AmigaDragon Registered User
Joined: 05 Dec 2004 Posts: 840 Location: Far Northern Minnesota
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Posted: Sat Apr 30, 2005 12:46 am Post subject: |
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Ok, I just read it. It was a little confusing to read with some missing punctuation (mostly commas I think) and some typos (lots of "threw"s that should have been "through", among others). At the end, I was getting confused as to when things were happening (is that "now", 10 years ago or 10 years from now?).
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