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Nicolai Borovskaya Registered User
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Posted: Mon Nov 03, 2008 11:00 am Post subject: |
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Good chapter TM. Lots of fun and some interesting developments.
(Even if I am a proofer for this tale)
Nicolai _________________ Nicolai
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Karou WindStalker Registered User
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Posted: Mon Nov 03, 2008 11:58 am Post subject: |
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Interesting developments in Chapter 3(4)... ^_~
Seems like the skunkette's crush is affecting our dear 'Paladin' _________________ Independent Business Owner ... Ask me, if interested in learning more.
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AmigaDragon Registered User
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Posted: Tue Nov 04, 2008 7:54 pm Post subject: |
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When will he get a good chance to let her down softly? Will he be easy enough on her with it? Are we overestimating her
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Now playing on Winamp: Claude Debussy - Sacred & Profane Dances (Classical Minnesota Public Radio)
via FoxyTunessensitivity to the impending letdown? _________________ "Cogito, ergo es. I think, therefore you is." Ray D. Tutto (King of the Moon) to Baron Munschaussen |
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Karou WindStalker Registered User
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Posted: Thu May 07, 2009 1:24 pm Post subject: |
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Mike Regan wrote: | I have For A Season 5 ready to go for this next weekend. |
Set response = Cheer!
I look forward to what develops.
Once I get my first draft of EiiOS, certain folks will be recruited as proofers. _________________ Independent Business Owner ... Ask me, if interested in learning more.
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anthony Site Owner
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Posted: Sat May 09, 2009 11:59 am Post subject: |
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Noticed it...
(Actually, read it before Otherworlds. )
Nice jacuzzi scene...
_________________ "My name's Lion, Anthony Lion"
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Karou WindStalker Registered User
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Posted: Sat May 09, 2009 7:25 pm Post subject: |
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Looks like something happened to allow one of the Bretheren to see one of the Coona kids .. or am I misinterpreting things? _________________ Independent Business Owner ... Ask me, if interested in learning more.
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Kellan Meig'h Administrator
Joined: 01 Apr 2007 Posts: 2045 Location: Just East of Indianapolis, Indiana
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Posted: Sat May 09, 2009 9:07 pm Post subject: FOS Chapter 5 |
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Karou WindStalker wrote: | Looks like something happened to allow one of the Bretheren to see one of the Coona kids .. or am I misinterpreting things? |
My thoughts exactly.
Kel _________________ "Старый боевой конь, Кeллан" |
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anthony Site Owner
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Posted: Sun May 10, 2009 7:06 am Post subject: |
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Yeah, I noticed that, too.
Just didn't want to comment on it in case it someone hadn't read the chapter, yet.
(I figured mentioning a jacuzzi scene would get moe people to read it... )
My guess is that the trajectory of the brown matter will be intersecting a rapidly rotating air motivator pretty soon... _________________ "My name's Lion, Anthony Lion"
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Tigermark Site Owner
Joined: 18 Apr 2003 Posts: 855 Location: Hopkinsville, KY
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Posted: Thu May 21, 2009 2:33 am Post subject: |
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For anyone who gets their For A Season fix here instead of the Bookshelf, Chapter 5 is posted.
TM _________________ Tiger, tiger, burning bright...
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Karou WindStalker Registered User
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Posted: Thu May 21, 2009 7:13 am Post subject: |
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Tiger, I'll post this here too..
I was just reading FaS over on BearTales and there were a few typoes in the first chapter..
In the first chapter
Quote: | As was usual in the Coona home, Gwenshe was clad only in her fur. |
is one example..
Quote: | “Well, Kass and I are supposed to study together tonight. When heKass and Kel get here, we’ll do a circle and see what we can find out about it.” |
Is another..
There's more, but I thought you'd like a heads-up..
I am not sure, but I don't remember reading those mistakes before .. though my mind might be taking in the PDF from the RB .. it's the version on Bear Tales that I'm seeing the problems .. I'll also check the one on your site, TM (plus the PDF, just to make sure I didn't just miss them.)
[update]TigerMark Page Version seems ok.[/update] _________________ Independent Business Owner ... Ask me, if interested in learning more.
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Karou WindStalker Registered User
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Posted: Thu May 21, 2009 7:37 am Post subject: |
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Thanks, Mike. ^_^
Just thought that the version Teric got might not have been the same that got to RB or even here.
Wanted TM to know, since he's the author. ^_^
On another note, I'm a couple paragraphs into EiiOS. ^_^
[Update]Tiger, seems there's a small goof in Ch 2..
Quote: | “Yes Kass?” Tthe tiger didn’t move a muscle, as though he were made of stone, drinking in the joy, love, and friendship the scene before him held. | (the Capitol T is also underlined, and the lowercase t right after itis also red and struck through) This is on the PF version ^_^[/Update] _________________ Independent Business Owner ... Ask me, if interested in learning more.
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Nicolai Borovskaya Registered User
Joined: 18 May 2006 Posts: 464 Location: Wherever the fictons carry me
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Posted: Thu May 21, 2009 9:08 am Post subject: |
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Do we have a new proofer here?
And Mike, I though Bear Tales was Rick's site? _________________ Nicolai
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Karou WindStalker Registered User
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Posted: Thu May 21, 2009 9:53 am Post subject: |
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Nicolai Borovskaya wrote: | Do we have a new proofer here?
And Mike, I though Bear Tales was Rick's site? |
Well, if I'm reading my own story to try and catch things before I send it out to the folks who will be proofing it .. and, yes, I'll ask them a bit beforehand if they've the free time.
Got a copy of Open Office to write in, and am slowly writing what's in my mind. Doesn't help that my handwritten notes often need an interpreter to get them from the page into my computer... ...My handwriting's a tad messy..
Let's just say that, while my handwriting has gotten better through practice, I can write messily enough that even I can't read what I wrote. _________________ Independent Business Owner ... Ask me, if interested in learning more.
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Kellan Meig'h Administrator
Joined: 01 Apr 2007 Posts: 2045 Location: Just East of Indianapolis, Indiana
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Posted: Thu May 21, 2009 12:15 pm Post subject: |
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Nicolai Borovskaya wrote: | Do we have a new proofer here?
And Mike, I though Bear Tales was Rick's site? |
It wasn't me! I catch (most of) those mistakes!
I'm in sore need of a proofer to finish out the current story myself.
Kel _________________ "Старый боевой конь, Кeллан" |
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