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hikaru Administrator
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Henry_Hound Registered User
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Posted: Sat Apr 09, 2005 11:48 pm Post subject: |
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I don't have time to read it now.
Oh well I'll read it later. _________________ I'm a serial killer, it's a bad habbit.
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francesis Registered User
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very not bad! _________________
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Joe Silverhand Guest
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Nice chapter, looks like Anatol is off to meet a demoness. Just one thing I noticed. I remember back in act 1 Arden made a 'sweatshop' joke and nobody understood it, but in this chapter, Sheila is apparently sweating. |
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hikaru Administrator
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Posted: Tue Apr 12, 2005 8:40 am Post subject: |
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Joe Silverhand wrote: | Nice chapter, looks like Anatol is off to meet a demoness. Just one thing I noticed. I remember back in act 1 Arden made a 'sweatshop' joke and nobody understood it, but in this chapter, Sheila is apparently sweating. |
I was enlightened to the fact that some species do sweat.
That and I needed it for a plot device that will show up later. _________________ Read my comic: http://www.ImperialGelf.com
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hikaru Administrator
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Posted: Tue Apr 12, 2005 12:34 pm Post subject: |
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I had enough trouble just getting that out. Couldn't get started until after 3PM and then didn't get that finished until around 9:30pm. Luckily, Jim was up late and was willing to do the edit that night so I could get it out to y'all.
Next few might be short ones while I get back into the swing if things, but I'll try to make 'em full sized. _________________ Read my comic: http://www.ImperialGelf.com
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Pat The Fox Moderator
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Posted: Tue Apr 12, 2005 1:39 pm Post subject: |
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Good chapter.
I noticed a typo where zig-zag said “Sow what are we talking?” Instead of I guess "so what are we talking" _________________ Pat The Fox
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Styx Site Owner
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Good chapter, I wonder who will get their paws on the security cam video from the locker room and what they'll do with it. _________________ "Political Correctness is tyranny with manners." Charlton Heston
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hikaru Administrator
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sniktch Registered User
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And from the title, can I guess you're a Harry Harrison fan? _________________ "Oh s***. Not again." - Random Pedestrian |
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hikaru Administrator
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Manytales00 Registered User
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Posted: Thu Apr 21, 2005 6:08 pm Post subject: Vatican Diplomatic Core? |
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Erm... Shouldn't that be the Vatican Diplomat Corps. Remember your spellchecker will not flag correctly spelled homynyms. |
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hikaru Administrator
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Posted: Thu Apr 21, 2005 10:10 pm Post subject: Re: Vatican Diplomatic Core? |
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Manytales00 wrote: | Erm... Shouldn't that be the Vatican Diplomat Corps. Remember your spellchecker will not flag correctly spelled homynyms. |
Dimplomatic: Of, relating to, or involving diplomacy or diplomats.
It's the proper usage. _________________ Read my comic: http://www.ImperialGelf.com
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