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Nameless · Posted: Mon Oct 11, 2004 1:12 am Post subject: Act IV Chapter 15

Ok, that dream was pretty frak*.

Apart from that it was a pleasant chapter. Some head-butting, but they finally seem to get somewhere. Both Sheila and Zig. Very Happy

vladspellbinder · Posted: Mon Oct 11, 2004 2:16 pm Post subject:

Yes I agree, that dream was messed up…But it gives us some insight into the ‘memories’ Lucifer crafted for Sheila.

Glade we didn’t have to wait so long for this chapter ^_^ And hate to wait for the next one.

webkilla · Posted: Mon Oct 11, 2004 6:31 pm Post subject:

ok, zig and zag and anatol in peace...

zz getting wise to her own lil stress thing

Sheila's memories blending together... freaky. I wonder how she'll react should she see a RL black stalion?

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and Sheila and Rathsmon? Painful orgsams? I think Hikaru had a little too much fun thinking up that scene... Twisted Evil

Hortmage · Posted: Mon Oct 11, 2004 11:29 pm Post subject:

Wow! Very emotional chapter, Hikaru!

Lucy really mucked with her mind...for her to be dreaming that abuse scenes so vividly, sleeping in the closet...

I know he had to give her false memories to cover her absence...but what Sheila's been going through is way above and beyond what was needed. Lucifer better hope that she goes to heaven, 'cause if she goes the other way, the first thing she'll do is rip him a new anus!

Henry_Hound · Posted: Tue Oct 12, 2004 2:54 pm Post subject:

Remeber he said he was going to make her life a living hell, and she'd thank him for it. I do believe he did just that. But even I think he overdid it. He did give her acces to both the real and the fake memories but he apearently did not give her any form of control over them. and that is what is creating the bad dreams and why she is having trouble with her treatments.

webkilla · Posted: Tue Oct 12, 2004 5:35 pm Post subject:

of course... although I dont remember his exact wording of the 'you can/cant control the memories' thing...

hikaru · Posted: Tue Oct 12, 2004 10:35 pm Post subject:

Henry_Hound · Posted: Tue Oct 12, 2004 10:51 pm Post subject:

Well then Sheila apearently has not figured out how to control the acces then and of course she believes the fake ones are real. In that case, when she learns the truth she should be able to control them.

Pat The Fox · Posted: Wed Oct 13, 2004 12:06 am Post subject:

This whole hospital stay is Zig's fault in a way. If Zig had just told Sheila that Sheila disappeared with Arden then Shelia would know that her delusions were in fact real and may have been able to cope better knowing the mafia incident was fake.

Henry_Hound · Posted: Wed Oct 13, 2004 12:14 am Post subject:

But then what happens if she told that to anyone who asked her about it. She would wind up being comitted to a state/federal mental institution for the rest of her life. Zig was doing it to protect Sheila because she knew what could happen if Sheila found out then what the truth was. Plus the fact they were being watched when Sheila asked her what happened on the day they disapeared. Zig probably will tell her eventualy, or Sheila will find out when Arden finaly pops up as being Anatol, the mouse or some other fur we haven't met yet. Though I still want to know where the Hell Tammy is.

hikaru · Posted: Wed Oct 13, 2004 12:17 am Post subject:

Hortmage · Posted: Wed Oct 13, 2004 12:29 am Post subject:

webkilla · Posted: Wed Oct 13, 2004 8:31 am Post subject:

I just hate Hikaru when he takes bloody ages to update...

I remember in the good old days when it was a chapter a week, now its been almost a month appart... Crying or Very sad

hikaru · Posted: Wed Oct 13, 2004 10:14 am Post subject:

Actually, it was 3 weeks, not a month.

Hate to break it to you, but life intrudes. I was working 16 hour sdays for a week and a half. That doesn't exactly leave time to unwind and get any writing done.

Styx · Posted: Wed Oct 13, 2004 10:20 am Post subject:

Completely understandable I have not been working on my story as much I would like myself a little bit every day at my lunch breaks on my PDA which is slow going now if RL would just grant me some undisturbed time at home, plus my muse has been rather fickle.