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hikaru · Posted: Tue Mar 21, 2006 1:00 pm Post subject: Act 1 rewrite

I know it's not what you're looking for, but I was sitting upon my throne today, thinking my kingly thoughts as I allowed the "trickle down" process to work on last night's dinner and realized that one way to revivie IC might be to re-write Act 1.

I've never really been a big fan of Act 1. I screwed up several of the plot devices and order of introduction, not to mention the fact that the writing is horrendous from a grammar standpoint.

I'm going to be working at a customer site today, but part of my mind will be chewing over Act 1 while I do so. If the spirit moves me, I may start working on the re-write this week.

We'll see.

AmigaDragon · Posted: Tue Mar 21, 2006 9:33 pm Post subject:

Well, that's one way of refreshing your memory of the story before continuing. Wink

hikaru · Posted: Tue Mar 21, 2006 9:45 pm Post subject: Re: Act 1 rewrite

webkilla · Posted: Tue Apr 11, 2006 9:27 am Post subject:

I'll be looking forward to reading it then! Very Happy

gnaP · Posted: Mon Jun 05, 2006 1:53 am Post subject:

Cant wait to see what Act 1 rewrite will be like, I like the current one but there is always room for improvement. Act 4 still has me hooked, I have gone through it about 6 times already, just to see if I missed anything.

hikaru · Posted: Mon Jun 05, 2006 6:08 pm Post subject:

I re-read Act 4 over the weekend and have started plotting on it again. The re-write of Act 1 will have to wait.

RedWolfDragon · Posted: Sat Aug 26, 2006 12:34 am Post subject:

i dont mean to be pushy or impatient but when will we see a new chapter of IC?

hikaru · Posted: Sat Aug 26, 2006 7:54 pm Post subject:

Good question. I've been holding down 2 jobs the last month plus dealing with a new roommate (who's moving out in 3 days because he didn't work out).

I wanted to write some today, but am just flat exhausted. Gonna try again tomorrow. Hopefully I have more energy. If not, then possibly after MFM (next weekend) which is what all my energy's kind of towards getting ready for.

Cheers

Shadu · Posted: Sat Aug 26, 2006 9:57 pm Post subject:

i say take your time. i really want another chapter soon but i prefer to wait than to get a bad chapter only cause you, or someone else, wanted a post ASAP.