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Nameless Site Owner
Joined: 06 Sep 2002 Posts: 1368 Location: Vienna, Austria
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Posted: Sun Apr 11, 2004 3:41 pm Post subject: SiasfL - Stranger in a strangely familiar Land - Act 2 |
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Wow!
Finally a new chapter!
I'm not extremely happy with it, but have declared it to be "good enough" and posted it.
Maybe it answers a few questions...
Or maybe not... Or maybe there are a few new ones...
Have fun! _________________ I'm a nut, but there are those who appreciate me for it. |
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Styx Site Owner
Joined: 25 Dec 2002 Posts: 3176 Location: West Covina, California
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Posted: Sun Apr 11, 2004 8:05 pm Post subject: |
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BOY! If your not really happy with that one I'd love to read one you were happy with, I thought it was great. You know I'd have to reread the story to be sure but I don't think any mention had been made about Chris's profession but he did seem comfortable with Sarah's gun he might be familiar with other forms of combat these furs might have bitten off more then they can chew. One small inconsistency I noticed your reference to the MIB, should that not have been FIB
Quote: | Authorization code: 75XD5-765cF-8d34K-8Ql9b-62w3m |
That's your Windows product key isn't it? _________________ "Political Correctness is tyranny with manners." Charlton Heston
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Nameless Site Owner
Joined: 06 Sep 2002 Posts: 1368 Location: Vienna, Austria
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Posted: Mon Apr 12, 2004 3:25 am Post subject: |
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Styx wrote: | BOY! If your not really happy with that one I'd love to read one you were happy with, I thought it was great. |
The story is fine, I'm not happy with some of the dialogue. Some of it sounds a little silly to me.
Styx wrote: | You know I'd have to reread the story to be sure but I don't think any mention had been made about Chris's profession but he did seem comfortable with Sarah's gun he might be familiar with other forms of combat these furs might have bitten off more then they can chew. |
Unfortunately, no. He's not a special forces guy or anything. Since he is basically me, he is an electrical / computer engineer (said so in Chapter 10). He did enjoy the mandatory enlistment period, so he did handle a gun a time or two...
Styx wrote: | One small inconsistency I noticed your reference to the MIB, should that not have been FIB |
Ok, maybe it should be FIB. I'll have to think about changing it.
Styx wrote: | Quote: | Authorization code: 75XD5-765cF-8d34K-8Ql9b-62w3m |
That's your Windows product key isn't it? |
Naaah. But since their system was apparently hacked, I figured they were running Windoze, at least on some of their systems... _________________ I'm a nut, but there are those who appreciate me for it. |
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Nameless Site Owner
Joined: 06 Sep 2002 Posts: 1368 Location: Vienna, Austria
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Posted: Wed Apr 14, 2004 1:44 pm Post subject: |
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_________________ I'm a nut, but there are those who appreciate me for it. |
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Dragon-Kitsune Registered User
Joined: 03 Dec 2003 Posts: 141 Location: Between time and eternity
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Posted: Wed Apr 14, 2004 2:40 pm Post subject: |
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You can't believe how long I have waited for the next chapter. I stopped checking your site for a update a week or so ago, good to see you're continuing.
Really nice, setting up the field already. Hmmm I wonder if "they" find out about this pregnancy.
What's with the "smilie"? Lack of responses? _________________ Text is void if truth is not written, text above this note is void. |
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Furry_wolf2001b Registered User
Joined: 01 Nov 2003 Posts: 54
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Posted: Sun Apr 18, 2004 9:41 pm Post subject: Weeeee! :D |
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I just found and read the new chapter!
And i gota say i loved it.
Hmm.. fib or mib.....
Windoze, the root of all evil... |
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Nameless Site Owner
Joined: 06 Sep 2002 Posts: 1368 Location: Vienna, Austria
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Posted: Mon Apr 19, 2004 1:05 am Post subject: Re: Weeeee! :D |
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Furry_wolf2001b wrote: | Windoze, the root of all evil... |
Not quite.
Rather the Administrator of all evil. _________________ I'm a nut, but there are those who appreciate me for it. |
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Cooldrew100 Registered User
Joined: 27 Mar 2004 Posts: 131 Location: Wherever I happen to be!
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Posted: Fri Jun 18, 2004 6:21 am Post subject: |
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Woo! I finally read the new chapter. I can't wait for the next one! _________________ Greatest flash-animation site in existance.
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Nameless Site Owner
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Posted: Thu Sep 16, 2004 10:41 am Post subject: |
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Ok, one day ahead of schedule, chapter 2 has been posted.
Enjoy! _________________ I'm a nut, but there are those who appreciate me for it. |
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Timberfox Registered User
Joined: 16 May 2003 Posts: 18
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Posted: Thu Sep 16, 2004 3:14 pm Post subject: |
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Styx Site Owner
Joined: 25 Dec 2002 Posts: 3176 Location: West Covina, California
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Posted: Thu Sep 16, 2004 10:43 pm Post subject: |
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Well what can I say I liked it and your getting evil with these chapters you gave us just enough to wet our appetites and make us hungry for more then you snatch the plate away, aside from being a Nameless fur your also a very cruel one can’t wait to read what’s next. _________________ "Political Correctness is tyranny with manners." Charlton Heston
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anthony Site Owner
Joined: 12 Nov 2001 Posts: 1304 Location: Norway
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Posted: Fri Sep 17, 2004 5:01 am Post subject: |
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Plots upon plots, the vague feeling of foreboding...
Now we'll all be pinned to our PC's, waiting for the next chapter... _________________ "My name's Lion, Anthony Lion"
A fur with a license to purr...
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Why not surf over to www.micecomics.com and tell Mary what a stellar job she did... |
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Nameless Site Owner
Joined: 06 Sep 2002 Posts: 1368 Location: Vienna, Austria
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Posted: Fri Sep 17, 2004 1:56 pm Post subject: |
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Thanks for the praise...
What I'd really like to know, however... several plots were put into motion in this chapter (and the last one), does anyone have an idea what they are about? Any speculation? _________________ I'm a nut, but there are those who appreciate me for it. |
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Furry_wolf2001b Registered User
Joined: 01 Nov 2003 Posts: 54
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Posted: Sun Sep 19, 2004 4:04 pm Post subject: |
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Yes!
An new great chapter.
As fore speculating...
A shadow organisation witch are tampering with space/time.
(if i remember it right)
With bases and a network and alot of furrs...
Fibs and a lot of 3 letter organisations gets involved/heads upp that somthings going onn..
A kidnapper with a sence of compassion/guilt?
Who still belong to a shadow orginasation, and are pickt to be on the frontline still...
Speculations?
Well...
No, not from me at this point anny way...
I still dont got head nor tails of what awaits in the future... _________________ My spelling sux.
But i dont. |
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Nameless Site Owner
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Posted: Mon Sep 20, 2004 12:41 am Post subject: |
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Furry_wolf2001b wrote: | A kidnapper with a sence of compassion/guilt?
Who still belong to a shadow orginasation, and are pickt to be on the frontline still... |
Well, they do speak Spanish among themselves, that might give you an idea. _________________ I'm a nut, but there are those who appreciate me for it. |
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