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Kinsfire
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Location: Roselle, NJ
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 Posted: Sun Sep 01, 2002 3:27 am Post subject: Serina - Chapter 18 is available! |
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Right now it's only available at the www.kinsfire.net site, but I'll get around to updating PF soon. (He says, remembering that he's trying to get the Adult Bookshelf ready for it's opening...)
It's a short one, but it gets done what needs doing...
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Kinsfire
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| Posted: Wed Sep 04, 2002 4:27 pm Post subject: |
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Well, the Planetfurry site is also updated - it is completely current with the kinsfire.net site.
Anyone out there got any comments on 18? Complaints? Praises? Requests for spooge? (Not that it'd show up on the main site anymore...) Anything?
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Shirh Khan
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Joined: 04 Jul 2001
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Location: In transition/between states
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| Posted: Wed Sep 04, 2002 8:54 pm Post subject: |
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Well, I guess I'll be the first this time around....
I like it.
On the one paw, I love what's going on in the "other" universe- and that isn't just relegated to the "spooge factor" of Serina/Lyman and Wick/Deidre/(the president).... 
But, on the other paw, we *do* need to know what's going on in the "home" universe, and what things are happening with regards to our intrepid adventurers' ability to get home, if/when they should want to.
To me, this is something of a "filler" chapter. That's not to say that, as a writer, I don't understand the need to explain what's going on behind the scenes of the "main action"- but to say that, as a reader, I'm more interested in the adventurers themselves! But, this is a necessary chapter- it highlights what is going on while the furs back home are working on dealing with the sudden knowledge of an "alternative" universe, and the furs in high places who suddenly seem to have a vested interest in the Machine.
Not "main action", but intriguing, nonetheless- a good chapter.
There's my opinion, and I'm sticking to it! 
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Kinsfire
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Location: Roselle, NJ
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| Posted: Wed Sep 04, 2002 11:39 pm Post subject: |
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Get used to seeing Chuck and co. for another couple chapters - there's some very important info that needs to be passed off to the reader, and it's part of the reason they're a little loathe to bring everyone home at the moment. (Not something they already know, but something they've suspected.)
Don't worry, I'll get back to our intrepid explorers soon!
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whiterabbit
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Joined: 16 Jul 2002
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Location: Portland, Oregon! Ya dingus!
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| Posted: Sat Sep 07, 2002 4:50 pm Post subject: |
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I did it. I finally got around to reading Serina! I like it, it is a very good story, only thing lacking is Blue, but there is Chuck. *giggle* Keep it up!
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