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PostPosted: Tue Jun 07, 2005 2:25 pm    Post subject: Chapter 22 Reply with quote

So it seems Anatol isn't just the caring friend to Sheila he's pretended to be eh? it appears that he has his own agenda where she's concerned, this would be a crushing blow should she find out. I had wondered why he had resisted his current assignment so much I'd thought he'd be anxious to prove himself fit again. As for Sheila I can’t wait to see what she tells Dr. Spivy and it seems that Kahnsman’s live in prostitute has an agenda of her own I think his downfall is coming around the bend. Good chapter Hikaru, can’t wait to read more.
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PostPosted: Tue Jun 07, 2005 3:02 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

I'm just wondering when exactly this is taking place. I'm not quite sure they had iPod's at that time... Confused
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PostPosted: Tue Jun 07, 2005 3:07 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Well act I took place before Sabrina left to live with Chris so this would be a year later .... I think they'd already be married in Act IV since a year had passed from the end of Act I to the start of Act IV.
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PostPosted: Tue Jun 07, 2005 3:20 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

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"Which would you prefer cold, me or dinner?"

I'll have to remember that line. It's simply too good not to use somewhere in my stories. Wink

Kung fu priest with a bulletproof smock. Somehow that reminds me of the Matrix. Rolling Eyes
As far as Anatol and Sheila go. I wouldn't make any hasty judgement on what he feels for her based on that statement. It is quite likely that he became involved with her case because of this. And I don't think he would admit to loving her, at least not without a good reason. Of course things may simply be like he said (implied) and she is only someone he helps in his line of duty.

The big question now is who Mandy is working for.

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PostPosted: Tue Jun 07, 2005 3:47 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Nameless wrote:
I'm just wondering when exactly this is taking place. I'm not quite sure they had iPod's at that time... Confused


Current timeline should be around June 2001. If I remember right, iPods were around back then. If not, I'll change it to a Walkman.

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PostPosted: Tue Jun 07, 2005 3:49 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

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"Which would you prefer cold, me or dinner?"

I'll have to remember that line. It's simply too good not to use somewhere in my stories. Wink


Thanks. ^_^

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Kung fu priest with a bulletproof smock. Somehow that reminds me of the Matrix. Rolling Eyes


Not quite. Neo wore a open duster and dodged bullets. Anatol got shot and simply was wearing sufficient body armor that it didn't kill him.

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PostPosted: Tue Jun 07, 2005 5:08 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Must have been damn good body armor I may have read it wrong but it seemed like the mayor was shooting from almost point blank most mob types would be loading cop killers at least in my neck of the woods anyway.
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PostPosted: Tue Jun 07, 2005 5:23 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

I remember reading about some body armor that was being developed around 2K that combined kevlar, balistic nylon, kenettic dispersal jells and sever layers of graphite interseprced. It would keep most cop-killer type bullets from going through, but was ruinously expensive.

One of the other side effects was that although it disperced the impact, it didn't block it, so at short range you'd get some pretty nasty bruises at best and cracked/broken ribs at worst.

I may not have made it obvious enough, but Anatol was uncomfortable during the car ride.... He didn't come out unscathed.

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PostPosted: Tue Jun 07, 2005 6:53 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

hikaru wrote:
Nameless wrote:
I'm just wondering when exactly this is taking place. I'm not quite sure they had iPod's at that time... Confused


Current timeline should be around June 2001. If I remember right, iPods were around back then. If not, I'll change it to a Walkman.

And who says ipods couldn't be available a little earlier in one reality than another?

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PostPosted: Wed Jun 08, 2005 12:03 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

hikaru wrote:
Nameless wrote:
I'm just wondering when exactly this is taking place. I'm not quite sure they had iPod's at that time... Confused

Current timeline should be around June 2001. If I remember right, iPods were around back then. If not, I'll change it to a Walkman.

Looking at the old news, I found that the iPod was announced end of October 2001.

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PostPosted: Wed Jun 08, 2005 12:44 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Same year, give the Bear a little flexibility with his world :D

Good chapter as always, I would like to know more about this summoning that happened when Sheila and Arden went on their little trip. What exactly was summoned, how was it summoned? Was it even summoned and not just 'set free' by the powers of Lakesh opening the portal needed to transport the two on their way. So many questions...

Such as what will happen when mister Bullet Proof Priest catches up with Heckatae and finds out he intentions aren’t Evil, only her methods. And back home, with Kahnsman and that little area, not to mention the kits and Zig and that bunch.

Got me wanting more, hate to wait for the next chapter.


Sorry for incorrect names, tired and heading to bed now.

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PostPosted: Wed Jun 08, 2005 10:01 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

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Strange that no one is mentioning Mandy.

Who is she? Why is she with Khansman? What is she looking for?
Could she be FBI or some other police agency? Or if some evil fro Hell has been summoned, an agent for the other side?


Styx actually mentioned her in the first post.

Yet another character, carried over from Act I.

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PostPosted: Wed Jun 08, 2005 10:48 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

hikaru wrote:
Mike Regan wrote:
Strange that no one is mentioning Mandy.

Who is she? Why is she with Khansman? What is she looking for?


Styx actually mentioned her in the first post.

Yet another character, carried over from Act I.

Yeah, I think she's just "looking out for #1" (herself). Any info she has on Khansman, is for her own benefit if things go sour.

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PostPosted: Thu Jun 09, 2005 3:43 am    Post subject: Mandy Reply with quote

Just a thought - could she be the paid assasin (Tigger) that Arden was working with towards the end?? She was supposed to be a disguise master, so....

Loved the chapter, drooling for more!! Top notch!!

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PostPosted: Thu Jun 09, 2005 4:19 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

ok, so James n ZZ gets some - twice!

anatol lives... but turns out to be a dick

and khansman might be in a lil more trouble than expected... w00t


nice one - and so quickly updated! - gimme more!

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