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PostPosted: Fri Nov 08, 2002 12:11 am    Post subject: Chapter 24..... Reply with quote

Next chatper's posted.

Please post any discussions or editing errors you find in that chapter here.

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PostPosted: Fri Nov 08, 2002 12:30 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

A nice chapter in my own opinion. It developed the plot quite nicely.
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PostPosted: Fri Nov 08, 2002 2:23 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

I agree it certainly made my day. Smile
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PostPosted: Fri Nov 08, 2002 2:45 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Interesting Chapter.

I wonder who that Mori character is.
Would not surprise me if he was actually Arden.

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PostPosted: Fri Nov 08, 2002 10:55 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Nope...

Arden WAS in the chapter, but it wasn't Mori...
(Much too polite, for one thing)

If you study the big dragon fight scene, and what happens afterwards, I think you'll agree with me...

But I'm still waiting for a fox named Fish to reappear...

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PostPosted: Fri Nov 08, 2002 12:21 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Either Mori is Arden or he was not in the chapter.
The dwarf at the end is the Necromancer.

Read the chapter again, all the things Mori says, does and knows fit with him being Arden
He knows a lot about the armor, much more than he could get from a cursory examination.
He knows how to properly dry her.
He is not particularly interested in her (or how unusual she is) because he knows her very well.
Read all the things he says, they fit with the things Arden has done and knows. (No furs where he comes from, but has met them in his travels. Knows Ruddygore by reputation. He has made mistakes that he is trying to undo by helping her.)
He is not that polite, but it is possible that he is "wearing the Mask" with the goal of protecting her / taking her to Ruddygore.

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PostPosted: Fri Nov 08, 2002 1:55 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

anthony wrote:
Nope...

Arden WAS in the chapter, but it wasn't Mori...
(Much too polite, for one thing)

If you study the big dragon fight scene, and what happens afterwards, I think you'll agree with me...

But I'm still waiting for a fox named Fish to reappear...


Yup

Agreed
Not Arden...but he was there.

As for a fox named Fish...

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PostPosted: Fri Nov 08, 2002 2:10 pm    Post subject: fish Reply with quote

Was he not supposed to be broght back to life by takeing somones unihabited body? If I remember the previous owner's soul was destroyed. Shocked
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PostPosted: Fri Nov 08, 2002 2:36 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Would either of you please tell me who you think Arden was ?
And why you think so ?

I've read the last few chapters again, and everything I read points to him being Mori.

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PostPosted: Sat Nov 09, 2002 2:30 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Nameless wrote:
Would either of you please tell me who you think Arden was ?
And why you think so ?

Check the last three paragraphs of Chapter 20. Our fine author is making us guess.

For myself, if Mori is NOT Arden, then who is he? I'm stumped.

Another great Chapter, BTW.
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PostPosted: Sat Nov 09, 2002 5:10 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Bearion wrote:
Nameless wrote:
Would either of you please tell me who you think Arden was ?
And why you think so ?

Check the last three paragraphs of Chapter 20. Our fine author is making us guess.

Yes, I did. He says very clearly that the dwarf is (possesed by) Rathsmon, the Necromancer.

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PostPosted: Sat Nov 09, 2002 2:01 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

The Dorf at the end is Rathsmon (It evens aid so... "Rathsmon the dworf")

As for Mori, I can't comment on that or it would spoil the plot.

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PostPosted: Sun Nov 10, 2002 12:36 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Hikaru wrote:
As for Mori, I can't comment on that or it would spoil the plot.


Spoiling the plot is something you do NOT want to do, or your esteemed editor might possibly make your mangy HIDE into a RUG---

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PostPosted: Sun Nov 10, 2002 3:00 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

*Considers Hikaru the luckiest bugger on the planet now!!* Shocked Confused Cool

SkunkFox *grumbling enviously to himself now:evil:....wait a sec! I'm published too!Laughing*

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PostPosted: Sun Nov 10, 2002 5:10 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

A little more food for thought about Mori:

Read Chapter 18, the scene where Wendy (Teyah's sister) leaves the farm.
The man could of course be a summoned creature, but he could just as well be a projection of Arden or he might have shape-shifted.

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