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Hortmage Registered User
Joined: 28 Oct 2001 Posts: 243 Location: Midwest
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Posted: Thu Nov 15, 2007 12:58 am Post subject: |
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Can one be a Teeming Million if one is not a Teem Player? Enquiring minds want to know!
Wonderful chapter, Chris!
I actually got quite confused when I started reading the chapter. I couldn't understand why Sabrina was so happy. It took a bit to remember that the last Sabrina story I'd read was Teric's A Little Life, which is of course much darker than SOtS.
At least, it gave me a reason to re-read chapter 51....
Quote: | Just keep in mind that Wendy is fond of Sabrina, in some ways maybe as much as Chris was after he got to know her. It may not get graphic, but we'll keep you in suspenders as long as we can, methinks . |
Oooooh....sounds like we may get a peak at what didn't happen in Chapter 2 of Gone Wylde..... (Hey, a guy can dream, can't he?) _________________ Hortmage, the Magic Gardener
Making environmental education fun and MAGICAL! |
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Concolor Registered User
Joined: 19 Nov 2001 Posts: 832 Location: South Carolina
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Posted: Thu Nov 15, 2007 9:07 am Post subject: |
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Hortmage wrote: | I actually got quite confused when I started reading the chapter. I couldn't understand why Sabrina was so happy. It took a bit to remember that the last Sabrina story I'd read was Teric's A Little Life, which is of course much darker than SOtS.
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Oooo, that's nice! I'd not read that. Shame on me!
Dark? Don't know as I'd call it dark, exactly. Tentative? Wistful? Hopeful, definitely. Excellent, certainly.
Nice work, Teric. _________________ Oddly enough, my life is based on a true story. (Ashleigh Brilliant) |
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ChrisFoxx Site Owner
Joined: 19 Mar 2001 Posts: 1056 Location: Eau Claire, PA USA
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Posted: Thu Nov 15, 2007 9:55 am Post subject: |
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Hortmage wrote: | Can one be a Teeming Million if one is not a Teem Player? Enquiring minds want to know! |
There's an R in the month, so sure!
Quote: | Wonderful chapter, Chris! |
Thank you!
Quote: | I actually got quite confused when I started reading the chapter. I couldn't understand why Sabrina was so happy. It took a bit to remember that the last Sabrina story I'd read was Teric's A Little Life, which is of course much darker than SOtS. |
I can see that happening That's why, and I didn't do it this time dangit, I usually suggest rereading a chapter or 2 back before hitting the latest-greatest so The Story'll flow better. Can't believe I forgot to suggest that!
Quote: | At least, it gave me a reason to re-read chapter 51.... |
See? There ya go!
Quote: | Quote: | Just keep in mind that Wendy is fond of Sabrina, in some ways maybe as much as Chris was after he got to know her. It may not get graphic, but we'll keep you in suspenders as long as we can, methinks . |
Oooooh....sounds like we may get a peak at what didn't happen in Chapter 2 of Gone Wylde..... (Hey, a guy can dream, can't he?) |
Welllllll ... nah, I'm not gonna say Now you'll HAVE to come back for the next one! |
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ChrisFoxx Site Owner
Joined: 19 Mar 2001 Posts: 1056 Location: Eau Claire, PA USA
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Posted: Thu Nov 15, 2007 9:59 am Post subject: |
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Quote: | [quote="Concolor"] Hortmage wrote: | I actually got quite confused when I started reading the chapter. I couldn't understand why Sabrina was so happy. It took a bit to remember that the last Sabrina story I'd read was Teric's A Little Life, which is of course much darker than SOtS.
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Oooo, that's nice! I'd not read that. Shame on me! |
You haven't read the A Little Life series?? Yeah, shame all over you! It's under Variations on a Theme, go, read, now! Forget work, READ!
Quote: | Dark? Don't know as I'd call it dark, exactly. Tentative? Wistful? Hopeful, definitely. Excellent, certainly.
Nice work, Teric. |
Wow, you DO read fast! |
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racky raccoon Registered User
Joined: 24 Mar 2004 Posts: 619 Location: MASH H.Q. (Essex) England
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Posted: Thu Nov 15, 2007 2:57 pm Post subject: |
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HAPPY BIRTHDAY!!!!!! _________________ A Pro From Dover.
Crash Survivor 08/04
He who seeks knowledge is never a fool.
-Mike Regan-
I want a Lawyer, a Doctor... A CHEESE SANDWICH
-Harley Quinn-
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ChrisFoxx Site Owner
Joined: 19 Mar 2001 Posts: 1056 Location: Eau Claire, PA USA
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Posted: Thu Nov 15, 2007 4:20 pm Post subject: |
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racky raccoon wrote: | HAPPY BIRTHDAY!!!!!! |
Who?
OH!
Thanks, Mate
Wasn't too bad |
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Teric Registered User
Joined: 11 Dec 2006 Posts: 2566 Location: Southern California
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Posted: Thu Nov 15, 2007 4:47 pm Post subject: |
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Concolor wrote: | Hortmage wrote: | I actually got quite confused when I started reading the chapter. I couldn't understand why Sabrina was so happy. It took a bit to remember that the last Sabrina story I'd read was Teric's A Little Life, which is of course much darker than SOtS.
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Oooo, that's nice! I'd not read that. Shame on me!
Dark? Don't know as I'd call it dark, exactly. Tentative? Wistful? Hopeful, definitely. Excellent, certainly.
Nice work, Teric. |
*blush* Thank you very much, Concolor. Now if I could only get up the inspiration to write the next chapter. _________________ Styx: "Oh sure like flaming a dragon going to do massive damage, brave challenge there Teric." |
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ChrisFoxx Site Owner
Joined: 19 Mar 2001 Posts: 1056 Location: Eau Claire, PA USA
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Posted: Thu Nov 15, 2007 4:49 pm Post subject: |
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Teric wrote: | Concolor wrote: | Hortmage wrote: | I actually got quite confused when I started reading the chapter. I couldn't understand why Sabrina was so happy. It took a bit to remember that the last Sabrina story I'd read was Teric's A Little Life, which is of course much darker than SOtS.
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Oooo, that's nice! I'd not read that. Shame on me!
Dark? Don't know as I'd call it dark, exactly. Tentative? Wistful? Hopeful, definitely. Excellent, certainly.
Nice work, Teric. |
*blush* Thank you very much, Concolor. Now if I could only get up the inspiration to write the next chapter. |
Don't force it! Let it come naturally. It will |
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Hortmage Registered User
Joined: 28 Oct 2001 Posts: 243 Location: Midwest
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Posted: Fri Nov 16, 2007 11:17 pm Post subject: |
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Concolor wrote: | Hortmage wrote: | I actually got quite confused when I started reading the chapter. I couldn't understand why Sabrina was so happy. It took a bit to remember that the last Sabrina story I'd read was Teric's A Little Life, which is of course much darker than SOtS.
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Oooo, that's nice! I'd not read that. Shame on me!
Dark? Don't know as I'd call it dark, exactly. Tentative? Wistful? Hopeful, definitely. Excellent, certainly.
Nice work, Teric. |
Are we reading the same story? Sabrina just miscarried...a fairly dark topic, IMHO.
I've unfortunately gotten too wrapped up in all the Variations stories...Teric's fine work has me on the edge of my seat! _________________ Hortmage, the Magic Gardener
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ChrisFoxx Site Owner
Joined: 19 Mar 2001 Posts: 1056 Location: Eau Claire, PA USA
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Posted: Sat Nov 17, 2007 12:30 am Post subject: |
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Hortmage wrote: | Concolor wrote: | Hortmage wrote: | I actually got quite confused when I started reading the chapter. I couldn't understand why Sabrina was so happy. It took a bit to remember that the last Sabrina story I'd read was Teric's A Little Life, which is of course much darker than SOtS.
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Oooo, that's nice! I'd not read that. Shame on me!
Dark? Don't know as I'd call it dark, exactly. Tentative? Wistful? Hopeful, definitely. Excellent, certainly.
Nice work, Teric. |
Are we reading the same story? Sabrina just miscarried...a fairly dark topic, IMHO.
I've unfortunately gotten too wrapped up in all the Variations stories...Teric's fine work has me on the edge of my seat! |
Teric's a heluva writer, he completely threw me with Sabrina saying what she said to Amy just before she and Timmy left. |
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ChrisFoxx Site Owner
Joined: 19 Mar 2001 Posts: 1056 Location: Eau Claire, PA USA
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Posted: Sat Nov 17, 2007 12:33 am Post subject: |
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Mike Regan wrote: | When I read the part with Amy learning that Sabrina had been taken to the hospital, but did not know what had happened, and brought little Timmy. My response was 'Oh Sh**!'
Teric did well with that scene. I have been through it IRL. |
Mike and I have a mutual acquaintence, I'm not saying who publicly, but when he saw the roughs of Tabitha when James had augmented the scene describing Sabrina's miscarriages and how much it hurt her to watch Alan playing with other children and knowing she'll never have more of her own, it hit a serious chord with him because he'd had someone in his family (I think) who'd suffered similarly, and we darned near lost him as a reader because of it. |
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Concolor Registered User
Joined: 19 Nov 2001 Posts: 832 Location: South Carolina
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Posted: Mon Nov 19, 2007 12:14 am Post subject: |
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Hortmage wrote: | Concolor wrote: | Hortmage wrote: | I actually got quite confused when I started reading the chapter. I couldn't understand why Sabrina was so happy. It took a bit to remember that the last Sabrina story I'd read was Teric's A Little Life, which is of course much darker than SOtS.
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Oooo, that's nice! I'd not read that. Shame on me!
Dark? Don't know as I'd call it dark, exactly. Tentative? Wistful? Hopeful, definitely. Excellent, certainly.
Nice work, Teric. |
Are we reading the same story? Sabrina just miscarried...a fairly dark topic, IMHO.
I've unfortunately gotten too wrapped up in all the Variations stories...Teric's fine work has me on the edge of my seat! |
What? Huh?
Who?
Which?
Did I miss ... well obviously I did ... additional chapters?
MUST ... GO ... READ!!! _________________ Oddly enough, my life is based on a true story. (Ashleigh Brilliant) |
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DHLawrence Registered User
Joined: 18 Nov 2007 Posts: 96 Location: Canada
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Posted: Mon Nov 19, 2007 12:19 am Post subject: |
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Can't wait till the semester's done--so many fanfics to catch up on! |
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ChrisFoxx Site Owner
Joined: 19 Mar 2001 Posts: 1056 Location: Eau Claire, PA USA
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Posted: Fri Dec 07, 2007 11:58 am Post subject: |
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Concolor wrote: |
What? Huh?
Who?
Which?
Did I miss ... well obviously I did ... additional chapters?
MUST ... GO ... READ!!! |
Read man, reeeeeaaad!! Read like you're on fire!
Wait, uhm, that analogy really doesn't work well ...
Awwww, just go read, dammit! |
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ChrisFoxx Site Owner
Joined: 19 Mar 2001 Posts: 1056 Location: Eau Claire, PA USA
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Posted: Fri Dec 07, 2007 11:59 am Post subject: |
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DHLawrence wrote: | Can't wait till the semester's done--so many fanfics to catch up on! |
Get on the Administration's back! Tell 'em to move it along!! |
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