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PostPosted: Tue Feb 08, 2005 7:40 am    Post subject: Transitions Reply with quote



If you haven't read Transitions yet, then I would highly recommend it. Smile

This is a story with a lot of potential, and is very likely better than my own, in lots of ways. It grabs at you, nearly as well as the best of us can pull ones emotions and viseral mentality, and you'll feel rather compelled to read until you reach the end- then, of course, to wonder where the rest is!

I won't ruin the experience for you by blabbing about what you'll read, I'll just insist that you do.

In a word, it's a damned good read!




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PostPosted: Tue Feb 08, 2005 8:10 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

I agree 100% i am eagerly waiting for the next chaper(s). its a must read by my book.
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PostPosted: Tue Feb 08, 2005 9:07 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

I wonder what her first production will be....

Twisted Evil Twisted Evil

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PostPosted: Tue Feb 08, 2005 1:06 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

I don't know how else to say this except to say thank you. These first comments are very heartwarming and I am deeply, deeply grateful for them, and that you've taken the time to read this.

As the raccoon tells you, I'm working on getting my own site up and running, but you see...while I enjoy writing, computer programming freaks me out six ways from sunday, and until a few days ago I didn't know what an FTP program was, and it's still mostly Russian to me. Ergo, I have to take this one step at a time and rely heavily on good friends to assist me in getting it running. Otherwise I'd be toast.

Once again, thank you!
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PostPosted: Tue Feb 08, 2005 2:40 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

I only managed to read the first two chapters before dinner interrupted me but I like what I read.

A few questions rose in my mind, but I am not going to dive into that department right now. Maybe they will be answered in the next chapters and I don't want to make myself even more a fool than I already am.

As I said, a most enjoyable read so far. I'll get to the next chapters as soon as I can.

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PostPosted: Tue Feb 08, 2005 5:33 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Nevermind that, I read the other 4 chapters too and what can I said, quite a good story so far. Interesting characters with an equally interesting plot and a partially familliar setting that helps getting into the story.

I won't go into details right now because I don't want to spoil it for others who have not yet read it. Sufficient to say that the story kept me going until I reached the (current) end. I am curious to see how it will go on.

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PostPosted: Wed Feb 09, 2005 3:36 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Really good story, good and believable characters. And I liked how you wove ideas from the comic into the story.
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PostPosted: Wed Feb 09, 2005 7:28 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Thank you, Nameless.

Well, as you can see, my page is now up and running and more chapters will hopefully get posted tonight. So far, I have 59 done, but I'm depending on others to actually do the posting and such. With any luck, up to chapter 11 should be up tonight though.
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PostPosted: Wed Feb 09, 2005 9:25 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

If you want some advice, don't give away too much too quickly. Otherwise the readers will be overwhelmed with the amount of story. If you post the story chapter by chapter people can read them, digest them and with a little luck comment and discuss them. If you post too much that gets tricky because so much happens.
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PostPosted: Wed Feb 09, 2005 10:20 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

im just glad to know this story will probably be with us for a while. i don't mind waiting for posts as long as its long, i like long. Mr. Green
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PostPosted: Thu Feb 10, 2005 4:37 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Thank you for your suggestion. I will make sure to post them a little by little.

I just want to get some of the chapters up so people have at least a LITTLE to get started on. But after this I'll post one or two at a time, as per your suggestion.

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PostPosted: Thu Feb 10, 2005 5:32 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

(Up to Ch. 6)
Gabby has only been there for one day, but there is one thing they could do even if the results from the medical examination don't come quickly:
A photo session.
She doesn't have to get into contact with anybody (not intimate contact at any rate), they'll get some pretty pictures for Zig's website and it will give Zig a chance to see how Gabby handles herself.

Now to wait for the next chapter.

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PostPosted: Thu Feb 10, 2005 4:55 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Posted chapters 1 thru 11... enjoy!
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PostPosted: Thu Feb 10, 2005 7:00 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

AAARGH!!!!

Did you have to post so many chapters?
It's three minutes till midnight, and I had planned to go to bed early for once...

Hmm....

Speedy Gonzales seems to have earned that nickname for a lot of reasons... Twisted Evil

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PostPosted: Thu Feb 10, 2005 9:09 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Read the posted chapters and well...


WOW!!

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