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caspian · Posted: Thu Jul 11, 2002 4:51 pm Post subject: Chapter 10

Another great Job Chris and James Very Happy

You did have to leave us with another cliff hanger though did you?! Laughing

The return of Windy nice touch Very Happy

I can see many of us are going to be heart broken and in tears again when the time change hits with Chris and Windy if they get back together to be ripped apart again.

Tabitha handled telling Sabrina who she was well. Excellet job all Very Happy

Caspian

TVDAVE · Posted: Thu Jul 11, 2002 6:15 pm Post subject:

Show and Tell. Killer Chris and James, who would have thought Tab would just come right out and tell her, and chris running off to the singles bar, and who should he find , but Wendy, and it was crash and burn for the Margay, but now will Sabrina believe, and where is she running too,

Quick, Sweet , and to the point , ,and it was good to see Chris smile again , but you should have went back for a parting shot of Chris and Wendy , before the chapter end. Wink

And this quick question ? Now Chris is almost 60 years old in this chapter
his son and and Tab have been poking at him to go out , and on his first try he finds Wendy , will they hook up, will it be Furagra time??

This was good , very good , well worth the wait

Thank you both!!!!

TVDAVE · Posted: Thu Jul 11, 2002 7:35 pm Post subject:

Oh and this Casp ! the story is not over yet, , but if Tab gets to tell Sabrina all, and gets her to belive, and get her to do a change on that fatefull day, every thing will have never happened to chris in chap 10 , Sabrina will be alive , and they will have grown old togather, and in the end only we will know , and Tabitha , and Chris will have never known the loss, or pain, but like I said, the story is not over yet, and there may be a long haul to go , so pull up a chair and have a shrimp, and lets watch Wink

caspian · Posted: Fri Jul 12, 2002 7:10 am Post subject:

Guest · Posted: Fri Jul 12, 2002 10:12 pm Post subject:

Excellent job, gentlefurs! Tabitha handled the meeting very well . . . I love the cliffhanger ending!

Although . . . what are the odds that Chris would meet Wendy in the first single's bar he goes to?

Keep up the good work, guys!

caspian · Posted: Sat Jul 13, 2002 11:16 am Post subject:

Elfen_Furry · Moderator Joined: 18 Jun 2002 Posts: 2601 Location: NYC NY

I dont want to sound cynical but that was a long wait for such a short chapter. We've waited shorter for longer and more involved chapters in both stories.

Still a cliff-hanger, but I get a sense of something not right here. As if once the story gets up to speed, it runs out if gas.

Chris- Keep up the good work. I'll just contiune reading and commenting on them.

mfwhite · Posted: Wed Jul 17, 2002 10:55 pm Post subject: Chapter 10

Tres.....cool.....ye foxx........ Wink

Cheetaur like...... Smile

Interesting that she told her who she was .......that was an interesting twist.

She must have a reason to do so......... Smile

I wonder why.....hmmm

Oh well......great work as always....... Smile

Cheetaur