fish or Arden. He is someone that Sheila knows.
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Styx Site Owner
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Posted: Fri Jan 18, 2008 3:07 am Post subject: |
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I would say Fish since Hikaru has said that Arden hasn't shown up yet _________________ "Political Correctness is tyranny with manners." Charlton Heston
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AmigaDragon Registered User
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Posted: Fri Jan 18, 2008 4:28 am Post subject: |
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Well, we already know who Fish is, unless Hikaru's sent our assumptions on a wild goose chase on that... the nanny. _________________ "Cogito, ergo es. I think, therefore you is." Ray D. Tutto (King of the Moon) to Baron Munschaussen |
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hikaru Administrator
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Posted: Fri Jan 18, 2008 3:33 pm Post subject: |
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AmigaDragon wrote: | Well, we already know who Fish is, unless Hikaru's sent our assumptions on a wild goose chase on that... the nanny. |
Yep. Fish is the nanny.
And the vixen in the hospital is Sheila's long lost (and thought dead) twin.
And yes--- I am evil!
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AmigaDragon Registered User
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Posted: Fri Jan 18, 2008 6:06 pm Post subject: |
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BTW, your front page says chapter 27 but the link still points to 26. _________________ "Cogito, ergo es. I think, therefore you is." Ray D. Tutto (King of the Moon) to Baron Munschaussen |
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hikaru Administrator
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Zuesek Registered User
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Posted: Sat Jan 19, 2008 2:21 am Post subject: |
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Great chapter!
I'm with others about Sheila though. I thought she just about had her memories and her sanity under control. Was this more intervention by a certain someone to keep her life in a state of living-hell?
So Sheila has a long lost twin? That will be an interesting development I'm sure. They're both in the hospital and who knows if Tammy might end up right there with them, depending on how gentle Hecate ends up being. |
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Ryan Fox Registered User
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Posted: Thu Sep 09, 2010 5:34 am Post subject: |
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A bit of an abrupt end if you tell me.. though I am anxiously awaiting the next chapter. -grins- Why didn't I pick up on this before? -sighs and shrugs- Now you've got the vixen reading it too... No yiff for meee! -sulks-
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