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PostPosted: Sun Aug 15, 2004 8:56 pm    Post subject: Chapter 13 Reply with quote

Ladies and/or gentlefurs, Chapter 13 has been sent to the proofreaders!

Sadly, like Chapter 12, James' talent will not appear. His work schedule has not allowed him to add to, so like Chapter 12, this one will suffer from it a bit.

Meanwhile, it's off to Eric later this week, then will be posted for your reading pleasure!

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PostPosted: Tue Sep 07, 2004 3:49 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

It's up!

...and there was much rejoicing

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PostPosted: Tue Sep 07, 2004 5:43 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

*kisses Chris*

*twitch*

Its good to have PF back and the new chapter*

*Bounds off wearing a broken strait jacket and dragging 2 tones in chains and balls*

Weeeeeeeeeee *twitch* weeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

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PostPosted: Tue Sep 07, 2004 6:47 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Oh, that is goining to be interesting... Very Happy

Great writing, Chris.

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PostPosted: Wed Sep 08, 2004 12:04 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Hoo-yah! Planetfurry back up, and a new chapter from Chris!!! Very Happy

So many tangles and sadnesses have been cleared up...and yet so many new tangles are forming...

....Eehhhxcellent.... Smile

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PostPosted: Wed Sep 08, 2004 6:35 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

(page 129 of the PF Bible/Chronicles) The Great Fox Bard held up the tablet for which he has writen the new works for his 2nd masterpeace hence forth known has the new tesiment (to sabrina).

he spack he spack aloud "Lo, i have written it, chapter 13!! tremble in its glory" and the gatherd masses fell to their knees in praise of him, after there was much rejoicing and happeness as the light was coming back to the faithfull.

(I REALLY REALLY NEED A HUG)

Be seing you

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PostPosted: Wed Sep 08, 2004 12:34 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

*hugs racky raccoon with a strait jacket*
sounds like your not quite ready to come outa the jacket eather

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PostPosted: Wed Sep 08, 2004 12:47 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

taspacecampjh wrote:
*hugs racky raccoon with a strait jacket*
sounds like your not quite ready to come outa the jacket eather


Who here ever is ready to come out of the straight jacket? Well except for me cause I'm Nepolean Bonipart Ruler of the Universe and any and all parralel dimensions. Laughing Laughing Laughing Laughing Laughing Laughing

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PostPosted: Wed Sep 08, 2004 6:48 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Henry_Hound wrote:
taspacecampjh wrote:
*hugs racky raccoon with a strait jacket*
sounds like your not quite ready to come outa the jacket eather


Who here ever is ready to come out of the straight jacket? Well except for me cause I'm Nepolean Bonipart Ruler of the Universe and any and all parralel dimensions. Laughing Laughing Laughing Laughing Laughing Laughing


Ok so I put you down for the super deluxe strait jacket with the automated nurale shocker addon kit

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PostPosted: Wed Sep 08, 2004 11:34 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Great job on this one Chris I only have one problem with continuity. While looking through the obituary she asks if she marries the guy she seeing.

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Her eyes scanned the first two paragraphs before she lifted her head. “This says ‘Sabrina Foxx’.?

Oh ****, she doesn’t know yet!

Sabrina’s eyes skimmed along, narrowing as she read her own obituary. She looked up, eyes glistening, bewildered. “Are you … sure … this is me??

Tabitha nodded.

She shifted to the next one, from the Columbus Dispatch, and skimmed it as well. “My last name isn’t Foxx.? Sabrina again faced her sister. “You’re telling me that I’m marrying the guy I’m dating now???

Again, Tabitha nodded silently.

“But … but I’ve only known him a few months. We haven’t even … and you’re saying … this is saying I’m going to marry him??


Now assuming that Sabrina is meaning that she and Chris had never slept together then there is a discrepancy with the timeline in Tabitha and the one in SOtS. Tabitha meets up with her sister and brings her forward in time on the day from Sabrina's perspective she was laid off from her first web design job I had posted something in another thread in this forum that illustrates what I’m getting at.

Okay according to SOtS

Chapter 9: Chris & Sabrina make love for the first time

Chapter 11: Sabrina tells Chris she's been placed "on an unpaid infinite vacation" from her first web design job.

Chapter 17: Sabrina tells Chris about her new job at the studio.

Anyway not that it’s a major thing, it’s easily dismissed I kind of notice these things.

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PostPosted: Thu Sep 09, 2004 12:04 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Nice chapter, Chris, with some interesting twistedness obviously on its way. Keep up the good work, m'friend.
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PostPosted: Thu Sep 09, 2004 5:09 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

taspacecampjh wrote:
Henry_Hound wrote:
taspacecampjh wrote:
*hugs racky raccoon with a strait jacket*
sounds like your not quite ready to come outa the jacket eather


Who here ever is ready to come out of the straight jacket? Well except for me cause I'm Nepolean Bonipart Ruler of the Universe and any and all parralel dimensions. Laughing Laughing Laughing Laughing Laughing Laughing


Ok so I put you down for the super deluxe strait jacket with the automated nurale shocker addon kit


ALL RIGHT!!!!! I get the add on kit. Very Happy

And great work on the chapte Chris. I can hardly wait for the next one.

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PostPosted: Fri Sep 10, 2004 12:41 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Great chapter Chris, seriously. One thing is sorta bugging me though. I can't help but but feel a little sorry for Wendy. I know it sounds crazy coming from me, but I almost hope the time lines split rather than altering and leaving such a nice vixen all alone...

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PostPosted: Fri Sep 10, 2004 2:16 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Well whos to say that Sabby lived up to that point in time. She will most likey survive the car wreck and live longer now, something else down lifes road may happen. But knowing theres chance that she may still be killed in the car accident maybe she instills in him that he must go on with his life after she's gone.
This time thing really has my head spinning heheh. Wink

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PostPosted: Fri Sep 10, 2004 4:46 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

great one Chris. I like the interplay between the now-alive Richard and Tabitha. Nice twist there, but I wonder what changes will take place when Sabrina gets sent back? Hmmmmm. (Fan fic story idea begins to form between the tiger's fuzzy ears)

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