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Chapter 27 --- Surprise! Got it up early!
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PostPosted: Wed Jan 16, 2008 7:46 pm    Post subject: Chapter 27 --- Surprise! Got it up early! Reply with quote

Enjoy!
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PostPosted: Wed Jan 16, 2008 8:00 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Yay!

*Quickly surfs over to read it*

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PostPosted: Wed Jan 16, 2008 10:07 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Wha...? What the heck happened there? Sheila's having flashbacks, and now she's freaking out after an encounter with some stranger. And these memories aren't even real! Is she ever going to be able to get her mind put back together? Sad

Now forgive me, but I don't remember who Larry is...? Aparently some military fox whose fiance had an accident. Has he been mentioned before? Maybe I should go back through previous chapters.

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He gave his tails a quick shake...

Just a note, did you mean to say that Larry had more than one tail (i.e. is he a kitsune)?

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PostPosted: Thu Jan 17, 2008 12:48 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Teric wrote:
Wha...? What the heck happened there? Sheila's having flashbacks, and now she's freaking out after an encounter with some stranger. And these memories aren't even real! Is she ever going to be able to get her mind put back together? Sad

Now forgive me, but I don't remember who Larry is...? Aparently some military fox whose fiance had an accident. Has he been mentioned before? Maybe I should go back through previous chapters.

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He gave his tails a quick shake...

Just a note, did you mean to say that Larry had more than one tail (i.e. is he a kitsune)?


Hmmm... Kistune---in the navy----rank of Commander----with name Larry.

Anyone identify?

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PostPosted: Thu Jan 17, 2008 12:24 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Well ... ,

I'm not sure how to comment on this chapter, Hikaru-

Michelle is one of the kit's names, if I'm not mistaken.

*runs back over to read it again*

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PostPosted: Thu Jan 17, 2008 4:12 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Hmmm... good stuff! Keep this up, Hikaru. No, really. Keep writting. Now.

(By the way, the link on the front page still leads to chapter 26.)

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PostPosted: Thu Jan 17, 2008 8:26 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Mike Regan wrote:
Got himself a comeo huh?

Did he know about this before or will you have to hide from him next MFM?

Wink


Talked to him on the phone after writing it, but before publishing to make sure he was cool with it. Smile

Kellan Meig'h wrote:
I'm not sure how to comment on this chapter, Hikaru-

Michelle is one of the kit's names, if I'm not mistaken.

*runs back over to read it again*


Correct. And who did she name her after? =^_^=

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PostPosted: Fri Jan 18, 2008 3:00 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

hikaru wrote:

Kellan Meig'h wrote:
I'm not sure how to comment on this chapter, Hikaru-

Michelle is one of the kit's names, if I'm not mistaken.

*runs back over to read it again*


Correct. And who did she name her after? =^_^=


*bangs forehead on keyboard*

Uh, let's see ... (quickly re-reads the relevant section) Michelle was the name of her twin sister that is supposedly dead. Maybe not so dead?

Hikaru, you are just sooo ... evil! Nicely done! *bows deeply to the author*

And after re-reading that bit, the mouse is either Fish or Arden. He is someone that Sheila knows.

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PostPosted: Fri Jan 18, 2008 3:07 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

I would say Fish since Hikaru has said that Arden hasn't shown up yet
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PostPosted: Fri Jan 18, 2008 4:28 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Well, we already know who Fish is, unless Hikaru's sent our assumptions on a wild goose chase on that... the nanny.
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PostPosted: Fri Jan 18, 2008 3:33 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

AmigaDragon wrote:
Well, we already know who Fish is, unless Hikaru's sent our assumptions on a wild goose chase on that... the nanny.


Yep. Fish is the nanny.

And the vixen in the hospital is Sheila's long lost (and thought dead) twin.

And yes--- I am evil! Evil or Very Mad

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PostPosted: Fri Jan 18, 2008 6:06 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

BTW, your front page says chapter 27 but the link still points to 26.
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PostPosted: Fri Jan 18, 2008 7:21 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

AmigaDragon wrote:
BTW, your front page says chapter 27 but the link still points to 26.


Hmmm... fixed it in dreamweaver, but didn't push it up I guess.

thx

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PostPosted: Sat Jan 19, 2008 2:21 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Great chapter!

I'm with others about Sheila though. I thought she just about had her memories and her sanity under control. Was this more intervention by a certain someone to keep her life in a state of living-hell?

So Sheila has a long lost twin? That will be an interesting development I'm sure. They're both in the hospital and who knows if Tammy might end up right there with them, depending on how gentle Hecate ends up being.
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PostPosted: Thu Sep 09, 2010 5:34 am    Post subject: Reply with quote




A bit of an abrupt end if you tell me.. though I am anxiously awaiting the next chapter. -grins- Why didn't I pick up on this before? -sighs and shrugs- Now you've got the vixen reading it too... No yiff for meee! -sulks-

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