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Hutch · Posted: Mon Oct 20, 2003 9:45 am Post subject:

This is goin' to get real interesting...

Hutch

Nameless · Posted: Mon Oct 20, 2003 11:37 am Post subject:

Hmmm, this was not something from this chapter...

But I'm wondering if Amari & Sylvia are waiting on Khan to get back into gear or if they will pass him on and move on to the next male on their list. (And who that could be)...

Styx · Posted: Mon Oct 20, 2003 2:52 pm Post subject:

Heh maybe Beau now there's a situation that will cause some laughs. SK as I expected great chapter, you can really push the envelope a few of those scenes were pretty steamy love your work buddy.

Shirh Khan · Posted: Sat Nov 29, 2003 1:37 am Post subject: Chapter 45

Hello All!

It is my priviledge and my pleasure to proclaim that the problem child of prose that my chapter 45 has been, is now prepared, proofread, primed and finally, posted. At any particular point you may peruse the product of my presumed penchant towards publicly praised (though much likely more privately prideful) passages of passion, so long as you remember to portray your ponderings on the PlanetFurry Forum.

Thank you.

-Shirh Khan

Nameless · Posted: Sat Nov 29, 2003 6:11 am Post subject:

Ohhh. That first scene was a good read. Embarassed

A good hot lunch, just what the doctor ordered. (Or was that the nurse?) Twisted Evil

I only wish I could get some quality sexual harrasment like that where I work. Sad

The other things that happened were not so good. That scene with the femme from the church did not play out well.
But I wonder why Beka did not tell her that the Clinic does not perform abotrions. From the scene back when the question came up, it seemed as if that was a pretty clear policy that they could (and would) tell anyone. Did Khan not cominucate this policy to his staff or has Khan changed his mind on this issue.

Smile

At least the question of Amari's plans for Khan was cleared up.

Another death that he feels responsible for. Mad

Nameless · Posted: Sat Nov 29, 2003 7:41 am Post subject:

I just can't stop thinking about this when I read that first scene:
http://npc.keenspace.com/d/20030615.html

Shirh Khan · Posted: Sat Nov 29, 2003 12:17 pm Post subject: Confrontations

Nameless · Posted: Sat Nov 29, 2003 6:34 pm Post subject:

Sure, the situation was difficult. But just because of it, I think that an answer of "We don't gernerally perform abortions." (or soemthing like that) would not have impinged on any patient's confidentiality without lying or letting herself open to any legal action.

But she did not know who the femme asking the questions was (the way the readers do). She would probably have reacted differently if she had.

I'm still wondering why she talked about such things in public in the entrance hall and did not take the mouse to her office and talk to her there.

Shirh Khan · Posted: Sat Nov 29, 2003 8:55 pm Post subject: Confidentiality

Well, Beka didn't take the mouse into her office for a couple of reasons:
1) The other femme didn't seem as though she needed to speak privately with her;
2) She didn't consider the fact that the mouse femme would ask any questions that would be best answered in private.
And you're right- a general answer would have been well within her ability to give; but she seemed to catch the confrontational stance of the mouse from her earlier questions, and she was less inclined to answer the femme after that; that is, for some, "human" nature.
The way Beka answered isn't indicative of who she is, though, but more of how she happened to respond to that particular situation at that particular moment. Sometimes we don't all respond to an event the way we might in hindsight imagine we should have. Nevertheless, the 'damage' has been done... or is that begun? Twisted Evil

-Shirh Khan

Wolf Starchaser · Posted: Sun Nov 30, 2003 5:03 pm Post subject:

I am once again in awe of your talents, Shirh.

Wolf Starchaser · Posted: Sun Nov 30, 2003 5:17 pm Post subject: Re: Hey!!

Pat The Fox · Posted: Sun Nov 30, 2003 5:45 pm Post subject:

Arooo?

Wolf Starchaser · Posted: Mon Dec 01, 2003 2:40 am Post subject:

Just testing the Geek Factor of the forum. Cool

EDIT: 02Dec 2320hrs:

It would appear that I have, with my linguistic legerdermain, killed the thread. *sigh* I hate it when that happens.

Phrase #1: "You will be remembered with Honor."
Phrase #2: "Vengeance is a dish that is best served cold."

We now return you to you regularly scheduled forum. Mad

-mas:

Shadu · Posted: Fri Jan 02, 2004 2:34 pm Post subject:

HA!

why is it that evrey time i look for something to ad in a discusion on a forum i find it finished? well nottin i can do bout it so here i'll just ask this for all those authors i like so much(and luckly are mostle gathered in the pf forum) have u noticed how in this months(from just before june to right now) the muse system seems to have crashed? im having a hard time finding new chapters in over 24 online novels. now i know life intervines sometimes but i still find it interesting how it seems to have happened to all the good writers i like so much Wink