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TVDAVE · Posted: Sun Oct 13, 2002 1:21 pm Post subject:

Khan, that was great, both chapters , and behing closed doors, all I can say is WOW, I need to find one of the vixens now, will be back later, Wink

Concolor · Posted: Sun Oct 13, 2002 6:04 pm Post subject:

Sunday night has arrived, HUZZAH!

A very intimate chapter. Soul-baring, to say the least. I wonder what it would take to translate that into reality, hmm? I think Carmen could die happy. Very Happy

I can see the pressure building in her to the point that she might very well do something concrete about it. Won't that be a hoot?

Beautiful work, as always.

Thank you!

Fishburne · Posted: Mon Oct 14, 2002 4:39 pm Post subject:

great. Just great.
I have to leave for the weekend, and not only did a new SK chapter get loaded, I have to read this WHILE I am still half awake.

My feelings to be posted shortly.
if I am coherent.

OK, day two after the drive from HELL...Hell...hell...ell

Having read the Chapter lovely chapter, I must ask the following question.

Who taught you to write bodice-ripping stories man?

This ain't even fair to the rest of us amatuers.

and then I read Chapter 32 (BCD edition).

Shocked

uhhhh...heh heh...uhhh...

Shirh Khan · Posted: Wed Oct 23, 2002 9:24 pm Post subject:

I'll make it quick and clean:

Unfortunate news: my Muse is apparently on vacation, and not here to crack the whip like she normally does. The result: Chapter 33 will be delayed a few days. I expect to have it completed, edited, and posted either on or before Wednesday, Oct. 30/2002.

*sigh*
Now, back to your regularly scheduled chapter speculation.....

-Shirh Khan

Wolf Starchaser · Posted: Thu Oct 24, 2002 12:48 am Post subject: Delays, delays...

Take as long as you need, bud. We'll be here when you're done.

Better a little delay than you feeling rushed and burned out.

Cool

Chris Regan · Posted: Sun Oct 27, 2002 11:48 am Post subject:

Hi all, Sorry I haven't been around, but my muse has had me chaind to my key board writing a story, she is a slave driver even has her own whip, chair and union card.

Sorry to hear Khan's is on vacation, I think the two of them went to the same school.

I am lean to the by side sexually and I have read both Carmen's Wish (Unsensword verstion) and Moon Light If you haven't read them, as Uncle Cage would say I suggest you do. They are well written, I really enjoyed them Khan.

Shirh Khan · Posted: Sun Oct 27, 2002 1:43 pm Post subject: Return of the Muse

Thank you, Chris, for the praise of my Behind Closed Doors stories; I'm glad you liked them.

My Muse has returned! Very Happy

She came back late Friday night, and immediately lashed me with the cat-o-nine tails, pouring into the crevises of my grey matter the much needed material for chapter 33- including a lot of stuff I hadn't heretofore considered- hence my comment about the Amazing Growing Chapter (TM). I'm about 85% done with it now, and I should be finished with it tonight. Then it'll be off to the editors, and with luck I'll be able to post it by late Monday night!

Okay- back to work I go.
<<Yes, I'd love to put something there where that whip was but not right now! Can't you keep your mind out of the gutter for just a few hours? No, I don't wanna know what you and the other Muses did on your vacation. Wait, you did *what?* Is that possible? and she tasted-- No, stop it! I'm trying to work! <<

-Shirh Khan

Shirh Khan · Posted: Mon Oct 28, 2002 11:34 am Post subject: Better late than never....

And here it is, finally- chapter 33 is finished!!! (Was finished last night, but I was too tired to post news on that, then.) It's in my editors' paws, and should post later today!

Hope you furs will enjoy this one! Smile

-Shirh Khan

Concolor · Posted: Mon Oct 28, 2002 12:05 pm Post subject:

Who are your editors, and who needs bribing/cajoling/threatening? Laughing

We are still WAITING and WAITING and waiting and waiting and .........

Cateagle · Posted: Tue Oct 29, 2002 5:43 am Post subject:

The second editor spent last night "spiffying up" his resume for a job fair with what appear, so far, to be good results. Editting efforts tonight were complicated by a friend's need of a friendly ear/shoulder for support.

In any case, the editting is done and the appropriate file has been sent to Shirh Khan for his final cleanup.

Cheers yall,
Cateagle

Wolf Starchaser · Posted: Tue Oct 29, 2002 3:49 pm Post subject:

Shirh Khan · Posted: Tue Oct 29, 2002 4:40 pm Post subject: Post Time

Well, I'm in the process of posting the story now, even as we speak, so it'll be up for reading within the next hour- certainly before 5pm, here on the East Coast (it's just shy of 4pm, right now, as I type)- so look for it, and enjoy!

P.S.- Concolor- you're one of my pre-readers, but when I don't get the chance to hear from them much, I assume they're too busy, and I don't send out a copy to pre-read unless I know they'll be able to get to it, and PDQ, too! *lol* No harm, though- I'll make sure you get a pre-read of the next chapter.

-Shirh Khan

Pat The Fox · Posted: Tue Oct 29, 2002 8:55 pm Post subject:

A nice chapter. Its good to see alot of situations unfolding so well.

I think the way simon is coping is better because if he locks it up inside he's going to end up like Dr. Kahn.

The healing has started for Beca and John. He's realizing his wrongs and taking steps to prevent it.

Cateagle · Posted: Tue Oct 29, 2002 9:54 pm Post subject:

Nameless · Posted: Wed Oct 30, 2002 2:57 am Post subject:

Very good Chapter. Smile

The interaction between Simon and Lupe was interesting. For a while I was worried. It would just not feel right if Lupe gave up her relationship with Lita and Jazzy. But it is good that Simon has a shoulder to cry on.

Khan is getting very close to breaking up.
Twisted Evil

Just my dirty mind kicking in, but what if he finally broke gown while he is with all the femmes who are interested in him? Shocked

Might have to be posted on KAB, but should be quite a read. Surprised

Good to see Beka's relationship finally going uphill, even if they are still at the bottom. Smile