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Act IV Chapter 10
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Henry_Hound
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PostPosted: Tue Jul 27, 2004 3:20 pm    Post subject: Act IV Chapter 10 Reply with quote

Great writing as usual Hikaru. Though I must admit I was not pleased with the shock that Sheila recieved. Though I'm sure it serves a purpose It could end up sending her back to the prison like cell if she's not careful.

On another note Anatol seems to be acting out a few more behaiviors I've asociated with Arden as the promise to keep her safe and his promise to try and help her as much as possible.

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PostPosted: Wed Jul 28, 2004 8:16 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

I spy with my little eye...


Great chapter hikaru!




And Cirrel: When are we gonna get some pics of the kits?

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PostPosted: Wed Jul 28, 2004 4:32 pm    Post subject: Re: Act IV Chapter 10 Reply with quote

Henry_Hound wrote:
Anatol seems to be acting out a few more behaiviors I've asociated with Arden as the promise to keep her safe and his promise to try and help her as much as possible.


True, but there were also a couple of things in this chapter that weigh against him being Arden. First, there was the scene where Shiela was taking in the view of all the reporters and Anatol got to take in the view of Shiela. A very amusing moment, I might add. Doesn't seem like Arden to get hot under the collar like Anatol did. Second, there was his reaction when Shiela mentioned dragon's eyes. Anatol was confused when she first mentioned it, and went on to ask her for an explanation. Arden would have known right away what she was referring to, so he'd have to be a good actor and quick on the uptake to have reacted the way Anatol did.

Of course, the latter scene raises the possibility that the cub in question could be Arden. Since the cub was already alive in utero throughout Acts 2 and 3 when we knew who/where Arden was (in fact he was the one carrying the cub in Act 2), we assume he couldn't have become the cub, but that doesn't rule out him cohabiting the cub's body.

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PostPosted: Wed Jul 28, 2004 6:34 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

I say that Arden still hasn't shown himself...

he might have been transported to Sheila's world, but I think that he either:

A) hasn't revealed himself

B) due to temporal difgerences, hasn't appeared yet

C) Hikaru hasn't thought it up yet...

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PostPosted: Wed Jul 28, 2004 7:14 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Or how about this, that mouse Heceat (sp?) met up with a few chapters back is Arden and the the one he wants her to locate is Sheila's sister Tammy.
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PostPosted: Thu Jul 29, 2004 4:14 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

I still have a hunch Anatol is either Arden or has some sort of role in this grander scheme.

Most priests I know would be truely angered by calling the bible a piece of ficton.

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PostPosted: Thu Jul 29, 2004 9:23 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Pat The Fox wrote:
I still have a hunch Anatol is either Arden or has some sort of role in this grander scheme.

Most priests I know would be truely angered by calling the bible a piece of ficton.

A very good friend of mine, Father Phill Root and I like to go out for sushi every so often. Our discussions don't often turn towards religion, but when they do, it can be interesting. We were having dinner with a couple of friends and someone mentioned some religious "rapture" movie which got us onto the subject of of religious fiction. That eventualy turned towards the bible and I made the declaration that the Bible was one of the greatest pieces of fiction ever written. Phill just laughed at the statement and pointed out that the bible's mostly just a morals guide and collection of short-stories emphasizing that fact. He didn't quite agree that it's fiction, but he did agree there were enough contradicitons that he could see how people could get that idea.

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PostPosted: Thu Jul 29, 2004 1:14 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

I have also suggested that the mouse is Arden but we have very little eveidence that he is. None actually other than where the H*** did he get the viscous mana from. But that points to another source other than Arden.

And as for Arden sharing a body with his kit, I think it's unlikely but a possibility, unless Hikaru wants to tell us that it's not a posibility. He has said that the kits will not be the rebirth of anyone who has bought the farm so to speak.

And Arden is a good actor when he has to be. That is when he has his emotions under control.

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PostPosted: Thu Jul 29, 2004 2:55 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

The kits are going to be totally new characters. Nobody's coming back in any of the kits.
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PostPosted: Thu Jul 29, 2004 7:22 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Hikaru wrote:
The kits are going to be totally new characters. Nobody's coming back in any of the kits.


Hey! Since when can the author give out 'spoilers"? <Winks at Hikaru> In that case, I'll put in my 2 cents and say with confidence that Arden isn't coming back as a reincarnated Elvis.

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PostPosted: Thu Jul 29, 2004 9:25 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

It's something I declared back in Act 3, so I don't mind reitterating it.
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PostPosted: Sun Aug 01, 2004 11:27 pm    Post subject: A parting shot. Reply with quote

I figure everyone's read the chapter by now, so I'll toss this up for y'all. Smile

Orginally this image showed everything, so I had no choice but to fig-leaf it.

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PostPosted: Mon Aug 02, 2004 12:05 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

another great chapter Hikaru Razz

Keep um comin
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PostPosted: Mon Aug 02, 2004 1:17 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

I can't make out the sig...who drew that picture of Sheila?

And where....no, better not ask... Embarassed

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PostPosted: Mon Aug 02, 2004 2:03 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Hortmage wrote:
I can't make out the sig...who drew that picture of Sheila?

And where....no, better not ask... Embarassed


Hmm... thought I'd posted that it was done by Cirrel, but it looks like I didn't.

It was done by Cirrel.

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