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Concolor Registered User
Joined: 19 Nov 2001 Posts: 832 Location: South Carolina
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Posted: Sat Nov 16, 2002 1:09 am Post subject: |
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Hah! Dat marriage ain't long fer dis woild.
Ya want t'ings fixed up, Georgie-boy, I gotcher fix right here! <hefts a leather strap with a lead knob on one end>
Capra! What do you think you're doing? Put that sap down!
Aw, come on, Mac! Just a couple o' little taps? Be a sport! I won't kill him. Much.
Forget it! I feel sure Nameless has other things in store for that creep-o-rific bum. <shoves the big Pyranees out the door> You get back home and tend to business. It's not as if you were at loose ends, you know.
Sorry about that, Nameless. They can be hard to keep track of.
Ahem. You have got George and Sarah's relationship very nicely fleshed-out. And it wouldn't hurt my feelings at all if that huge hypocrite got pulled out of his flesh. Geez, what a colossal fraud! And what monumental disregard he has for his wife's feelings! I just hope she wakes up to the truth of the situation before she wakes up in the hospital.
So Zig is married in this melieu? That should please James no end!
I'm a little surprised that Sarah would go along with the bit-part acting. I guess I didn't know her as well as I'd thought. One must wonder where that will lead. Although I'm not at all surprised that Zig would press the issue. Sounds just like her.
So George is working late all the time, is he? Just what kind of "work" does he do those long nights. With the level of hypocrisy he has shown thus far, a mistress or so wouldn't shock me too much. And I'll bet he would have shared an intimate video with her!
What a blockhead! That character really makes my skin crawl. _________________ Oddly enough, my life is based on a true story. (Ashleigh Brilliant) |
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Nameless Site Owner
Joined: 06 Sep 2002 Posts: 1368 Location: Vienna, Austria
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Posted: Sat Nov 16, 2002 8:59 am Post subject: |
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Hmmm, where to start?
We are still in Act 0. Originally this was supposed to be just a few introductionary scenes for several characters. I kind of grew a little.
The main story is going to be quite different, at least the first few chapters. I've dropped the occasional hint from time to time but I'd be rather surprised if anybody makes the connection before I put some more hints in the story. The original idea is very much a "fan fiction about fan fiction", so don't be surprised if I steal quite a few ideas from other stories...
George:
Actually I did not want him to be everybody's favorite punching bag. From your comments it seems as if he could actually rival Marcus from ZZS as far a popularity is concerned.
He was not supposed to be a popular character, but he wasn't supposed to be a total asshole as well. Either I'm not portraying him accuratly or he is more evil than I thought.
Originally I wanted to name him Jack, but I changed the name. Maybe I should have stayed with Jack.
Zig Zag married: Just so that there is no misunderstanding, James has not given me any information on her status. She has been together with James for nearly 4 Years , I think it reasonable that she would marry James in the meantime.
Sarah acting for Zig:
This is something that she has been thinking about for some time (Sabrina warned her that Zig might ask her). But it was a spur of the moment decision for her. Maybe she subconicously did it because of her anger at George. Who knows? _________________ I'm a nut, but there are those who appreciate me for it. |
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Tygon Site Owner
Joined: 03 Apr 2001 Posts: 2497 Location: Isernhagen, Lowersaxony, Germany
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Posted: Sun Nov 17, 2002 11:30 am Post subject: |
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Nameless wrote: | Tygon wrote: |
The other one might be Sarah's talk with Zig Zag about how her husband takes her working at ZZ Studios. The reference would be to the part of "Zig Zag" where Zig and James talk about Zig's acting (BTW: has anybody else noticed that Zig is talking about her own husband there? |
I had not thought about this as such, but I guess that makes it three story references... |
Hehe, sorry about that
Now I just gonna find that other story reference.
Nameless wrote: | And the one about the Bruner Effect is correct. |
Ah, good. My imagination didn't fool me
Nameless wrote: | Hmmm, where to start?
We are still in Act 0. Originally this was supposed to be just a few introductionary scenes for several characters. I kind of grew a little.
The main story is going to be quite different, at least the first few chapters. I've dropped the occasional hint from time to time but I'd be rather surprised if anybody makes the connection before I put some more hints in the story. The original idea is very much a "fan fiction about fan fiction", so don't be surprised if I steal quite a few ideas from other stories... |
I thought that was the point of writing a fan fiction
Nameless wrote: | George:
Actually I did not want him to be everybody's favorite punching bag. From your comments it seems as if he could actually rival Marcus from ZZS as far a popularity is concerned.
He was not supposed to be a popular character, but he wasn't supposed to be a total asshole as well. Either I'm not portraying him accuratly or he is more evil than I thought.
Originally I wanted to name him Jack, but I changed the name. Maybe I should have stayed with Jack. |
I guess it's just that we don't like seeing a characters we've grown fond of mistreated
Nameless wrote: | Zig Zag married: Just so that there is no misunderstanding, James has not given me any information on her status. She has been together with James for nearly 4 Years , I think it reasonable that she would marry James in the meantime. |
I agree there.
Nameless wrote: | Sarah acting for Zig:
This is something that she has been thinking about for some time (Sabrina warned her that Zig might ask her). But it was a spur of the moment decision for her. Maybe she subconicously did it because of her anger at George. Who knows? |
As good a reason as any other
Of course, the question now is, depending on how her marriage will go on, will she act more and maybe even roles that demand some more... involvement? _________________ Tygon Panthera - name and species
www.planetfurry.com/~tygon/ |
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Cateagle Site Owner
Joined: 20 Nov 2000 Posts: 1004 Location: Ft. Worth, TX
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Posted: Mon Nov 18, 2002 2:42 pm Post subject: |
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Y'know, the scary thing about George is that he reminds me strongly of someone I've been acquainted with. Based on*that* person, I rather suspect that his "working late" may indeed be a dalliance with another femme.
I'm going to be real interested in seeing where this one goes.
Thoughtfully,
Cateagle _________________ "But the wildest of all the wild animals was the Cateagle. He walked by himself and all places were alike to him."
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Nameless Site Owner
Joined: 06 Sep 2002 Posts: 1368 Location: Vienna, Austria
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Posted: Tue Nov 19, 2002 9:08 am Post subject: |
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Hmmm, nobody spotted the third story/character reference. And I had so much fun putting it in...
If you need a tip, it is in the filming sequence.
In other news, the next chapter is progressing well (and getting rather long), so I will split it into two chapters and probably post the next chapter this weekend. _________________ I'm a nut, but there are those who appreciate me for it. |
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Nameless Site Owner
Joined: 06 Sep 2002 Posts: 1368 Location: Vienna, Austria
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Posted: Sat Nov 23, 2002 8:55 am Post subject: |
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Chapter 4 has been posted.
What was originally chapter 4 has been split into two chapters, so Act 0 will now have 5 chapters.
The title of the story will be explained in the first chapter of Act 1, which will now be the sixth chapter. _________________ I'm a nut, but there are those who appreciate me for it. |
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SkunkFox Registered User
Joined: 14 Aug 2002 Posts: 1017 Location: Close to Houston
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Posted: Sat Nov 23, 2002 8:59 am Post subject: |
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Hmmm *reads above before looking at Nameless closely before snickering.* Alright you've got me beaten on story telling my friend, *tips hat* congrats, you seem to have them enthralled as well as myself.
SkunkFox _________________ Insane and loving it!
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Tygon Site Owner
Joined: 03 Apr 2001 Posts: 2497 Location: Isernhagen, Lowersaxony, Germany
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Posted: Sat Nov 23, 2002 9:25 am Post subject: |
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Hmmm... unfortunately this took the way we all feared. At least Sarah got out of it with a black eye, if you pardon the expression.
Well, it seems like that. We'll have to see what will happen in chapter 5. I really hope there won't be any problems at the talk.
BTW: I can see how you try to make George look less like an a$$hole. He seems to regret what he has done. I just hope he will let matters settle.
Good chapter. I'm looking farwad to the next one. _________________ Tygon Panthera - name and species
www.planetfurry.com/~tygon/ |
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Bearion Registered User
Joined: 01 Jun 2002 Posts: 278 Location: Bay Area, California
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Posted: Sat Nov 23, 2002 6:46 pm Post subject: |
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Yes, it was a good chapter. Sarah is taking the smart road. I hope for her sake she follows through with it.
Another chapter to Act 0? Too bad about the extra work for you, but it's good for us! Seriously, it's a good story where we care about the characters. We just can't get enough! |
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Nameless Site Owner
Joined: 06 Sep 2002 Posts: 1368 Location: Vienna, Austria
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Posted: Mon Nov 25, 2002 12:20 pm Post subject: |
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The conversations between Sarah and her parents have been changed a little. This does not really affect the story.
Thanks for the mail, Fishburne. _________________ I'm a nut, but there are those who appreciate me for it. |
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Kinsfire Site Owner
Joined: 01 Nov 2001 Posts: 380 Location: Roselle, NJ
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Posted: Wed Nov 27, 2002 6:10 pm Post subject: |
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Just came across something, and I think I've figured out what SiasfL stands for. The "f" is the one that I'm not sure of...
You don't have to admit it or anything, but I want my guess out there - official-like, y'know?
Stranger in a Strange Furry (or Furless) Land
...depends on where she ends up when those ... others ... get their equipment working.
Of course, I could be UTTERLY wrong here - it just came to me is all...
Kinsfire _________________ That which does not kill me probably hurt like a sonuvabitch. |
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Nameless Site Owner
Joined: 06 Sep 2002 Posts: 1368 Location: Vienna, Austria
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Posted: Thu Nov 28, 2002 1:13 am Post subject: |
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Kinsfire wrote: | Stranger in a Strange Furry (or Furless) Land |
*Clap* *Clap*
Not 100%, but very close. The right phrase, just a tiny little bit different. _________________ I'm a nut, but there are those who appreciate me for it. |
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Nameless Site Owner
Joined: 06 Sep 2002 Posts: 1368 Location: Vienna, Austria
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Posted: Thu Dec 05, 2002 11:59 am Post subject: |
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Ok, Chapter 5 of Act 0 has been posted. This concludes Act 0.
The next Chapter will be Chapter 1 of Act 1. Hopefully I will have it ready in about two weeks.
There is a little surprise.
To be competely honest, I'm not very happy with this chapter. Some of the the things that happen seem a little contrieved, but I've got to get things to where Act 1 starts. _________________ I'm a nut, but there are those who appreciate me for it. |
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Tygon Site Owner
Joined: 03 Apr 2001 Posts: 2497 Location: Isernhagen, Lowersaxony, Germany
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Posted: Thu Dec 05, 2002 12:15 pm Post subject: |
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Hmmm... interesting.
I'm glad that things with the divorce went smoothly. I was a bit afraid that George would make problems.
It's understandable that Sarah was depressed after what happened and a nice, relaxing vacation is most likely exactly what she needed.
That last part is... intruging... I have a theory... if you want to I can mutter it out here _________________ Tygon Panthera - name and species
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Nameless Site Owner
Joined: 06 Sep 2002 Posts: 1368 Location: Vienna, Austria
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Posted: Thu Dec 05, 2002 12:23 pm Post subject: |
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Tygon wrote: | That last part is... intruging... I have a theory... if you want to I can mutter it out here |
Speculation on what is going to happen is always welcome.
Of course I can't promise to confirm or deny anything... _________________ I'm a nut, but there are those who appreciate me for it. |
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