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Shirh Khan Site Owner
Joined: 04 Jul 2001 Posts: 332 Location: In transition/between states
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Posted: Thu Feb 10, 2005 10:53 pm Post subject: "Please sir?...may I have more?" |
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Me want more!
Me want more!!
Me want more!!!
Damn, I'm jealous- and envious- and angry!
I'm jealous of Jean- I wish I had a charater in this story to fight alongside her- or maybe have her attentions!
I'm envious, cause Aslaug has written a damned good story! I wish I was so good!
I'm angry, because those bigots need to be taught a more viseral lesson- and I can think of a fur or two to give it to them!
But this is *very* good work, and a very good read! Damn, I'll be keeping track of this story!
-Shirh Khan _________________ "Life is not for the faint of heart. Live a little!!"
-said Shirh to his brother, Elijah |
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Aslaug Site Owner
Joined: 04 Jan 2005 Posts: 1861 Location: Slagelse, Denmark
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Posted: Fri Feb 11, 2005 3:19 am Post subject: |
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I just got out of bed, and I must say, if I had needed cheering up, this is just the way to get it.
Way back in October, when I started writing this story...I had just come home from the hospital after 2 weeks on my back. I wasn't able to walk properly yet, on account of having about 13 square inches of skin peeled off my thigh (believe me, grafts STING), and I was generally in an absolutely rotten mood.
I had just joined the forums at ZZ Studios, and I was in awe of people's writing. I decided, for the umpteenth time in my life, to sit down and write something too. Normally, I would write...maybe four or five chapters, look at it and say "Gahh, this is horrible, who'd READ this drivel" and delete it all. I must've done so a hundred times.
This time was different. Not because of me, but because of coincidence. 'Transitions' would probably have gone the same way, if I didn't have encouragement. Suddenly, one day, I had Tigermark pinging me on MSN. He'd seen some of my comments on the ZZ Studios forum and wanted to talk to find out what kind of fur I was.
We talked at length. He introduced me to two of his friends, Aramis and Silver Coyote. One of them...I can't remember who...asked me if I wrote, too. I told them I'd just started on a story...but I didn't know if it was any good. They asked to see it and very....VERY reluctantly, and after about a hundred promises they wouldn't laugh at me or look down on me or flame me...I sent it to them. I had only a few chapters written then.
An hour or two later, I had Silver Coyote back on Yahoo Messenger, and he talked to me for several hours. The others joined. They all encouraged me to keep writing. I did...but at first I didn't think I'd ever show it to the world. It was only because they asked me to get permission from the relevant authors.
I did...and now I'm here. And I admit I've been very nervous. But with the reception I've gotten...I'm almost overwhelmed.
Thank you all. |
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Nameless Site Owner
Joined: 06 Sep 2002 Posts: 1368 Location: Vienna, Austria
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Posted: Fri Feb 11, 2005 3:30 am Post subject: |
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This story is really great. Definitely top-5 material. A real shame if you really deleted all those other stories and not just put them aside.
Your english is perfectly fine, I only found one mistake so far (except for Essteebaaan's lines).
Chapter 8 wrote: | Gabrielle said down on one of the benches and leaned forward, supporting herself with her elbows on her knees. |
_________________ I'm a nut, but there are those who appreciate me for it. |
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Henry_Hound Registered User
Joined: 15 Apr 2004 Posts: 792 Location: Somewhereville, MO
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Posted: Fri Feb 11, 2005 8:45 am Post subject: |
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Great story. And I would love to see those three goons learn to not pick up the soap, several times. I hope Jean is alright and she recovers fully and doesn't go back into her shell. Esteban seems to be good for her so I think him being around will help with her recovery greatly. But one must ask what will this do to Gabby. She's blaming herself for something she had no control over. So what is she going to due and how will she change. She was already very protective over Jean now she's going to be constantly paranoid that something like this could happen to her again, which in truth could.
Definately a good story and I am definately hooked and you're reeling me in Aslaug. _________________ I'm a serial killer, it's a bad habbit.
I killed tony, lucky charms, and the silly rabbit. |
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The Silver Coyote Registered User
Joined: 09 Nov 2003 Posts: 491 Location: Rogue River Valley, Oregon
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Posted: Fri Feb 11, 2005 7:42 pm Post subject: |
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<big canine grin>
i KNEW it would fly!
Thanks for the flowers, Aslaug. I'll be reading along with all the rest.
SC _________________ =====
Tread Lightly and Sing To The Sky |
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Tigermark Site Owner
Joined: 18 Apr 2003 Posts: 855 Location: Hopkinsville, KY
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Posted: Sat Feb 12, 2005 4:04 am Post subject: |
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*BIG tiger grin* That's all I can say.
Tigermark (And BIG tiger hugs to Aslaug) _________________ Tiger, tiger, burning bright...
http://www.planetfurry.com/~tigermark |
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Chris Regan Registered User
Joined: 23 Jun 2001 Posts: 138 Location: Ridgecrest, Ca.
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Posted: Sun Feb 13, 2005 12:28 pm Post subject: Re: "Please sir?...may I have more?" |
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Shirh Khan wrote: |
Me want more!
Me want more!!
Me want more!!!
Damn, I'm jealous- and envious- and angry!
I'm jealous of Jean- I wish I had a charater in this story to fight alongside her- or maybe have her attentions!
I'm envious, cause Aslaug has written a damned good story! I wish I was so good!
I'm angry, because those bigots need to be taught a more viseral lesson- and I can think of a fur or two to give it to them!
But this is *very* good work, and a very good read! Damn, I'll be keeping track of this story!
-Shirh Khan |
Good to hear you're around Khan, Mike said you were hot for Aslaug's Story I just got around to hearing it as Mike was editing.
WOW is it powerful!
It’s a symbol for female power and also for the rights of others to believe as they what as long as it harms no one else and that no one has the right to take that away from them. Which includes Sexual perferences of course.
I agree with the rest of you if any one wants a good read I would recommend Aslaug’s story.t
There I go getting on my soap box now that I’m off, lets make soap that way we can clean the world one person at a time. _________________ Read a book and let your imagination take take flight
Crystal Dragon Raccoon |
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Chris Regan Registered User
Joined: 23 Jun 2001 Posts: 138 Location: Ridgecrest, Ca.
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Posted: Sun Feb 13, 2005 12:49 pm Post subject: |
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Hi Aslaug,
I'm our Librarians mate it has been my pleasure and privilege to see your work.
I’m sure that if Jean’s friends get their paw on the guys that hurt Jean they will never be the same.
_________________ Read a book and let your imagination take take flight
Crystal Dragon Raccoon |
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Aslaug Site Owner
Joined: 04 Jan 2005 Posts: 1861 Location: Slagelse, Denmark
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Posted: Sun Feb 13, 2005 1:08 pm Post subject: |
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I am...in all honesty and modesty...totally awestruck by the reception I've gotten by you all. Next time I see Maxx Celis on Yahoo, I'll send him the next chapters so he can put them up.
Thank you once again. I never knew I could capture an audience like this. I mean...these are some pretty powerful statements, above.
I hope you'll continue to like the story. After the eleven chaptesr you've seen so far...things do begin to pick up pace and the real story starts to show, little by little. |
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Vee Are Are Schee Mini-Boss
Joined: 12 Oct 2003 Posts: 943 Location: sneaking in dark corners
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Posted: Sun Feb 13, 2005 3:59 pm Post subject: |
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... uh, wow. Conflagarious story. Got a nice number of tears out of me.
[insert large amounts of praise here] |
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Chris Regan Registered User
Joined: 23 Jun 2001 Posts: 138 Location: Ridgecrest, Ca.
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Posted: Mon Feb 14, 2005 10:47 am Post subject: |
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Asluag, As I've told others over the last year we were all beinngers at one time and learn new things.
One of the most important things is a support group of some type were you can go to get feed back on what ever and were you can have fun.
That is what we are freinds, support group, many of the long standing members even help out Mike with editing for The Bookshelf, me included. _________________ Read a book and let your imagination take take flight
Crystal Dragon Raccoon |
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Shadu Registered User
Joined: 21 May 2003 Posts: 336 Location: Barranquilla
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Posted: Wed Feb 16, 2005 8:33 pm Post subject: |
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what happened to chapter 12?!!! its not found OMG OMG OMG i have all these chapters and i can't read them
*runs around the room and finally crashes agains a wall knocking himself out* _________________ __________________
New Dog In Town! |
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elMaxx Administrator
Joined: 01 Dec 2000 Posts: 1127 Location: Land of Mud
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Posted: Wed Feb 16, 2005 10:11 pm Post subject: |
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oops, problem fixed
enjoy chapter 12 _________________ [Citation Needed] |
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Nameless Site Owner
Joined: 06 Sep 2002 Posts: 1368 Location: Vienna, Austria
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Posted: Thu Feb 17, 2005 3:25 am Post subject: |
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Wow. Really great story. _________________ I'm a nut, but there are those who appreciate me for it. |
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Henry_Hound Registered User
Joined: 15 Apr 2004 Posts: 792 Location: Somewhereville, MO
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Posted: Thu Feb 17, 2005 6:27 am Post subject: |
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Woohoo bad guys down. To bad the screwdriver didn't inbed itself in the back of Watsons head. _________________ I'm a serial killer, it's a bad habbit.
I killed tony, lucky charms, and the silly rabbit. |
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