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Jaymee Fox Site Owner
Joined: 02 Jun 2003 Posts: 582 Location: USA
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Posted: Thu Jun 09, 2005 4:08 pm Post subject: My Story Feedbacks |
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Please have all feedbacks on my stories posted here as you will be directed from the other forum link to here. Mark the title so I know which story you are feedbacking on.
Thank you for reading my stories and posting feedbacks. I appreciate anything you given to me.
Be forewarned, when I find a criticizing feedback a bit too harsh or not fair I will battle back. I don't take some criticizing very well so please be careful with your wording if you REALLY absoultely need to criticize me. I sometimes takes things in wrong perspective. Be sure everything is clairfied.
Thank you n___n _________________ ~JF
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Asalis Registered User
Joined: 08 Oct 2004 Posts: 2020 Location: Fort Worth, Tx
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Posted: Tue Jul 26, 2005 12:23 am Post subject: |
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alright this is for sands of time and I must say youve done a great job with it. there were a vfew gramatical errors I noticed but it wasn't hard to figure out what you were saying. That and I cant remember what they all are at this moment, but you have me hanging wondering what's going to happen next. I'd love to read more. i'm curently in the process of readingt the others and am looking forward on postin my oppinions on the rest soon. Cant wait to read what happens next for th dinner, or after. _________________ Asalis: (uh*sah*lis)
We, dig, giant robots!
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=x7PjQnw_E0U
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Jaymee Fox Site Owner
Joined: 02 Jun 2003 Posts: 582 Location: USA
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Posted: Thu Jul 28, 2005 1:17 pm Post subject: |
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awesome thank you :3
I would continue this one but I haven't seen cateagle around <.< >.> _________________ ~JF
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