| View previous topic :: View next topic |
| Author |
Message |
hikaru
Administrator
Joined: 20 Nov 2000
Posts: 1581
Location: Kansas City, KS, USA
|
|
| Back to top |
|
 |
Xaqtly
Registered User
Joined: 07 Mar 2003
Posts: 442
Location: Las Vegas
|
 Posted: Tue Apr 13, 2004 3:14 am Post subject: |
 |
|
Wow. That was one heck of a chapter. The entire section with Arden turning Rathsmon human again was just amazing! Really really good. And now they're going to the original Garden of Eden? I am truly impressed, this is some good work. Why pay for the whole seat when you'll only be using the edge? Keep it coming!
_________________
Changed my name to Kantaro. |
|
| Back to top |
|
|
webkilla
Registered User
Joined: 17 Feb 2003
Posts: 379
Location: Denmark
|
| Posted: Tue Apr 13, 2004 10:35 am Post subject: |
|
|
Ok...
Didn't see that one comming. I thought the lamp was in the castle?
But hey, its not me writing this!
As for this 'genisis point' thing... well it sounds interesting, although I cannot imagine ol' Luci being allowed there...
But I can't wait for the wish to be made (and to see what Arden has to fight in order to get to the lamp... I wonder what its guarded with)
_________________
My Deviant artpile
My webcomic: Psiotechniqa - furry sci-fi gaming psionicks
P6€4r /\/\y dr@\/\/1ng $k1££33t... |
|
| Back to top |
|
|
hikaru
Administrator
Joined: 20 Nov 2000
Posts: 1581
Location: Kansas City, KS, USA
|
| Posted: Tue Apr 13, 2004 10:41 am Post subject: |
|
|
| webkilla wrote: | | As for this 'genisis point' thing... well it sounds interesting, although I cannot imagine ol' Luci being allowed there... |
That's the entire point of him having to take a boat. He's not permitted to "appear" in Eden so he has to use more mundane methods of travel. Gotta be kind of demeaning for the king of evil to have to catch a cab.
| webkilla wrote: | | But I can't wait for the wish to be made (and to see what Arden has to fight in order to get to the lamp... I wonder what its guarded with) |
I think it's safe to say that whatever he fights, it's going to be one heck of a knock down, drag out, ass kicking, redneck and beer, WWWF-ish battle of the titans! 
Cheers
_________________
Read my comic: http://www.ImperialGelf.com
Read my stories at http://www.IC-Stories.com
http://katayamma.deviantart.com/
"Coming to you Live and Transcribed..." - TVDave |
|
| Back to top |
|
|
Henry_Hound
Guest
|
| Posted: Tue Apr 13, 2004 11:08 am Post subject: |
|
|
| Great chapter. I can hardly stand to wait for the next one. |
|
| Back to top |
|
|
Nameless
Site Owner
Joined: 06 Sep 2002
Posts: 1368
Location: Vienna, Austria
|
| Posted: Tue Apr 13, 2004 2:58 pm Post subject: |
|
|
Very good chapter. The release of Rathsmon was well done.
Seems there is one Hell of a fight coming up... 
_________________
I'm a nut, but there are those who appreciate me for it. |
|
| Back to top |
|
|
Nameless
Site Owner
Joined: 06 Sep 2002
Posts: 1368
Location: Vienna, Austria
|
| Posted: Tue Apr 13, 2004 2:59 pm Post subject: |
|
|
Very good chapter. The release of Rathsmon was well done.
Seems there is one Hell of a fight coming up...
And I even found a way to fight the "*beep*" demon...
_________________
I'm a nut, but there are those who appreciate me for it. |
|
| Back to top |
|
|
Henry_Hound
Registered User
Joined: 15 Apr 2004
Posts: 792
Location: Somewhereville, MO
|
| Posted: Fri Apr 16, 2004 6:49 pm Post subject: |
|
|
Seems like the ultimate battle between good and evil is about to take place to me. 
_________________
I'm a serial killer, it's a bad habbit.
I killed tony, lucky charms, and the silly rabbit. |
|
| Back to top |
|
|
hikaru
Administrator
Joined: 20 Nov 2000
Posts: 1581
Location: Kansas City, KS, USA
|
| Posted: Fri Apr 16, 2004 7:36 pm Post subject: |
|
|
Huh? Good and evil?
*thinks on it* Not sure where that came from. Although I've hinted that the quest could result in armageddon, I don't think that I've forshadowed it happening, have I?
_________________
Read my comic: http://www.ImperialGelf.com
Read my stories at http://www.IC-Stories.com
http://katayamma.deviantart.com/
"Coming to you Live and Transcribed..." - TVDave |
|
| Back to top |
|
|
Luxo
Registered User
Joined: 19 Oct 2003
Posts: 216
|
| Posted: Fri Apr 16, 2004 8:28 pm Post subject: |
|
|
| Hikaru wrote: | Huh? Good and evil?
*thinks on it* Not sure where that came from. Although I've hinted that the quest could result in armageddon, I don't think that I've forshadowed it happening, have I? |
I haven't seen anything like that.
But, man! This is one of the best chapters in the whole story. I loved how you created all the expectation with Rathsmon's change to human.
By the way, you created the concept of the Sea of dreams or you took it from somewhere else? If you created it, I must bow at your imagination for creating such a marvelous universe. |
|
| Back to top |
|
|
hikaru
Administrator
Joined: 20 Nov 2000
Posts: 1581
Location: Kansas City, KS, USA
|
| Posted: Fri Apr 16, 2004 8:54 pm Post subject: |
|
|
| Luxo wrote: | | By the way, you created the concept of the Sea of dreams or you took it from somewhere else? If you created it, I must bow at your imagination for creating such a marvelous universe. |
Act III takes place in the playground created by Jack L Chalker and his River of the Dancing Gods series. He created the Sea of Dreams, but I've taken the concept much farther. His explanation was that the SoD is an extention of Gods mind, everything else is my creation. Jack doesn't go into the subject of creation beyond that of creating Earth Prime and it's mirror world containing Husquhar. At one point in the first book of the series, Ruddygore speculates that there could be someone in some alternate reality who writes their tale simply believing that it's only a story. Again I ran with this by Arden having actually read stories.
I highly suggest that you go out and get the River of the Dancing Gods series. It's no longer in print, so you'll have to check used book stores, but I think you'll enjoy it.
Cheers
_________________
Read my comic: http://www.ImperialGelf.com
Read my stories at http://www.IC-Stories.com
http://katayamma.deviantart.com/
"Coming to you Live and Transcribed..." - TVDave |
|
| Back to top |
|
|
Henry_Hound
Registered User
Joined: 15 Apr 2004
Posts: 792
Location: Somewhereville, MO
|
| Posted: Sat Apr 17, 2004 10:36 am Post subject: |
|
|
| Quote: | Huh? Good and evil?
*thinks on it* Not sure where that came from. Although I've hinted that the quest could result in armageddon, I don't think that I've forshadowed it happening, have I? |
I didn't mean that there was going to be a battle between good and evil. It just seems to be on that scale with all the anticapation.
_________________
I'm a serial killer, it's a bad habbit.
I killed tony, lucky charms, and the silly rabbit. |
|
| Back to top |
|
|
hikaru
Administrator
Joined: 20 Nov 2000
Posts: 1581
Location: Kansas City, KS, USA
|
| Posted: Sat Apr 17, 2004 3:03 pm Post subject: |
|
|
| Henry_Hound wrote: | | I didn't mean that there was going to be a battle between good and evil. It just seems to be on that scale with all the anticapation. |
Ohhhhhh.. I gotcha. Yah. Something like that. 
_________________
Read my comic: http://www.ImperialGelf.com
Read my stories at http://www.IC-Stories.com
http://katayamma.deviantart.com/
"Coming to you Live and Transcribed..." - TVDave |
|
| Back to top |
|
|
webkilla
Registered User
Joined: 17 Feb 2003
Posts: 379
Location: Denmark
|
|
| Back to top |
|
|
Dragon-Kitsune
Registered User
Joined: 03 Dec 2003
Posts: 141
Location: Between time and eternity
|
| Posted: Sun Apr 18, 2004 4:35 pm Post subject: |
|
|
There was something of a hint in the "pseudo blog thread".
_________________
Text is void if truth is not written, text above this note is void. |
|
| Back to top |
|
|
|
FAQ
Search
Memberlist
Usergroups
Donate
Register
Profile
Log in to check your private messages
Log in
