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Loafer
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PostPosted: Sat Jan 12, 2008 12:46 pm    Post subject: A story with no name Reply with quote

ok so incase no one knows I do write now and then, but I naver took any writing classes. Last week I started on a new story that would start as a backstory to my main charicters and hopefully evolve (if I could be so lucky) into an ongoing series.

Warning! This series will deal with adult situation although not directly some things like porn and clever ways of saying what the characters are doing will be used. I am trying to keep this as clean as possible but still get into the more adult stuff. Also this story used Hir, Shi and Sie referencing to the herm gender.

Feel free to tear it to shreds as really bad hehe (yes it's spell checked and gramer as put through word)

so here is Chapter 1: The Beginning:

Many years ago on a far away world called Xeon, a planet much like earth, there lived a clan of anthro dragons. They kept to themselves and didn't use any science or magic. They lived off the land and fiercely
guarded there territory not allowing outsiders to venture on there land. They where black scaled dragons, the males where big and muscular hunters standing 12 feet tall on average and the females where
not as muscular but still in good shape standing up to 11 foot at the most. They lived in cliff side caves that all faced the same direction. They where reptilian dragons, looking more like biped lizards.
When it was time to lay there eggs they would go into a special cave that was fiercely guarded by the biggest males in the clan. It was there central
hatchery where all the eggs where kept to be raised by the clan. There was one dragoness who had never had a clutch of eggs and she was already 150 of her 200 year life span. She wanted desperately to have a clutch but even with the number of males she had mated with she
had never had any.

Eventually the males stopped having anything to do with her, but one day a new male arrived in the clan and asked her is she really would do anything for a clutch. She agreed and the dragons mated but little
did she or anyone know that this dragon was a demon is disguise. After that the dragon disappeared leaving no real trace it was ever here. Since the clan did not have names nor did they ever she would not ask around
to see who it was and it would be bad if anyone found out he was an outsider. The 5 seasons came and went, they mated like others in the late fall so then winter came and then the storm season. The warm up from
winter to spring caused massive storms to happen continuously so the caves where put in where the elements where least likely to get in.

Eventually the storms faded away like every year and the dragoness was very happy to see she was indeed going to have a clutch of eggs. She was so delighted and happy; the others looked at her curiously wondering who would mate with her. About mid spring was the time of laying so all the dragons went in to the nursery and one by one all the dragonesses laid
there eggs. The dragons that looked after the eggs where quite surprised to see this one dragoness there to finally lay eggs. Though all the other dragons had layed 3 to 6 eggs she only layed one. She was shocked
and upset; laying only 1 egg was far worse then not laying any. Though only the dragon attendants knew who layed what eggs and how many she still knew and it was very depressing. Once the egg was layed she left the
chamber in disgrace but since she was the last one no one else was watching. She returned to her cave and stayed there for a while as mot dragonesses did after laying there clutch. They would not emerge until
summer, and then they would feast in celebration as another generation of dragons was to be hatched. The dragoness joined in though she really never got over the fact that she only layed 1 egg.

Things went back to normal and come early next spring the eggs where starting to hatch. Some hatched early some hatched late but the beginning of summer all the eggs had hatched, but there was something odd. 1 of
the hatchlings was different than the rest. It was white with pink belly scaled and blue eyes. This was most unusual; though not unheard of in the history of the clan. The last white dragon to be hatched did not do well within the clan and was eventually banished but there was no reason to do so with this hatchling yet. Growing up the hatchling was teased and ridiculed by all the other hatchlings and dragons except for the dragoness who layed the one egg. Somehow she new that this was her hatchling and always looked after her and made sure she was growing up well.

One day they took all the hatchlings on a tour of the dragon’s territory the little white dragon got separated from the group. She wandered and heard
something crying out so she went to investigate. What she found was an odd little creature with hooves that had a bird like beak, reptilian eyes, a black and white furry body and 3 tails. The poor thing was trapped under a log and in mud not able to get out. The little hatching didn't really understand what was going on but she somehow knew that the creature needed help, so she summoned up what strength she could and lifted the log enough to free the little creature and it quickly got out of the mud. The creature bowed and changed forms to look more like the little hatchling.
She was most surprised at this. The creature smiles and touched her belly and there where a few sparkles and it did feel a bit odd. The creature gently pulled a flap of scales forming a pouch that was normally
completely hidden unless she's reaching in it. The creature smiles and said "You have shown you are indeed a good soul, your new pouch can hold whatever you want as long as you do not stretch it too far.
There is no limit to the amount you can hold." just then a rumbling voice was heard calling out for the hatchling, she turned around to the voice and then looked back and the creature was gone. It was the kind
dragoness looking for her and she ran up and hugged the hatchling happy she was safe. The little hatchling showed her the new pouch and she smiled and was very surprised. She told her that it had to be there
secret; none of the other dragons are to know about this as they would see it as against there code of life to be that much different and she would be banished.

Time passed and the dragoness who layed the egg grew older and the hatchling grew up. The hatchling grew to only 8' tall quite smaller then the other dragons and though she was nearing the end of her life the nice
dragones always looked after the white one. She took it upon herself to talk to the elders and give this dragoness an important duty. She may look different but she is still one of the clan. They thought about this and decided to give this dragoness the duty of learning the history of the clan and there written language. This was a huge honor as only a very select
few know about the written language and even less know how to read and write it. She trained very hard in secret to learn the language and be able to write it. No one else but the elders and the nice dragoness knew
what she was really doing. The white dragoness wasn't allowed to tell anyone where she spent most of her days witch just made the others tease her more.

One morning she got up and left her cave to go visit her friend the kind dragoness, she called out but there was no reply. She went inside the cave calling out but there was still no answer. Finally she made it
back to where the dragoness layed, she looked asleep and quite peaceful. The white dragoness went over to gently wake her up but she didn't wake and she was very cold and stiff to the touch. The kind dragoness
who had layed only 1 egg her whole life and lovingly looked after the white dragoness had passed away peacefully in her sleep. The white dragoness was heart broken and cried out trying to get her to wake up but
it was too late, she was waking up ever again. The white dragoness cried over the body felling so sad and helpless.

Eventually when she didn't come to her training lesson someone was sent out to find her. They found her still crying over the body. They left her be for the day to give her time to come to terms. It took her a while but things finally started returning to normal for the white dragoness. Time passed and she became very good at writing the dragonic language. Although she desperately wanted to join the others in the hunt or
the few that are allowed to deal with the outsiders she was not allowed. By the time she would be 50 there was a new city on the other side of the valley from the dragons’ home. It was a military base and heavily
fortified. The dragons and the military had once had a small war but they came to a truce where neither would bother the other so long as they did not cross over into each others territory.

What they where doing was anybody’s guess. In fact, they where creating the ultimate soldier. It was called "Project: Foxfang" They where almost ready to give birth to the first test subject. It was a herm as they thought why be one gender when you can have the strengths of both genders and genecily remove the weaknesses. The creature was very odd looking indeed. A mish-mash of many different species big and small. The birthing process was started and later that day a fully grown creature stood there in the lab standing up perfectly straight as a soldier should. The creature stood exactly 5' tall and has the exact colouring of a fox would on earth. Hir fur is very short straight fur; half an inch long glistens on hir hide. It fells like a horse. If you could look up close you would see that the hide seems to hint at being scaly. Looking over hir face you see hir shiny
red orange coat that covers her well muscled face.

Hir eyes are red in colour and seem reptilian rarely ever blinking. Starting between hir ears is what appears to be a long flowing mane of blond that
goes down hir long equine neck. Hir ears look like that of a horse but with a black tip extending down 1/3 of the way. Hir muzzle is wider then a normal, more like a horse but still looking like a vixens. Around hir muzzle are black scales around hir lips, with a black forked tongue flicking out to taste the air. A trail of white starts under hir chin that clearly goes all the way down hir belly to between hir legs and down hir tail. Shi opens her moth to have it looked at by the scientists as shi does hir sharp teeth. Shi seems to have a set of long retractable fangs that look like a viper's. Hir mouth is hinged together with a flap of skin much like a reptiles.

Hir paws have 3 thick digits on them each with a hoof like fingernail; the fingers are connected by black webbing of some kind. Shi has large firm breasts that would be quite impressive to most that saw them. Hir
hips flare out quite wide as hir tail is long and very thick, going right between her legs showing no breakup between body and tail and hiding her male gender well. It also has the coon stripes and black tip. It looks
very serpentine as it sways behind hir seemingly with a mind of its own. Hir legs are powerful looking equine legs ending in legs black hooves. The creature salutes as the top military figures walk in to examine hir. Hir body is very well muscled but not so much that it is bugling out, just enough. Shi has already been implanted with enhanced abilities, more strength, better stamina, great agility and all the abilities shi will need when out in the field. The military brass looked hir over and where quite pleased. They quickly take hir to a combat training room where they
have one of there best in hand to hand combat waiting. They test this new creature against him and shi beats him easy with almost no effort. They put hir through many tests that day and shi passes them all with flying colours. Shi never said anything, but that’s because shi was created with no vocal cords. There idea was to create soldiers who could never talk back. Shi was only able to hiss for speech but she still had full facial features and could read write and use computers if needed.
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