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PostPosted: Tue Apr 30, 2002 9:19 pm    Post subject: Sabrina Cubed Reply with quote

The prologue is up for the next story arc.. Our Heroines lives go on, without the companionship of one, she lies on the edge of forever and it just might take a miracle to save her.

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PostPosted: Mon Aug 26, 2002 2:57 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

I've just read Chapter 3 - very interesting!

I look forward to seeing how these two disparate storylines connect. (Since I doubt any of our lady-friends are an Organic of the necessary power...)

...and if that confused you, then you haven't read it. Go! Do it! Laughing

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PostPosted: Mon Aug 26, 2002 3:09 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

I can only agree with Kinsfire. I think we can say that with this story ands this chapter Cheetaur has done it again.

Great work Cheets! Let's get into the details when the others have read it Smile

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PostPosted: Tue Aug 27, 2002 8:07 pm    Post subject: Chapter 3 Reply with quote

Heh, you ain't seen nuthin' yet... Since I help edit the beast, I can safely say it gets even better. He is actually much farther along than Chapter 3 but he is doing a lot of rewrite. Be patient and enjoy the ride.

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PostPosted: Tue Aug 27, 2002 10:24 pm    Post subject: Blushing Reply with quote

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Wow thanks guys.....chapter 3 took a lot of doing but i think its one of my better ones.....Smile

Thanks for all the kind comments......Smile

Every single one is appreciated.......helps me write the next one...Smile

Which if you're a Heather fan.....it should delight....

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PostPosted: Wed Aug 28, 2002 7:25 am    Post subject: Re: Blushing Reply with quote

mfwhite wrote:
Embarassed

Wow thanks guys.....chapter 3 took a lot of doing but i think its one of my better ones.....Smile

Thanks for all the kind comments......Smile

Every single one is appreciated.......helps me write the next one...Smile

Which if you're a Heather fan.....it should delight....

Cheetaur


My only comment to this is - WOOHOO!

*ahem* - sorry about that...

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PostPosted: Fri Aug 30, 2002 8:47 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Laughing Ahhh the touch of an old love, spurs the soul on , I wanna go live in cloud city, it seams like a cool place to be, so will Afarin and Kira hook back up? would be nice, and of course the hatchling making its presents known at the end of the chapter, yep nothing but the feel of warm puke in the morning, its gotta be love, hehehehe

good stuff Cheetaur, I had a good lunch with this Laughing but will the hatchling be ok?

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PostPosted: Fri Aug 30, 2002 11:34 am    Post subject: Master Weaver? Reply with quote

mfwhite wrote:
Wow thanks guys.....chapter 3 took a lot of doing but i think its one of my better ones.....Smile

Thanks for all the kind comments......Smile

Every single one is appreciated.......helps me write the next one...Smile


This is one of the most dissimilar story threads I have ever read. I am MOST curious on how you will weave these into a cohesive tapestry.

I like! Please continue!

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PostPosted: Fri Aug 30, 2002 11:13 pm    Post subject: Chapter 3 Reply with quote

Hey Guys TV Dave, Bearion,

Thanks for the cool comments, its those letters that keep me writing Wink

As to meshing the two stories, well its all in my head at the moment but i hope it will meld as well as i think it will......i hope....lets cross our fingers and pray huh....Smile

As for Kira and Afain.....stay tuned.....they have a lot to catch up on.

Seems they, pinned for each other, not knowing how each other felt down deep.

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PostPosted: Sat Aug 31, 2002 3:39 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Well, my favorite part of this chapter is the first one. Mostly because it features Swallow Wink

I hope to see her again soon.

Of course, the rest os great too. The Zargozians are a facinating society. I really hope Afain is well.

Of course, the main question still is: How the heck are these 2 plots going to connect. I'm pretty sure they will and I know that Cheetaur will be able to do that but I have abolutely NO idea how he's gonna do that Smile

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PostPosted: Tue Sep 17, 2002 8:16 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

And a nice one it is...

But... tell me; are girl-talks always that... explicit?

Looking forward to the next chapter...

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PostPosted: Tue Sep 17, 2002 9:38 am    Post subject: Thanks Anthony Reply with quote

I dunno about all conversations but this one really got me interested in hearing more of them......Wink

Sorry the chapter wasn't all that exciting........Sad

Oh well you can rise up out of your chair next chapter to boo and hiss .......you know who returns.......

Oops said too much already......<sneaks away>

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PostPosted: Tue Sep 17, 2002 10:24 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

I have been around girls who trusted me enough to have girl talks while I was in the room. The answer to your question, Anthony, is yes.

Heinlein got it right when he said that most men would faint if he heard the way women talk to each other. Laughing

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PostPosted: Tue Sep 17, 2002 1:50 pm    Post subject: WOOT! Reply with quote

Now thats-a SPICY Meat-a-ball!


Killer chapter. VERY nicely done with the workout suggestions.



WOOT!

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PostPosted: Tue Sep 17, 2002 2:04 pm    Post subject: It all in the.... Reply with quote

Hey Fishburne,

Thanks for the comments........sometime i get so down on myself that nothing i write well seems.........ah right.....Sad

The part you describe was done with some clever editing by Evan Mayerle and Mike Regan........actually from all the comments it seems to have gone over way better than what i had originally had done......so hats off to them.

I know the whole chapter wasn't the most thrilling but it did move the plot along.........Wink

Poor Charley.......he trying to save himself if he can......seems like his family is willing to give him that chance..........learning to stop hating is a difficult part of life sometimes.......Sad

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