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Nameless Site Owner
Joined: 06 Sep 2002 Posts: 1368 Location: Vienna, Austria
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Posted: Mon Oct 20, 2003 5:54 am Post subject: |
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Xaqtly wrote: | If I ever grow up, I want to be able to write like you do. |
Seconded.
Not that I ever want to grow up... _________________ I'm a nut, but there are those who appreciate me for it. |
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Hutch Registered User
Joined: 20 Oct 2003 Posts: 27 Location: HK-Asia's World City
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Posted: Mon Oct 20, 2003 9:45 am Post subject: |
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This is goin' to get real interesting...
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Nameless Site Owner
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Posted: Mon Oct 20, 2003 11:37 am Post subject: |
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Hmmm, this was not something from this chapter...
But I'm wondering if Amari & Sylvia are waiting on Khan to get back into gear or if they will pass him on and move on to the next male on their list. (And who that could be)... _________________ I'm a nut, but there are those who appreciate me for it. |
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Styx Site Owner
Joined: 25 Dec 2002 Posts: 3176 Location: West Covina, California
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Posted: Mon Oct 20, 2003 2:52 pm Post subject: |
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Heh maybe Beau now there's a situation that will cause some laughs. SK as I expected great chapter, you can really push the envelope a few of those scenes were pretty steamy love your work buddy. _________________ "Political Correctness is tyranny with manners." Charlton Heston
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Shirh Khan Site Owner
Joined: 04 Jul 2001 Posts: 332 Location: In transition/between states
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Posted: Sat Nov 29, 2003 1:37 am Post subject: Chapter 45 |
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Hello All!
It is my priviledge and my pleasure to proclaim that the problem child of prose that my chapter 45 has been, is now prepared, proofread, primed and finally, posted. At any particular point you may peruse the product of my presumed penchant towards publicly praised (though much likely more privately prideful) passages of passion, so long as you remember to portray your ponderings on the PlanetFurry Forum.
Thank you.
-Shirh Khan _________________ "Life is not for the faint of heart. Live a little!!"
-said Shirh to his brother, Elijah |
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Nameless Site Owner
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Posted: Sat Nov 29, 2003 6:11 am Post subject: |
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Ohhh. That first scene was a good read.
A good hot lunch, just what the doctor ordered. (Or was that the nurse?)
I only wish I could get some quality sexual harrasment like that where I work.
The other things that happened were not so good. That scene with the femme from the church did not play out well.
But I wonder why Beka did not tell her that the Clinic does not perform abotrions. From the scene back when the question came up, it seemed as if that was a pretty clear policy that they could (and would) tell anyone. Did Khan not cominucate this policy to his staff or has Khan changed his mind on this issue.
At least the question of Amari's plans for Khan was cleared up.
Another death that he feels responsible for. _________________ I'm a nut, but there are those who appreciate me for it. |
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Nameless Site Owner
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Posted: Sat Nov 29, 2003 7:41 am Post subject: |
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I just can't stop thinking about this when I read that first scene:
http://npc.keenspace.com/d/20030615.html _________________ I'm a nut, but there are those who appreciate me for it. |
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Shirh Khan Site Owner
Joined: 04 Jul 2001 Posts: 332 Location: In transition/between states
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Posted: Sat Nov 29, 2003 12:17 pm Post subject: Confrontations |
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Nameless wrote: |
But I wonder why Beka did not tell her that the Clinic does not perform abotrions. From the scene back when the question came up, it seemed as if that was a pretty clear policy that they could (and would) tell anyone. |
This is true. However, if you try to gather how the situation was going down from Beka's point of view, you can see that she was becoming suspicious of the other femme's questioning, or at least she was following her instincts that said that something wasn't quite right. She was hesitant in answering, in part because she didn't want to incur any legal trouble-- especially when you think that it's only been about 2-3 weeks since they've had to mention this to anyone- and then, *that* fur died; what if the questioning femme was somehow connected with an attorney for the young femme's parents?-- and she was also hesitant because she didn't want to say anything that could be used against the clinic.
Then of course, there is the additional need for doctor-patient confidentiality. She's not a doctor, but if she were to blab about what procedures and services that the clinic performs for its patients, that *could* run the risk of eventually compromising that confidentiality. As the director, it is her job to look out not only for the patients, but for the clinic as well.
But Mike is right. Now the mouse femme is armed with what she believes is damning information. We'll just have to see how this plays out, won't we?
-Shirh Khan _________________ "Life is not for the faint of heart. Live a little!!"
-said Shirh to his brother, Elijah |
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Nameless Site Owner
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Posted: Sat Nov 29, 2003 6:34 pm Post subject: |
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Sure, the situation was difficult. But just because of it, I think that an answer of "We don't gernerally perform abortions." (or soemthing like that) would not have impinged on any patient's confidentiality without lying or letting herself open to any legal action.
But she did not know who the femme asking the questions was (the way the readers do). She would probably have reacted differently if she had.
I'm still wondering why she talked about such things in public in the entrance hall and did not take the mouse to her office and talk to her there. _________________ I'm a nut, but there are those who appreciate me for it. |
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Shirh Khan Site Owner
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Posted: Sat Nov 29, 2003 8:55 pm Post subject: Confidentiality |
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Well, Beka didn't take the mouse into her office for a couple of reasons:
1) The other femme didn't seem as though she needed to speak privately with her;
2) She didn't consider the fact that the mouse femme would ask any questions that would be best answered in private.
And you're right- a general answer would have been well within her ability to give; but she seemed to catch the confrontational stance of the mouse from her earlier questions, and she was less inclined to answer the femme after that; that is, for some, "human" nature.
The way Beka answered isn't indicative of who she is, though, but more of how she happened to respond to that particular situation at that particular moment. Sometimes we don't all respond to an event the way we might in hindsight imagine we should have. Nevertheless, the 'damage' has been done... or is that begun?
-Shirh Khan _________________ "Life is not for the faint of heart. Live a little!!"
-said Shirh to his brother, Elijah |
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Wolf Starchaser Registered User
Joined: 18 Apr 2001 Posts: 89 Location: Northeast Oklahoma
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Posted: Sun Nov 30, 2003 5:03 pm Post subject: |
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I am once again in awe of your talents, Shirh.
Quote: | Chain Reaction (n.)
1. A series of events in which each induces or influences the next.
2. Physics. A multistage nuclear reaction, especially a self-sustaining series of fissions in which the release of neutrons from the splitting of one atom leads to the splitting of others.
3. Chemistry. A series of reactions in which one product of a reacting set is a reactant in the following set.
(Thanks to Dictionary.com) |
Ladies, Gentlemen, and Diverse Others, all Hell is now out for Noon. You have until the next chapter to reach Minimum Safe Distance. _________________ "For a man to help others with all his gifts and native strength: that is the noblest work." - Sophocles
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Wolf Starchaser Registered User
Joined: 18 Apr 2001 Posts: 89 Location: Northeast Oklahoma
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Posted: Sun Nov 30, 2003 5:17 pm Post subject: Re: Hey!! |
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Shirh Khan wrote: | Q'plah!
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Batlth DaqawIu'taH.
BortaS bIr jabIu'DI'reH QaQqu'ney.
:robot: _________________ "For a man to help others with all his gifts and native strength: that is the noblest work." - Sophocles
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Pat The Fox Moderator
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Posted: Sun Nov 30, 2003 5:45 pm Post subject: |
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Arooo? _________________ Pat The Fox
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Wolf Starchaser Registered User
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Posted: Mon Dec 01, 2003 2:40 am Post subject: |
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Just testing the Geek Factor of the forum.
EDIT: 02Dec 2320hrs:
It would appear that I have, with my linguistic legerdermain, killed the thread. *sigh* I hate it when that happens.
Phrase #1: "You will be remembered with Honor."
Phrase #2: "Vengeance is a dish that is best served cold."
We now return you to you regularly scheduled forum. -mas: _________________ "For a man to help others with all his gifts and native strength: that is the noblest work." - Sophocles
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Shadu Registered User
Joined: 21 May 2003 Posts: 336 Location: Barranquilla
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Posted: Fri Jan 02, 2004 2:34 pm Post subject: |
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HA! why is it that evrey time i look for something to ad in a discusion on a forum i find it finished? well nottin i can do bout it so here i'll just ask this for all those authors i like so much(and luckly are mostle gathered in the pf forum) have u noticed how in this months(from just before june to right now) the muse system seems to have crashed? im having a hard time finding new chapters in over 24 online novels. now i know life intervines sometimes but i still find it interesting how it seems to have happened to all the good writers i like so much _________________ __________________
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