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anthony Site Owner
Joined: 12 Nov 2001 Posts: 1304 Location: Norway
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Posted: Mon May 24, 2004 8:13 am Post subject: |
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Shadu wrote: | I think this is a vry good idea for people like me, new to writing and all. i really need the critisism. i know i have lots to work on but i sometimes can't find what exactly it is i need to improve. maby some of you can. |
Try using capital 'I' here and there?
Also, it's 'maybe', not 'maby'...
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Shadu Registered User
Joined: 21 May 2003 Posts: 336 Location: Barranquilla
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Posted: Mon May 24, 2004 2:20 pm Post subject: |
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yup those are some of my most common mistakes especially here. I'm kinda used to the auo capitalize of word _________________ __________________
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hikaru Administrator
Joined: 20 Nov 2000 Posts: 1581 Location: Kansas City, KS, USA
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Posted: Thu Oct 14, 2004 2:16 pm Post subject: |
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Shadu wrote: | yup those are some of my most common mistakes especially here. I'm kinda used to the auo capitalize of word |
You might do what I do. Write your post in word then cut & paste it over to the message board.
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Asalis Registered User
Joined: 08 Oct 2004 Posts: 2020 Location: Fort Worth, Tx
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Posted: Thu Oct 14, 2004 2:33 pm Post subject: |
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I have posted a story in the feedback area and I was wondering. How I go about moving it here in this forum? Or do I have to post it again here? It's a story called Deverone Chronicles. I don't mean to cause any complications, i'm just asking. _________________ Asalis: (uh*sah*lis)
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hikaru Administrator
Joined: 20 Nov 2000 Posts: 1581 Location: Kansas City, KS, USA
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Asalis Registered User
Joined: 08 Oct 2004 Posts: 2020 Location: Fort Worth, Tx
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Fang-Heart Registered User
Joined: 29 Sep 2007 Posts: 1 Location: Willmar M.N
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Posted: Sun Oct 07, 2007 11:34 pm Post subject: Stories |
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I have a story in progress and the first chapters almost complete, it's based on my fursona(Alexius)and how F.U.R.R.S his acronymed demon hunting/military faction came to be, the first chapter starts about 1 1/2 years before he is born, the first chapter is confusing but in the end it will all make sense. I'm only going to post chapter by chapter as some of them can be quite long. Is there a certin format they must be typed in?
Lastly I'm going to be creating two versions edited and non edited, caause correct me if I'm wrong, but minors DO come to this website do they not? nothing serious in the story, just language issue's. _________________ It's time to love, it's time to hate, Choose which side of me you wish to initiate.....
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Warndog Registered User
Joined: 15 Oct 2008 Posts: 1
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Posted: Wed Oct 15, 2008 6:34 am Post subject: Warnndog saying HI! |
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I just want to say Hi! I should be posting some stuff soon on this forum. I just want people to be honest with me about my work. Tell me what I am doing right or doing wrong. Thanks. |
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Kasyl Registered User
Joined: 30 Mar 2008 Posts: 977 Location: Striking from Zerenth
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Posted: Wed Oct 15, 2008 4:43 pm Post subject: Re: Warnndog saying HI! |
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Warndog wrote: | I just want to say Hi! I should be posting some stuff soon on this forum. I just want people to be honest with me about my work. Tell me what I am doing right or doing wrong. Thanks. |
Sure, sounds great! By the way, welcome to PlanetFurry! _________________ My FA |
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Kelvin Registered User
Joined: 08 Apr 2008 Posts: 1022 Location: That is not important. Just don't turn around.
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Posted: Thu Oct 16, 2008 12:18 pm Post subject: Re: Warnndog saying HI! |
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Warndog wrote: | I just want to say Hi! I should be posting some stuff soon on this forum. I just want people to be honest with me about my work. Tell me what I am doing right or doing wrong. Thanks. |
Oh, you're new huh? *points to the welcome board* Just go there when you're ready to subject yourself to our insanity. By the way, here's your muffin. *gives muffin* _________________ Telegram: kelvinshadewing
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Asalis Registered User
Joined: 08 Oct 2004 Posts: 2020 Location: Fort Worth, Tx
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