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PostPosted: Thu Jun 09, 2005 4:46 pm    Post subject: Story : Rust Reply with quote

This is a story that I can't seem to make a story so this is the only good part of the story. the beginning or the end? to continue to a new beginning?

Feedback Here and please title which one you are referring to in the feedback name it "Rusty"

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PostPosted: Thu Jun 09, 2005 4:47 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Rusty was running with Malik as fast as they could as Rusty looked up and shouted while pointing to this giant looking satalite that was kinda floating ....this thing was tied with steel cables to earth ..it was half the size of London. It was like a cross between some giant power pilon and a satilite dish! As they ran they found a door and sipped into this room which looked like Rusty's old room from when he lived with his parents. Malik looked at Rusty panting hard as he was too ...
Malik asked, "can it be done?"
Rusty said, "well theres one way to find out."
Malik looked at Rusty with a look of fear as Rusty felt his heart racing hard.
Rusty said, "If it goes wrong we will all find out"
Malik stood with tears in his eyes as Rusty picked up what looked like a signal scanner then started messing with it. There was an almightly amount of numbers rolling over the sceen of the scanner.
Rusty said, "Thats it, thats close! Be carefull!"
Now Rusty messed with it more then Malik screamed out LOOK! Rusty looked while holding the scanner in his paw and saw the giant aeiral thing that was floating on the wires .....it was moveing ...it had never moved before and it was a feeling like that of maybe seeing a plane crash.
Rusty had a feeling of (Oh my god what have i done!) Malik looked at Rusty and saw him gulp ..his eyes were fearful as was Rusty's. So Rusty carried on with the scanner then suddenly a red backlit screen came on ..it showed "locked." Rusty remember seeing Malik yelp as they looked out and the blue sky which went black....a darkness that filled the whole sky ..it wasnt clouds it was just blackness sweeping from the horizon the aerial then moved up steep the dish pointing to the sky now ....there was police choppers and sirens all over the town then suddenly the aeiral started to spin in a very fast circle.
Malik said, "Thats it were done for!"
Suddenly the room and all about them was spinning so so fast i mean 10000000 times faster than the most drunk one has ever been! Malik was screaming as Rusty fell while the room shifted from horizontal to vertical spins and back again sevral times then the scanner beeped showing "no lock." Everything went black and quiet, no noise, or no vision. Rusty tried to open an eye but couldn't ..there was a blinding light seering into his eyes.
Rusty shouted aloud, "You bastards! you finally got us!"
He heard a shot fired then felt the pain in his chest and hit the ground but was still alive ..in pain Rusty looked the fox next to him .....there was nothing left of Malik's head.....just laying there his head smashed his body broken Rusty remember whining the sound of a fox in pain then a second shot fired. Silence. Just a faint feeling of being kicked hard as the sound and vision faded ..........

Brrrrrr Brrrrr BEEP BEEP! Rusty woke up with a startled as his alarm went off.

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