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Chapter 19
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PostPosted: Sat Apr 09, 2005 10:30 pm    Post subject: Chapter 19 Reply with quote

Posted it tonight.

Enjoy.

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PostPosted: Sat Apr 09, 2005 11:48 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Crying or Very sad Crying or Very sad I don't have time to read it now. Crying or Very sad Crying or Very sad

Oh well I'll read it later.

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PostPosted: Tue Apr 12, 2005 12:43 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Cool very not bad! Cool
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PostPosted: Tue Apr 12, 2005 7:34 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Nice chapter, looks like Anatol is off to meet a demoness. Just one thing I noticed. I remember back in act 1 Arden made a 'sweatshop' joke and nobody understood it, but in this chapter, Sheila is apparently sweating.
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PostPosted: Tue Apr 12, 2005 8:40 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Joe Silverhand wrote:
Nice chapter, looks like Anatol is off to meet a demoness. Just one thing I noticed. I remember back in act 1 Arden made a 'sweatshop' joke and nobody understood it, but in this chapter, Sheila is apparently sweating.


I was enlightened to the fact that some species do sweat.

That and I needed it for a plot device that will show up later.

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PostPosted: Tue Apr 12, 2005 8:58 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

speaking of plot device - how ´'bout that rosary?


but good chapter - a bit short, but hey... its better than nothing

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PostPosted: Tue Apr 12, 2005 12:34 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

I had enough trouble just getting that out. Couldn't get started until after 3PM and then didn't get that finished until around 9:30pm. Luckily, Jim was up late and was willing to do the edit that night so I could get it out to y'all.

Next few might be short ones while I get back into the swing if things, but I'll try to make 'em full sized.

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PostPosted: Tue Apr 12, 2005 1:39 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Good chapter.

I noticed a typo where zig-zag said “Sow what are we talking?” Instead of I guess "so what are we talking"

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PostPosted: Tue Apr 12, 2005 1:51 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Good chapter, I wonder who will get their paws on the security cam video from the locker room and what they'll do with it.
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PostPosted: Tue Apr 12, 2005 5:59 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Pat The Fox wrote:
I noticed a typo where zig-zag said “Sow what are we talking?” Instead of I guess "so what are we talking"


Fixed

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PostPosted: Sat Apr 16, 2005 10:07 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

And from the title, can I guess you're a Harry Harrison fan?
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PostPosted: Sat Apr 16, 2005 10:12 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Actualy, that's from an episode of Star Trek the original series. It was part of a password between the landing crew and the ship for a beam-out while at a prison colony.
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PostPosted: Mon Apr 18, 2005 4:20 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

"cream me up scotty..."

"but capt'n, I'm givin ye all ey gawt!"

"fascinating"

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PostPosted: Thu Apr 21, 2005 6:08 pm    Post subject: Vatican Diplomatic Core? Reply with quote

Erm... Shouldn't that be the Vatican Diplomat Corps. Remember your spellchecker will not flag correctly spelled homynyms.
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PostPosted: Thu Apr 21, 2005 10:10 pm    Post subject: Re: Vatican Diplomatic Core? Reply with quote

Manytales00 wrote:
Erm... Shouldn't that be the Vatican Diplomat Corps. Remember your spellchecker will not flag correctly spelled homynyms.


Dimplomatic: Of, relating to, or involving diplomacy or diplomats.

It's the proper usage.

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