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Phantom 988 Registered User
Joined: 16 Oct 2005 Posts: 15 Location: Baltimore MD
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Posted: Thu Jan 26, 2006 9:01 pm Post subject: WIP's (Sometimes NSFW) |
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I've been working on poses for a while and still can't get down alot of things. I'd appreciate it if you guys would act as my eyes and spot out any things I missed, and sort of like teachers and tell me how to fix those problems.
Currently, I'm working on a request for someone. It's supposed to be a figure unbuttoning a shirt (one handed). I want it to have a really relaxed feel, but she suggests that the figure seems forced into that pose. If there is any other way I can fix this without tossing this piece into the garbage, tell me. And be descriptive. Don't just say "There are a few things that look weird." |
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PrincessB Registered User
Joined: 06 Jan 2005 Posts: 3070 Location: south of Nashville, Tn
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Posted: Thu Jan 26, 2006 9:29 pm Post subject: |
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The thing that looks the most odd to me is the hand on the butt, though I'm not sure exactly what else would be done with it, maybe consider if it has long hair use that hand to be reaching up and gathering the hair up off the back of the neck. _________________ http://www.bukisa.com/people/AmberBarnes check it out!
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Phantom 988 Registered User
Joined: 16 Oct 2005 Posts: 15 Location: Baltimore MD
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Posted: Thu Jan 26, 2006 9:50 pm Post subject: |
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I could try that, but I mean, right now I'm just looking for things to correct. I think that I might give shortenining the torso a shot since this doesn't come off as how I wanted it to when I add the head to the figure. I'll continue to experiment before I move onto the final stage of coloring.
Edit: Project cancelled for various reasons. |
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