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Nameless
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Anybody know where one can get the latest chapter in html?
The "Fans of Sabrina Online" has not been updated (yet). |
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Fishburne
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| Posted: Tue Sep 17, 2002 2:48 pm Post subject: Re: It all in the.... |
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| mfwhite wrote: | Hey Fishburne,
Thanks for the comments........sometime i get so down on myself that nothing i write well seems.........ah right.....
The part you describe was done with some clever editing by Evan Mayerle and Mike Regan........actually from all the comments it seems to have gone over way better than what i had originally had done......so hats off to them.
I know the whole chapter wasn't the most thrilling but it did move the plot along.........
Poor Charley.......he trying to save himself if he can......seems like his family is willing to give him that chance..........learning to stop hating is a difficult part of life sometimes.......
Cheetaur |
my pleasure!!!
Charley has been given another chance it seems. And his family is responding!!! Better late than never!!!!
Keep going man! we're all behind you on this!!!
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| Posted: Tue Sep 17, 2002 7:52 pm Post subject: Re: It all in the.... |
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| mfwhite wrote: |
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The part you describe was done with some clever editing by Evan Mayerle and Mike Regan........actually from all the comments it seems to have gone over way better than what i had originally had done......so hats off to them.
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Credit where credit is due, mostly Mike's work; I merely did some fine-tuning on what he'd already put together.
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Nameless
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| Posted: Wed Sep 18, 2002 4:50 pm Post subject: |
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Not much action, but I liked the chapter. I like the "explicit suggestiveness", how blunt and expressive one can talk about something without using any of the "proper" words.  |
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mfwhite
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| Posted: Wed Sep 18, 2002 9:22 pm Post subject: Suggestive......;) |
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Hey Nameless......glad to have you along....
I appreciate all comments.....
Yeah....I thought a good little talk would be a good ice breaker...seems it did the job......and the story was better for it.
I know not a lot of action.....but i promise that Chapter 5 will have you on the edge of your seat by the end.....well i think it will anyway.....
Cheetaur
And may I say again thanks for reading it makes me really happy to know that something i've done entertains someone...
Oh BTW Nameless did you happen by the story or did someone mention it to you.....just curious
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Nameless
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| Posted: Thu Sep 19, 2002 1:52 am Post subject: |
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"Icebreaker" is a good one, that was more like a blast furnance.
Two or three months ago I stumbled accross "Sabrina the story", since then I've been busy following links.
Somewhen I found the Raccoon's bookshelf. I don't like reading the PDFs, but once I found the TOTS in HTML, I had to continue with Sabby^2 and Sabby^3....
BTW, if Zig Zag is still in Canada I'm sure she would have an offer for Hector. |
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mfwhite
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| Posted: Fri Sep 20, 2002 1:33 am Post subject: Blast furnace.......owch that smarts.......;) |
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Hi Nameless,
OOh you read em all ..........  ALL RIGHT !!!!!!!!! THANKS!!!!!!
What you think of em......????
Just a curious author..... HEHEHEHE
Hec would politely turn ZZ down.....for he wants to have his own fun with his new love........
Got a real good start on Chapter 5 : Lazarus Syndrome.
Revelations galore......
I promise this board should light up after i post that one.....
Woo hoo.....said too much already........
Write soon .......
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Nameless
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| Posted: Fri Sep 20, 2002 4:03 am Post subject: |
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| Nameless wrote: | | ...I had to continue with Sabby^2 and Sabby^3.... |
Would'nt say that if I did not like them. 
I you continue with the pace of the cloning, by Sabby^5 half the population of the US will be Sabby clones... and the other half will be male. |
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Tygon
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| Posted: Fri Sep 20, 2002 7:28 pm Post subject: |
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| Nameless wrote: | | Nameless wrote: | | ...I had to continue with Sabby^2 and Sabby^3.... |
Would'nt say that if I did not like them.
I you continue with the pace of the cloning, by Sabby^5 half the population of the US will be Sabby clones... and the other half will be male. |
Genetically a nightmare but should be in interesting sight
In case I haven't already said it, I greatly enjoyed this chapter. Great work, Cheets!
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mfwhite
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| Posted: Fri Sep 20, 2002 7:56 pm Post subject: I think i'm a clone now |
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Hey i guess its ok to be a black and white skunk babe......
Thanks for reading all my stories Nameless......
Everyone.......
Thanks Tygon.....
I tired...
Cheetaur
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Kinsfire
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| Posted: Sat Sep 21, 2002 12:56 am Post subject: |
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Let's see, half the world clones of a particularly beautiful and sexy skunkette...where's the problem with that?
Kinsfire
In case I haven't said it before, Cheetaur - excellent job!
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mfwhite
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| Posted: Sat Sep 21, 2002 7:35 pm Post subject: Its a Sabby World Afterall |
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Thanks for the praise.....i'll take everyone i can get.......
As for Sabbies everywhere.......I wouldn't object to that...
All though if they got mad all it once it would be a stinky world after all......
Chapter 5 is working out good........
Should have it for you next week sometime...
Cheetaur
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Nameless
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| Posted: Sun Sep 22, 2002 4:47 am Post subject: Re: Its a Sabby World Afterall |
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| mfwhite wrote: |
Chapter 5 is working out good........
Should have it for you next week sometime... |
Nice, oops have to wipe the drool off my kyboard... 
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mfwhite
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| Posted: Mon Sep 23, 2002 7:18 pm Post subject: Drool......well you might be.... |
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You might just be pretty upset with me after this one......
It ends very disturbingly........
Cheetaur
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mfwhite
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| Posted: Tue Sep 24, 2002 3:05 am Post subject: OK thats it i have now certainly.... |
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come to the conclusion that i should have get away tickets after i post chapter 5
Yup......they'll never find me......ahhaahah
ooh i hate being evil.....
Cheetaur
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