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Data-Corruption
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PostPosted: Sun Dec 31, 2006 4:21 pm    Post subject: Skater failed Reply with quote
http://i143.photobucket.com/albums/r142/Data-corruption/Picture030.jpg

Yup, he fell over, my attempt at perspective failed, but I was hoping to get feedback on what you guys think this pic needs improving on Smile

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PostPosted: Sun Dec 31, 2006 5:36 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote
Coincidentally, I was watching some skating on ESPN. Definitely better than anything I can whip up. (Cant' draw a stick figure to save my life)
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PostPosted: Mon Jan 01, 2007 11:04 am    Post subject: Reply with quote
Even though it's not perfect, you still convey the sense of uncontrolled momentum very well. Obviously, the right leg is too long, and it looks like it is doubled-over too far to be anatomically possible. Left leg looks a lot more appropriate.
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PostPosted: Mon Jan 01, 2007 4:45 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote
Syrius: Teehee, thanks :D I'm not a huge skating fan.. but it looks cool anyways XD

Teric: the right leg is the result of failed perspective, I agree.. hhe looks like he broke it.... But thank you for the crit :)
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